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- Qualité de l’écriture
- Stabilité des mises à jour
- Développement de l’histoire
- Conception des personnages
- Contexte du monde
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Gud book. Keep going. Support will be there all the way. Just keep writing because more and more people will come your way. We'll vote for you for the fantasy carnival as that's why you're writing the story.Never give up ur story is interesting
I think that even though this is just the start of the story, it's going to be magically realistic and interesting. Therefore, kudos to the author
The book at this stage is inviting curiosity from young readers. It seems to be a totally unrealistic magical journey. But it also seems to be real. Don't stop updating author. I like this book, I'll support you to do well in the fantasy festival.
Gud book. Keep going. Support will be there all the way. Just keep writing because more and more people will come your way. We'll vote for you for the fantasy carnival as that's why you're writing the story.Never give up ur story is interesting
I think that even though this is just the start of the story, it's going to be magically realistic and interesting. Therefore, kudos to the author
The book at this stage is inviting curiosity from young readers. It seems to be a totally unrealistic magical journey. But it also seems to be real. Don't stop updating author. I like this book, I'll support you to do well in the fantasy festival.