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Overall, this story drags. The FL from the novel world (Bai Xue) shows her true colors from the start—with verbal and physical abuse, yet the author stupidly portrays her as a wilting flower with weak explanations. She even gets involved with the new ML (Li Yu) who willingly goes along with her charade. DUMB!! The set up is ridiculous because Bai Xue uses his “attention” to lord it over Ling’er, which creates more problems since he has two White Lotuses to handle, but he doesn’t effectively do so. What a waste of time and coins.
I just love strong female leads who decided that and is actually doing so. She's no longer a love brained fool and is actually smart. Yeah it's got some good old face slapping and sure the ex hangs around randomly but the current male lead is working all his charm to catch his future wife. Wish it would have more updates but definitely worth the read.
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Unfortunately, it could be good, but its's inexperienced. it has a lost flow, an immature mindset and guideline. It lacks dynamics and robustness.
I’m loving this story. I really don’t want the FL to end up with the ML! He doesn’t seem worthy of her at all!
I felt that the beginning of the book was boring. I was about to remove it from my mibrary but decided to try and continue. Fortunately, the story became better. So, so far, it's not that bad.
MY GOD!!! This is so boring! It was putting me to sleep with these few chapters that don't improve the storyline at all. Sorry, but I give up!!!
am i the only person think this is trashy.......8 chapters I have read only a verbal war....nothing good.....u say a line i counter attack u....such a bore ..............how these days all novels follow this story same story line......u got a chance to rebirth....yaa let's take revenge for host.......why so similar lines...........I miss my old finished novels which can make my reading exciting
This is just a preview of my thoughts on this story. So far I'm REALLY enjoying it. I'm looking forward to it going further! I will give a better review at that time. Author, I'M HOPING YOU'LL GO ALL THE WAY!!!
it's a good thing that this book wasn't picked up till now... sorry author u need to rewrite it ... wasn't hooked at all ...
nothing else but continuous verbal war...unnecessary exaration of plot...also it does not allow to escape from until you rate every dawn thing
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there were a few typos but it's a good story so far so it's easy to look past that. I'd like more chapters to read definitely.
after reading it I think it's not worth at all...the plot is good but the content is not and I think....if anyone wants to read the same plot story the my suggestion is read - "avoid the protoganist" ....I think after reading this(avoid the protoganist) book this one doesn't even stand
How is son, Jun, and mother, Lin, going to live in the future ??? Pretentious fools... Can't wait to see how this plays out 🤣
This book is purely nonsense! This looks like it was written by either a 1st grader who likes to argue about all the nonsense in the world or a semi retard person! No world background, character description almost non existent, and the story development is quite lousy! Every chapters will revolve around the characters going in circles doing their stupid arguments! All in all it's pretty irritating!
After reading these 40 chapters, this book is really good. The FL is hilarious 😂 😃 😄 😁 🤣. I'm left wanting more chapters, 😭 😫. Hope this gets picked, it's good.
I really like the story but it takes many chapters for one day in the story, also every chapters are short but I understand that it was really hard to make stories without mistakes or even translating is also hard but hope that new chapters are long... and I like the main character, she's cool!!!
This is a very hard to read novel. The original FL is too stupid and dumb. And the FL is too free to bicker nonsensically back and forth with the original FL. No proper back ground introduction of the characters and the pacing is too slow. I've read up to almost 20 chapters but they are still going on with nonsensical bickering on the same set/place/time. This is not worth the read, sorry.
Am congratulating myself for giving this novel a chance until its 40th chapter. If I am in the FLs shoes I can’t surely persist in listening to the lengthy trashy talk of tbe white lotus. I can not think of myself having the patience in dealing with that evil kind of a brother or that lousy mother. I will surely be convicted of multiple murders. Hahaha. The FL’s life is so pathetic.
Slow start but honestly does get completely better, I love the slaps and misdirection of verbal back and forth with trashy villain. I really just love this fl who's decided that yes she does like the ml but puts her future first and actually does it. Sure flirting is involved but it's cute and fluffy and i love this. Hopefully the author can update soon please 🙏 🥺
Overall, this story drags. The FL from the novel world (Bai Xue) shows her true colors from the start—with verbal and physical abuse, yet the author stupidly portrays her as a wilting flower with weak explanations. She even gets involved with the new ML (Li Yu) who willingly goes along with her charade. DUMB!! The set up is ridiculous because Bai Xue uses his “attention” to lord it over Ling’er, which creates more problems since he has two White Lotuses to handle, but he doesn’t effectively do so. What a waste of time and coins.
I just love strong female leads who decided that and is actually doing so. She's no longer a love brained fool and is actually smart. Yeah it's got some good old face slapping and sure the ex hangs around randomly but the current male lead is working all his charm to catch his future wife. Wish it would have more updates but definitely worth the read.
Spoiler de révélation Unfortunately, it could be good, but its's inexperienced. it has a lost flow, an immature mindset and guideline. It lacks dynamics and robustness.
I’m loving this story. I really don’t want the FL to end up with the ML! He doesn’t seem worthy of her at all!
I felt that the beginning of the book was boring. I was about to remove it from my mibrary but decided to try and continue. Fortunately, the story became better. So, so far, it's not that bad.
MY GOD!!! This is so boring! It was putting me to sleep with these few chapters that don't improve the storyline at all. Sorry, but I give up!!!
am i the only person think this is trashy.......8 chapters I have read only a verbal war....nothing good.....u say a line i counter attack u....such a bore ..............how these days all novels follow this story same story line......u got a chance to rebirth....yaa let's take revenge for host.......why so similar lines...........I miss my old finished novels which can make my reading exciting
This is just a preview of my thoughts on this story. So far I'm REALLY enjoying it. I'm looking forward to it going further! I will give a better review at that time. Author, I'M HOPING YOU'LL GO ALL THE WAY!!!
it's a good thing that this book wasn't picked up till now... sorry author u need to rewrite it ... wasn't hooked at all ...
nothing else but continuous verbal war...unnecessary exaration of plot...also it does not allow to escape from until you rate every dawn thing
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there were a few typos but it's a good story so far so it's easy to look past that. I'd like more chapters to read definitely.
after reading it I think it's not worth at all...the plot is good but the content is not and I think....if anyone wants to read the same plot story the my suggestion is read - "avoid the protoganist" ....I think after reading this(avoid the protoganist) book this one doesn't even stand
How is son, Jun, and mother, Lin, going to live in the future ??? Pretentious fools... Can't wait to see how this plays out 🤣
This book is purely nonsense! This looks like it was written by either a 1st grader who likes to argue about all the nonsense in the world or a semi retard person! No world background, character description almost non existent, and the story development is quite lousy! Every chapters will revolve around the characters going in circles doing their stupid arguments! All in all it's pretty irritating!
After reading these 40 chapters, this book is really good. The FL is hilarious 😂 😃 😄 😁 🤣. I'm left wanting more chapters, 😭 😫. Hope this gets picked, it's good.
I really like the story but it takes many chapters for one day in the story, also every chapters are short but I understand that it was really hard to make stories without mistakes or even translating is also hard but hope that new chapters are long... and I like the main character, she's cool!!!
This is a very hard to read novel. The original FL is too stupid and dumb. And the FL is too free to bicker nonsensically back and forth with the original FL. No proper back ground introduction of the characters and the pacing is too slow. I've read up to almost 20 chapters but they are still going on with nonsensical bickering on the same set/place/time. This is not worth the read, sorry.
Am congratulating myself for giving this novel a chance until its 40th chapter. If I am in the FLs shoes I can’t surely persist in listening to the lengthy trashy talk of tbe white lotus. I can not think of myself having the patience in dealing with that evil kind of a brother or that lousy mother. I will surely be convicted of multiple murders. Hahaha. The FL’s life is so pathetic.
Slow start but honestly does get completely better, I love the slaps and misdirection of verbal back and forth with trashy villain. I really just love this fl who's decided that yes she does like the ml but puts her future first and actually does it. Sure flirting is involved but it's cute and fluffy and i love this. Hopefully the author can update soon please 🙏 🥺