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The story is great. From the sypnosis it's very hookable. I personally would like to thank the author for using the first chapter to actually give of the world that will be behind the curtains. It's actually a very funny and intriguing story possessing the ability of letting the readers actually relate or want to be the characters in the book. God! But I seriously hope I don't get reincarnated into the book since I'm leaving this review. I won't be able to survive. Hahaha! Overall it's a good read. It's not those type of books that would leave you a bit irritated.
Everything is good but the author’s way of writing the story is bit too way around.
Good book, I have read about 20 chaps and I just say that this book has an interesting plot..am awaiting more[img=More pls][img=Loving it][img=update][img=recommend]
This book is absolutely AMAZING!!! 🤩💯 read it for two hours straight and I love it. I await and try to read the author's daily updates, I love this book. What I like most about it is the unique MC. He is the reincarnation of the GOD OF MANA!!! Never heard of this kinda go before... Right? In the book, there kinda a battle between the good of Qo and Supteme dao vs the God of Mana. With God of the energy Mana wanting to be the Strongest person in the fantasy world. It's a bit complicated, making it very interesting! and intriguing!!! But I guess you gotta read to find out more. Guess what am doing now!? Am Reading super thief!!!
Alright I've been wanting to write this review for a few days now but things irl it took this long. First of all, your novel title is really captivating and the general idea of the novel is unique as well. This novel really have a lot of potential as I really like it a lot. Although I suggest you get grammaly for there's a bunch of error in the novel. Please try to change this and update regularly as I will always be reading thank you so much.
I have read up to chap 61, the current latest chapter and I must say that this book is very interesting and apart from a few mistakes, which are on the unedited chapter, there is really no wrong with it. I hope the author continues with the good work.😁🙂
I have been reading this book for a while now, and I must say that it's perfect. From the Synopsis, one should know that the book has a new, unique and interesting concept. Not only that, it is also well written. I love the book and will continue to love it as time passes bye. I highly recommend it. As you can see on the Gif below. Am reading; So no disturbance 🤩😂🤣😁
This story is just everything when it comes to perfection. It has everything that makes a top class story. I highly recommend you to read this story if you want to be thrilled.
good book. I'll admit i was hooked from the synopsis and i love how it's going so far just had to drop this comment and a review. Amazing work author👍🏾
The writing is good, but the pacing was pretty quick in the beginning. it would be nice to see it slow down a little so we can connect deeper with the mc and learn things gradually. :) I'm curious to see how the story continues.
It is not a bad story. I think the main issue is that there are some grammar mistakes, but the novel is far from poorly written. It fits the webnovel criteria, and I wish the author success on their journey.
I love this book so much that i got lost in it. the story pacing is so nice that i didn't expect.
super story. i never see something like that. the author have a lot of originality and the story is really good. i reccommende it to everyone who like to read a good story
The story is great l have ready l few chapters and l like it the creativity the mc is just crazy.The synopsis is like a poem l would like to memorize Please time to read it's likeable.
A very well written and captivating story right here!! This is a must read!! I absolutely enjoyed it.
This is definitely my kind of novel. The MC, Leo, will take everything for himself it doesn't matter what it is. Definitely read if you like stories where the MC takes everything in his path to become the strongest.
A really good concept, the system feels like a huge haxx and the overpowered feeling of the novel is my type of genre, good world building and great grammar also
Great book, love it. The story is great and amazing enough to make the reader loose track of time. I for one was completely hooked. Love the character and expecting more chapters
I think that the story is pretty good. However, I have quite a lot of gripes about the punctuation and capitalization. Sometimes, there's misspelled words. Combined with that, the characters feel a little 2D. Otherwise, it's really your run-of-the-mill webnovel of moderate writing quality and barely comprehensive story beats.
This story has plenty of passion, there is a fire behind every single emotion the character has, experiences, and goes through. The evolution of them as a person is amazing, and a great read for anyone.
Wow! The novel I awesome. I love the MC's personality, it's perfect and beautiful. I can't wait for the next chapters
It's a very interesting concept, but it isn't executed very well in terms of the Grammer the author uses. There are a lot of errors, but that's just a part of learning to write. It's worth a read.
The world-building is really fascinating, and the mc has personality, different from those dumb headed ones. It's a fantastic reading, I've been enjoying reading it.
The story description caught my eye. Very cool plot. There are lots of grammar errors though. I added it to my library. I am hooked. Cool storyline.
This is quite a good novel with a great plot that can be expanded upon further once more time is put into it! I would suggest getting an editor to look over your work and correct a few spelling mistakes, just to make it so anyone can sit down and read this without trying to decipher what's being said :)
Nice idea.Too many grammatical errors, improve on what you have and it'll be a fine piece of work. Hope you keep uploading.............................
I got lost in the story and fell in love with everyone. I want more to this story which to the author don't stop writing and keep up the good work.
I would say the author has a great story in their mind. The world has a compelling background. Definitely worth a read if you enjoy any of the tags used.
I love how each words in the story have meaning such useful information. Also the characters in the story are well-described. I haven't read the full story but I know this is going to be interesting. Soon I will know this by tomorrow but for now I am tired. Hey you reading this, add him in the library. This could brighten his or her day huwahahahah
Shameless Author here. Don't think too much, just add to library and all the fun is Yours. Imagine a person who can steal everything, Talents, affinities, Worlds. Money is still a Small thing. Don't worry about updates, cause it gonna be frequent. When reading don't forget to Vote rate! 👍
The story is great. From the sypnosis it's very hookable. I personally would like to thank the author for using the first chapter to actually give of the world that will be behind the curtains. It's actually a very funny and intriguing story possessing the ability of letting the readers actually relate or want to be the characters in the book. God! But I seriously hope I don't get reincarnated into the book since I'm leaving this review. I won't be able to survive. Hahaha! Overall it's a good read. It's not those type of books that would leave you a bit irritated.
Everything is good but the author’s way of writing the story is bit too way around.
Good book, I have read about 20 chaps and I just say that this book has an interesting plot..am awaiting more[img=More pls][img=Loving it][img=update][img=recommend]
This book is absolutely AMAZING!!! 🤩💯 read it for two hours straight and I love it. I await and try to read the author's daily updates, I love this book. What I like most about it is the unique MC. He is the reincarnation of the GOD OF MANA!!! Never heard of this kinda go before... Right? In the book, there kinda a battle between the good of Qo and Supteme dao vs the God of Mana. With God of the energy Mana wanting to be the Strongest person in the fantasy world. It's a bit complicated, making it very interesting! and intriguing!!! But I guess you gotta read to find out more. Guess what am doing now!? Am Reading super thief!!!
Alright I've been wanting to write this review for a few days now but things irl it took this long. First of all, your novel title is really captivating and the general idea of the novel is unique as well. This novel really have a lot of potential as I really like it a lot. Although I suggest you get grammaly for there's a bunch of error in the novel. Please try to change this and update regularly as I will always be reading thank you so much.
I have read up to chap 61, the current latest chapter and I must say that this book is very interesting and apart from a few mistakes, which are on the unedited chapter, there is really no wrong with it. I hope the author continues with the good work.😁🙂
I have been reading this book for a while now, and I must say that it's perfect. From the Synopsis, one should know that the book has a new, unique and interesting concept. Not only that, it is also well written. I love the book and will continue to love it as time passes bye. I highly recommend it. As you can see on the Gif below. Am reading; So no disturbance 🤩😂🤣😁
This story is just everything when it comes to perfection. It has everything that makes a top class story. I highly recommend you to read this story if you want to be thrilled.
good book. I'll admit i was hooked from the synopsis and i love how it's going so far just had to drop this comment and a review. Amazing work author👍🏾
The writing is good, but the pacing was pretty quick in the beginning. it would be nice to see it slow down a little so we can connect deeper with the mc and learn things gradually. :) I'm curious to see how the story continues.
It is not a bad story. I think the main issue is that there are some grammar mistakes, but the novel is far from poorly written. It fits the webnovel criteria, and I wish the author success on their journey.
I love this book so much that i got lost in it. the story pacing is so nice that i didn't expect.
super story. i never see something like that. the author have a lot of originality and the story is really good. i reccommende it to everyone who like to read a good story
The story is great l have ready l few chapters and l like it the creativity the mc is just crazy.The synopsis is like a poem l would like to memorize Please time to read it's likeable.
A very well written and captivating story right here!! This is a must read!! I absolutely enjoyed it.
This is definitely my kind of novel. The MC, Leo, will take everything for himself it doesn't matter what it is. Definitely read if you like stories where the MC takes everything in his path to become the strongest.
A really good concept, the system feels like a huge haxx and the overpowered feeling of the novel is my type of genre, good world building and great grammar also
Great book, love it. The story is great and amazing enough to make the reader loose track of time. I for one was completely hooked. Love the character and expecting more chapters
I think that the story is pretty good. However, I have quite a lot of gripes about the punctuation and capitalization. Sometimes, there's misspelled words. Combined with that, the characters feel a little 2D. Otherwise, it's really your run-of-the-mill webnovel of moderate writing quality and barely comprehensive story beats.
This story has plenty of passion, there is a fire behind every single emotion the character has, experiences, and goes through. The evolution of them as a person is amazing, and a great read for anyone.
Wow! The novel I awesome. I love the MC's personality, it's perfect and beautiful. I can't wait for the next chapters
It's a very interesting concept, but it isn't executed very well in terms of the Grammer the author uses. There are a lot of errors, but that's just a part of learning to write. It's worth a read.
The world-building is really fascinating, and the mc has personality, different from those dumb headed ones. It's a fantastic reading, I've been enjoying reading it.
The story description caught my eye. Very cool plot. There are lots of grammar errors though. I added it to my library. I am hooked. Cool storyline.
This is quite a good novel with a great plot that can be expanded upon further once more time is put into it! I would suggest getting an editor to look over your work and correct a few spelling mistakes, just to make it so anyone can sit down and read this without trying to decipher what's being said :)
Nice idea.Too many grammatical errors, improve on what you have and it'll be a fine piece of work. Hope you keep uploading.............................
I got lost in the story and fell in love with everyone. I want more to this story which to the author don't stop writing and keep up the good work.
I would say the author has a great story in their mind. The world has a compelling background. Definitely worth a read if you enjoy any of the tags used.
I love how each words in the story have meaning such useful information. Also the characters in the story are well-described. I haven't read the full story but I know this is going to be interesting. Soon I will know this by tomorrow but for now I am tired. Hey you reading this, add him in the library. This could brighten his or her day huwahahahah
Shameless Author here. Don't think too much, just add to library and all the fun is Yours. Imagine a person who can steal everything, Talents, affinities, Worlds. Money is still a Small thing. Don't worry about updates, cause it gonna be frequent. When reading don't forget to Vote rate! 👍