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pretty after the first few chapters the mc is In the background and it's all about the adventurers
A good read despite some mistakes. Overall, the story is entertaining, and the plot is intriguing.[img=recommend] However, there is room for improvement in wiring skills.This review is long overdue. Lol. But finally decided to post it now that the author is back. I hope the author will give some of his attention to this book and continue it.[img=update]
liked thr writing style just the info dump sometimes is too much coz i am immersed in current situation and boom 3 paras of backstory. i liked it when author specifically did a background of rook the town chef without interrupting my flow. and also mc us good but he doesn't act like a reincarnated(whatever has happened to him) person sometimes. a solid story. out of 10...it is 8.4 for me
A temporary review. Will be changed to better fit the actual story later. The first few chapters so far struggle a lot with keeping the correct tense and overall grammar needs some work. The idea behind a story is most definitely there. Just not applied in the best way. Will edit after 30 Ch. or less if I don’t make it that far…
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Keep it up! Great book I’m heading to boot camp for a few months but you still have my support can’t wait to read the rest when I get back!!
I'm enjoying the story a lot, and I feel that it has great potential, the only annoying part is the slightly messy English and grammar and stuff. Overall though I'm really enjoying this and I do understand the overall gist of what's happening even with the not so great English lol, it's good. I find it enjoyable.
great start to the book . a different style of writing book. there are too many reincarnated in game or game in the reality type novels . but this one stands out like sore thumb. sore thumb is just an analogy, don't take it to heart. overall it's entertaining to read . this review is after i read 25 chapters
Author here and my shameless review. I just want to interact with readers, so if you have suggestions and the like, or anything to say, don't hesitate to drop a comment. Criticizing my work is welcome as well xoxo I know, I know it has info dumps in the first 20 chapters but I hope you give it a try.
pretty after the first few chapters the mc is In the background and it's all about the adventurers
A good read despite some mistakes. Overall, the story is entertaining, and the plot is intriguing.[img=recommend] However, there is room for improvement in wiring skills.This review is long overdue. Lol. But finally decided to post it now that the author is back. I hope the author will give some of his attention to this book and continue it.[img=update]
liked thr writing style just the info dump sometimes is too much coz i am immersed in current situation and boom 3 paras of backstory. i liked it when author specifically did a background of rook the town chef without interrupting my flow. and also mc us good but he doesn't act like a reincarnated(whatever has happened to him) person sometimes. a solid story. out of 10...it is 8.4 for me
A temporary review. Will be changed to better fit the actual story later. The first few chapters so far struggle a lot with keeping the correct tense and overall grammar needs some work. The idea behind a story is most definitely there. Just not applied in the best way. Will edit after 30 Ch. or less if I don’t make it that far…
Spoiler de révélation Keep it up! Great book I’m heading to boot camp for a few months but you still have my support can’t wait to read the rest when I get back!!
I'm enjoying the story a lot, and I feel that it has great potential, the only annoying part is the slightly messy English and grammar and stuff. Overall though I'm really enjoying this and I do understand the overall gist of what's happening even with the not so great English lol, it's good. I find it enjoyable.
great start to the book . a different style of writing book. there are too many reincarnated in game or game in the reality type novels . but this one stands out like sore thumb. sore thumb is just an analogy, don't take it to heart. overall it's entertaining to read . this review is after i read 25 chapters
Author here and my shameless review. I just want to interact with readers, so if you have suggestions and the like, or anything to say, don't hesitate to drop a comment. Criticizing my work is welcome as well xoxo I know, I know it has info dumps in the first 20 chapters but I hope you give it a try.