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Es muy divertido, no hay otra novela igual. Por favor actualiza autor🙏, llevo esperando como un año 😭
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Gave it a 5/5 not because it "deserves" that rating, just because of the sheer number of people giving 1/5 based on the tags alone. (So I'm doing the opposite. Haven't read it, but I'm raising the score to balance the scales.)
so good, don't feels like NTR since the husband has 10s of screentime anywayㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤ
MEUS OLHOS AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH
Spoiler de révélation
Honestly, I only clicked on this heresy because I was doubting that something like this really existed, but now that I know that there really are people who make fics like this, on pure principle I have to give it a one star comment, it would probably be better to just ignore it, but meh. --------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------
if thererqerreeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee eeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee
Good perverted novel, Many say it is NTR but this is more blackmail, the system blackmails her emotionally and her options are adultery, but she refuses from the beginning, but she has no other options, it is to die or survive.
really enjoying it want to see where it goes.all the ntr's and 1stars need to f off, just cause it's not their cup of tea doesn't mean that everyone thinks that!!
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Update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please
No. Die. Die, die, Die, die, die, die, die, Die, die, die, die, die,Die, die, die, die, die, Die, die, die, die, die, Die, die, die, die, die. die, die, die, Die, die, die, die, die,Die, die, die, die, die, Die, die, die, die, die, Die, die, die, die, die.
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this is no good. HARAM!!! HARAM!!! HARAM!!! HARAAAM!!!! HARAAM!! HARAAM!! HARAAM! HARAAM! HARAAM ! HARAAM ! HARAAM HARAAAAAM!. haram haram haraam haram
...........................................................................................................................................................................NTR
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I don't like harems, but I hate NTR even more .......................°°°°°°[{]{]{]§{{§§{§°§§°∆]]{]{]{]]{]{]{ аооалплалплплалплплпллплплплплплтпаттата
NTR NTR NTR NTR NTR NTR NTR NTR NTR NTR NTR NTR NTR NTR NTR NTR NTR NTR NTR NTR NTR NTR NTR NTR
I don’t want to say anything but If some girl or lady's want have fun, go have fun. plz, don’t go with Ntr.
Trash __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
yeah that's what I'm talking about that's what it's always been about let's go baby
The first realistic NTR fic. .. the simple fact is that a mother will do anything for their kids survival. And endorphins are a thing and reinforced by gifts by the system encourages this behaviour. Happy fellow perverts for reasons! !? ? Xd. .update more bruh. .don't wanna waste stones if you r not updating! ! lol
Es muy divertido, no hay otra novela igual. Por favor actualiza autor🙏, llevo esperando como un año 😭
👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎
Gave it a 5/5 not because it "deserves" that rating, just because of the sheer number of people giving 1/5 based on the tags alone. (So I'm doing the opposite. Haven't read it, but I'm raising the score to balance the scales.)
so good, don't feels like NTR since the husband has 10s of screentime anywayㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤ
MEUS OLHOS AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH
Spoiler de révélation Honestly, I only clicked on this heresy because I was doubting that something like this really existed, but now that I know that there really are people who make fics like this, on pure principle I have to give it a one star comment, it would probably be better to just ignore it, but meh. --------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------
if thererqerreeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee eeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee
Good perverted novel, Many say it is NTR but this is more blackmail, the system blackmails her emotionally and her options are adultery, but she refuses from the beginning, but she has no other options, it is to die or survive.
really enjoying it want to see where it goes.all the ntr's and 1stars need to f off, just cause it's not their cup of tea doesn't mean that everyone thinks that!!
Good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good
Update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please
No. Die. Die, die, Die, die, die, die, die, Die, die, die, die, die,Die, die, die, die, die, Die, die, die, die, die, Die, die, die, die, die. die, die, die, Die, die, die, die, die,Die, die, die, die, die, Die, die, die, die, die, Die, die, die, die, die.
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this is no good. HARAM!!! HARAM!!! HARAM!!! HARAAAM!!!! HARAAM!! HARAAM!! HARAAM! HARAAM! HARAAM ! HARAAM ! HARAAM HARAAAAAM!. haram haram haraam haram
...........................................................................................................................................................................NTR
Spoiler de révélation Why not ?Why not ?Why not ?Why not ?Why not ?Why not ?Why not ?Why not ?Why not ?Why not ?Why not ?Why not ?Why not ?Why not ?Why not ?Why not ?Why not ?Why not ?Why not ?Why not ?Why not ?Why not ?Why not ?Why not ?
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I don't like harems, but I hate NTR even more .......................°°°°°°[{]{]{]§{{§§{§°§§°∆]]{]{]{]]{]{]{ аооалплалплплалплплпллплплплплплтпаттата
NTR NTR NTR NTR NTR NTR NTR NTR NTR NTR NTR NTR NTR NTR NTR NTR NTR NTR NTR NTR NTR NTR NTR NTR
I don’t want to say anything but If some girl or lady's want have fun, go have fun. plz, don’t go with Ntr.
Trash __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
yeah that's what I'm talking about that's what it's always been about let's go baby
The first realistic NTR fic. .. the simple fact is that a mother will do anything for their kids survival. And endorphins are a thing and reinforced by gifts by the system encourages this behaviour. Happy fellow perverts for reasons! !? ? Xd. .update more bruh. .don't wanna waste stones if you r not updating! ! lol
NTR