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My first novel ever, I'm just in love with it. The development is just perfect, the ambience is incredible and the characters are lovely!!! I highly recommend it ♥️♥️♥️
I already said plenty about the quality in my review of the first part, and to no surprise, it carries over to this part as well. Things sure do get moving though, and to what I've seen, I'd say "Oh my." Might the description be a clue to why I say that? Might it be an understatement? One way to find out. I made this review as of chapter 92; there's still much to cover (and some things I'm still waiting on to be covered), but hey the story has a ways to go (hopefully).
This series is one of the only novels I'm reading on webnovel because it is one of the best that continues to get me to come back for me. With the first book's rewrite being phenomenal, I look forward to how this second book proceeds as we get further and further along. I'm very interested to learn how the world became how it is as obvious the world was quiet technologically advanced. [img=update][img=update]
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I’ve read the first novel, and am now returning for the second part. Trust me this book is worth your time, it’s everything you’d want out of a novel titled Adventurers Academy. Read it!
Don’t get me wrong I think the first book is fantastic. However, this book takes a massive dip in writing quality after the 1 year time skip. There’s an ungodly overuse of figurative language, the conversations feel bland, a lot of stuff feels like cheap ways to move the plot forward, and half the characters seem to act completely different(from what I remember from the few times some of them were shown). Now obviously I understand that some of the characters would change over the course of a year but it feels more like the author just forgot how the character acts/talk. This has lead me to make the decision to stop reading this book at chapter 99 has it feels like there’s a large drop off in writing quality and it doesn’t seem to be a 1 or 2 chapter thing that’s happening.
Spoiler de révélation My first novel ever, I'm just in love with it. The development is just perfect, the ambience is incredible and the characters are lovely!!! I highly recommend it ♥️♥️♥️
I already said plenty about the quality in my review of the first part, and to no surprise, it carries over to this part as well. Things sure do get moving though, and to what I've seen, I'd say "Oh my." Might the description be a clue to why I say that? Might it be an understatement? One way to find out. I made this review as of chapter 92; there's still much to cover (and some things I'm still waiting on to be covered), but hey the story has a ways to go (hopefully).
This series is one of the only novels I'm reading on webnovel because it is one of the best that continues to get me to come back for me. With the first book's rewrite being phenomenal, I look forward to how this second book proceeds as we get further and further along. I'm very interested to learn how the world became how it is as obvious the world was quiet technologically advanced. [img=update][img=update]
Spoiler de révélation I’ve read the first novel, and am now returning for the second part. Trust me this book is worth your time, it’s everything you’d want out of a novel titled Adventurers Academy. Read it!
Don’t get me wrong I think the first book is fantastic. However, this book takes a massive dip in writing quality after the 1 year time skip. There’s an ungodly overuse of figurative language, the conversations feel bland, a lot of stuff feels like cheap ways to move the plot forward, and half the characters seem to act completely different(from what I remember from the few times some of them were shown). Now obviously I understand that some of the characters would change over the course of a year but it feels more like the author just forgot how the character acts/talk. This has lead me to make the decision to stop reading this book at chapter 99 has it feels like there’s a large drop off in writing quality and it doesn’t seem to be a 1 or 2 chapter thing that’s happening.
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