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Alright, let's get down to it. This is a story about a mysterious individual called Noir. He has an encounter with the daughter of a Duke, Ciara, kick-starting the story and a series of events. I can only be objective to a certain point since it's my book, but I think it's a lovely read for anyone who likes Magic/Fantasy stories. The MC is overpowered. He's calm, collected, observant, mature, and he's not stupid. As for the FL, let's just say she's a work in progress. Many might dislike her at first, but she just might become your favorite character as you progress. As for other side characters like Lorna, Galand, and the many others you'll eventually see... they're pretty solid. Not much World Building takes place in the first Arc, as you'll find out when you read the book, but the story explores various areas—especially in Magic. It's interesting, to be honest. There can be a few flaws, like grammatical errors, but that is also a work in progress. English isn't my primary language, after all... even though I'm pretty good with it. All in all, reviews don't necessarily do a book justice. Read a fee chapters and decide whether you want to continue or not. Cheers!
its pretty good and entertaining but... a homunculus as mc is not my cup of tea...so yeah I'm off... I'll be back again if I am too bored and there is no other better novels or books to read... gluck.
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Okay... I can proudly say this is the first novel on webnovel that I've read with such zeal. I just kept reading chapter after chapter and soon, I found myself immersed in it. It's amazing and even though it's pacing is a little slow, the level of description is amazing. Author should probably do a bit more description on the major characters. It'll help us have an imaginative picture of them while there's no release reference yet.
this novel have some potentials , please don't drop it . wish u some luck mate ............................................................................
Heck yes, I am a hardcore Ml reader. This is honestly a great book in all, great grammar, hooking, and worth reading chapters. But one thing I would say that I am not a fan of is too much info dump🤷.
Mind blowing creativity! 😍 Magacrafter, I look forward to more stories from you. The character design 💯, language use (diction) ✅, and how the conflict raises.
New book, new adventure. Let's see what our amazing Crafter has in stored for us😏
Wow, this is one of the best books I've read this year. The characters are top notch, I would love to see more action from Noir[img=update][img=update][img=update]
As the first true reader of this novel, I can tell you that magecafter doesn't miss, so you should give it a shot. At least based on the first few chapters, the book looks promising. So author-san, keep writing!
Alright, let's get down to it. This is a story about a mysterious individual called Noir. He has an encounter with the daughter of a Duke, Ciara, kick-starting the story and a series of events. I can only be objective to a certain point since it's my book, but I think it's a lovely read for anyone who likes Magic/Fantasy stories. The MC is overpowered. He's calm, collected, observant, mature, and he's not stupid. As for the FL, let's just say she's a work in progress. Many might dislike her at first, but she just might become your favorite character as you progress. As for other side characters like Lorna, Galand, and the many others you'll eventually see... they're pretty solid. Not much World Building takes place in the first Arc, as you'll find out when you read the book, but the story explores various areas—especially in Magic. It's interesting, to be honest. There can be a few flaws, like grammatical errors, but that is also a work in progress. English isn't my primary language, after all... even though I'm pretty good with it. All in all, reviews don't necessarily do a book justice. Read a fee chapters and decide whether you want to continue or not. Cheers!
its pretty good and entertaining but... a homunculus as mc is not my cup of tea...so yeah I'm off... I'll be back again if I am too bored and there is no other better novels or books to read... gluck.
I read this author IM ACTUALLY NOT OVERPOWERED is this good too?[img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp]
Okay... I can proudly say this is the first novel on webnovel that I've read with such zeal. I just kept reading chapter after chapter and soon, I found myself immersed in it. It's amazing and even though it's pacing is a little slow, the level of description is amazing. Author should probably do a bit more description on the major characters. It'll help us have an imaginative picture of them while there's no release reference yet.
this novel have some potentials , please don't drop it . wish u some luck mate ............................................................................
Heck yes, I am a hardcore Ml reader. This is honestly a great book in all, great grammar, hooking, and worth reading chapters. But one thing I would say that I am not a fan of is too much info dump🤷.
Mind blowing creativity! 😍 Magacrafter, I look forward to more stories from you. The character design 💯, language use (diction) ✅, and how the conflict raises.
New book, new adventure. Let's see what our amazing Crafter has in stored for us😏
Wow, this is one of the best books I've read this year. The characters are top notch, I would love to see more action from Noir[img=update][img=update][img=update]
As the first true reader of this novel, I can tell you that magecafter doesn't miss, so you should give it a shot. At least based on the first few chapters, the book looks promising. So author-san, keep writing!