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So... the good first. The story is written quite fantastically and very easy to read and get sucked into. i love the characters Moses and Wednesday are perfectly done. While i have a small problem with Harry being a little on the weak side in character with him being fearful instead of brave. i can understand if u needed it for the overarching storyline. Now for the problems that i knew were coming. When you have so many elements in one universe, such as Marvel or DC. Adding in any other elements and balancing out the universe becomes almost impossible. it becomes chaos. while it becomes also can be interesting the reader needs to have sure footing or battles will seem like they happen constantly danger at every turn no right move for a happy ending no point in the struggle because the fight is futile. Also, if u have so many characters to service, the plot can become laborious to read. with bad guys coming out of the woodwork at random and plot holes glaring at the read ect.. this came to a head when they went into the forbidden forest that whole thing was chaos. We learn so many things and so fast that it is hard to keep up. we lear that some characters are not what they seem and that Voldemort is not the same bad guy and that attack happend in the wizarding world and on and on. it was too much info all at once that it made it seem like a different fanfic all together. So i would caution you to spread out the plot a little more evenly and not thin it to a faint taste before smothering us in it at one point in the next chapters.
I hope the author will post chapters again. ....................................................................................................................................
Book was amazing until the author decided to make this a harem fanfic. Like srsly he started the novel without a harem tag which made me look at the book and then he introduced wednesday addams which is what made me interested and read. I've recently watched the Wednesday series and i love how the author decided to include her in the fic and make her a potential love interest, but then he just had to make a survey whether the readers wanted a harem or no harem. Hayst. Why start a fanfic without any harem tags only to make a survey about anyone wanting a harem and changing the flow of the story. I mean the main reason i even started reading this in the first place was because there was no harem tag and i really hoped there wont be one. Welp i was disappointed when the author eventually decided to have a harem and afterwards i just lost all interest. Fanfic is still good though, just not my cup of tea anymore
it's my First time reading a Harry Potter fanfiction that doesn't start with bashing religion in the first chapter... so yeah it's great, the MC has a OP power but has limits that can overcome and is not a freaking Psychopath or Sociopath. he ffeels like a kid that actually make mistakes and actually learns.
Well the author got the talent for writing but this ff reads like a bed time story for children. i don't know who are your intended audience but too much cringe and fluff for guys like me, anyway good story but not my cup of tea.
Me gusta la historia.. a un q me resultó extraño q añadieras a Merlina pero creo q fue una increíble decisión ya q aporta cosas nuevas alas historia..
found it to be a very good read and am looking forward to what happens next I want 1000 chapters, or more
Good story.really looking forward for upcoming chapters. Hope you update regularly [img=update][img=update][img=update]
good 👍 👍 👍 👍 👍 👍 👍 👍 👍 👍 👍 👍 👍 👍 the most expensive type of golf course is the streamer's name and the underground drillbeon
I'VE NEVER BEEN MORE EXCITED BY THE NEXT UPDATE OF THIS NOVEL. TRULY THE BEST FANFICTION I HAVE READ SO FAR IN MY WHOLE LIFE
if you want to know why skip and read chapter 21, if you don't die of chinge congratulations you have a strong stomach only this chapter lost 3 stars
Good while it lasts It starts with an interesting premise, an innocent and cute OC, but it becomes heavy a bit later and exaggerated with the fans, all to open the way for it to have a harem, interesting reading but it's not my cup of tea to read novels so often with the tag of Harem, the page is over saturated with this topic and it ruins some good FF because the authors can't keep up or over inflate the FF with girls as if it were pokemon and they were doing a living dex This Review is made after the author decided to do a survey and the harem won... what a shame, whatever, to continue browsing in search of a good FF.
Ésto es muy divertido. ..........................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................
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Esta chulo, tambien acabo de ver la serie de Wednesday y no me esperaba verla en un fanfic, pero encaja bien. El prota cae bien, ya aburre un poco cuando los protas se saben la trama y estan entre interferir o no y esas cosas.
Honestly its been a good week to read fanfics. this another gem im happy I've found. There is good origin story, unique considering the numerous amount of hp novels there are. a beautiful twist early on in the story. a great MC. im happy he'll be close to the plot as well. thats where the fun is. The story really has just started and ill probably be a subscriber soon if this quality of writing keeps up. Topnotch writing!
Been a long time since I posted a review on any fanfic, because most of them are someway a rehash after reading thousands of Fanfics. But this one is a slightly different take on the norm. and I especially loved the addition of some characters from other media's making it more interesting and MCs powers are really cool too. Hope the author continues unlike most....Love your story my friend ❤️
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Added Wednesday cast on the fic. Should've mentioned it on the summary. Its not that I don't like it at all, but since I have yet to watch the show I'll be benching this fic for now.
Spoiler de révélation
Entertaining reminds me of another story called I think Harry potter fools or something.
I’m curious you say it’s not a reincarnated or transmigrated person yet one of the tags is self insert sooo a little confusing here but still take my 5/5 stars
Okay I will tell you the truth at first I was a little skeptical about this fanfic as most Marvel×Harry potter fanfic always but my god did I enjoy this fanfic from the start to the bottom it had me entranced that I didn't e ven noticed that I finished reading all the chapters that were there all in all it was an outstanding fanfic.
Seems good so far it's a bit refreshing to have a non-transmigrator. I also really like his power, it looks unapologetically OP which I appreciate. I'm a little tired of books with an Overpowered tag that then goes on to nerf the MC repeatedly rather than set up clear limitations at the start.
Great fic, keep it going. I think the story has a lot of potential ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________
most of the bad rating comes from too many elements mixed in. you wanna do a x-over keep it to just 2 or 3 worlds. this is like when someone takes everything they like to eat and throws it all in a huge pot then boils it. that never turns out well. it is just too much going on and too confusing. all these ideas have merit if you write like 5 or 6 books out of em instead of just one. I will keep looking for the next book you write though, because this shows promise it is just far too jumbled.
So... the good first. The story is written quite fantastically and very easy to read and get sucked into. i love the characters Moses and Wednesday are perfectly done. While i have a small problem with Harry being a little on the weak side in character with him being fearful instead of brave. i can understand if u needed it for the overarching storyline. Now for the problems that i knew were coming. When you have so many elements in one universe, such as Marvel or DC. Adding in any other elements and balancing out the universe becomes almost impossible. it becomes chaos. while it becomes also can be interesting the reader needs to have sure footing or battles will seem like they happen constantly danger at every turn no right move for a happy ending no point in the struggle because the fight is futile. Also, if u have so many characters to service, the plot can become laborious to read. with bad guys coming out of the woodwork at random and plot holes glaring at the read ect.. this came to a head when they went into the forbidden forest that whole thing was chaos. We learn so many things and so fast that it is hard to keep up. we lear that some characters are not what they seem and that Voldemort is not the same bad guy and that attack happend in the wizarding world and on and on. it was too much info all at once that it made it seem like a different fanfic all together. So i would caution you to spread out the plot a little more evenly and not thin it to a faint taste before smothering us in it at one point in the next chapters.
I hope the author will post chapters again. ....................................................................................................................................
Book was amazing until the author decided to make this a harem fanfic. Like srsly he started the novel without a harem tag which made me look at the book and then he introduced wednesday addams which is what made me interested and read. I've recently watched the Wednesday series and i love how the author decided to include her in the fic and make her a potential love interest, but then he just had to make a survey whether the readers wanted a harem or no harem. Hayst. Why start a fanfic without any harem tags only to make a survey about anyone wanting a harem and changing the flow of the story. I mean the main reason i even started reading this in the first place was because there was no harem tag and i really hoped there wont be one. Welp i was disappointed when the author eventually decided to have a harem and afterwards i just lost all interest. Fanfic is still good though, just not my cup of tea anymore
it's my First time reading a Harry Potter fanfiction that doesn't start with bashing religion in the first chapter... so yeah it's great, the MC has a OP power but has limits that can overcome and is not a freaking Psychopath or Sociopath. he ffeels like a kid that actually make mistakes and actually learns.
Well the author got the talent for writing but this ff reads like a bed time story for children. i don't know who are your intended audience but too much cringe and fluff for guys like me, anyway good story but not my cup of tea.
Me gusta la historia.. a un q me resultó extraño q añadieras a Merlina pero creo q fue una increíble decisión ya q aporta cosas nuevas alas historia..
found it to be a very good read and am looking forward to what happens next I want 1000 chapters, or more
Good story.really looking forward for upcoming chapters. Hope you update regularly [img=update][img=update][img=update]
good 👍 👍 👍 👍 👍 👍 👍 👍 👍 👍 👍 👍 👍 👍 the most expensive type of golf course is the streamer's name and the underground drillbeon
I'VE NEVER BEEN MORE EXCITED BY THE NEXT UPDATE OF THIS NOVEL. TRULY THE BEST FANFICTION I HAVE READ SO FAR IN MY WHOLE LIFE
if you want to know why skip and read chapter 21, if you don't die of chinge congratulations you have a strong stomach only this chapter lost 3 stars
Good while it lasts It starts with an interesting premise, an innocent and cute OC, but it becomes heavy a bit later and exaggerated with the fans, all to open the way for it to have a harem, interesting reading but it's not my cup of tea to read novels so often with the tag of Harem, the page is over saturated with this topic and it ruins some good FF because the authors can't keep up or over inflate the FF with girls as if it were pokemon and they were doing a living dex This Review is made after the author decided to do a survey and the harem won... what a shame, whatever, to continue browsing in search of a good FF.
Ésto es muy divertido. ..........................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................
Spoiler de révélation Esta chulo, tambien acabo de ver la serie de Wednesday y no me esperaba verla en un fanfic, pero encaja bien. El prota cae bien, ya aburre un poco cuando los protas se saben la trama y estan entre interferir o no y esas cosas.
Honestly its been a good week to read fanfics. this another gem im happy I've found. There is good origin story, unique considering the numerous amount of hp novels there are. a beautiful twist early on in the story. a great MC. im happy he'll be close to the plot as well. thats where the fun is. The story really has just started and ill probably be a subscriber soon if this quality of writing keeps up. Topnotch writing!
Been a long time since I posted a review on any fanfic, because most of them are someway a rehash after reading thousands of Fanfics. But this one is a slightly different take on the norm. and I especially loved the addition of some characters from other media's making it more interesting and MCs powers are really cool too. Hope the author continues unlike most....Love your story my friend ❤️
I Just love this[img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
Added Wednesday cast on the fic. Should've mentioned it on the summary. Its not that I don't like it at all, but since I have yet to watch the show I'll be benching this fic for now.
Spoiler de révélation Entertaining reminds me of another story called I think Harry potter fools or something.
I’m curious you say it’s not a reincarnated or transmigrated person yet one of the tags is self insert sooo a little confusing here but still take my 5/5 stars
Okay I will tell you the truth at first I was a little skeptical about this fanfic as most Marvel×Harry potter fanfic always but my god did I enjoy this fanfic from the start to the bottom it had me entranced that I didn't e ven noticed that I finished reading all the chapters that were there all in all it was an outstanding fanfic.
Seems good so far it's a bit refreshing to have a non-transmigrator. I also really like his power, it looks unapologetically OP which I appreciate. I'm a little tired of books with an Overpowered tag that then goes on to nerf the MC repeatedly rather than set up clear limitations at the start.
Great fic, keep it going. I think the story has a lot of potential ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________
most of the bad rating comes from too many elements mixed in. you wanna do a x-over keep it to just 2 or 3 worlds. this is like when someone takes everything they like to eat and throws it all in a huge pot then boils it. that never turns out well. it is just too much going on and too confusing. all these ideas have merit if you write like 5 or 6 books out of em instead of just one. I will keep looking for the next book you write though, because this shows promise it is just far too jumbled.