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I have only read 8 Chapters and I know i have no right to comment on things without reading the story further but that's all I'll read. This story's World Background (although not explained till this chapter) has been good and world building and pacing is also good. The Character also has no faults 'According to his Personality'. Now to why I'm dropping this : This Novel's was definitely a good read with little to no grammar mistakes until 8th chapter but its just not to my taste. Or to be more specific I dislike the MC's personality. Although it could be debatable that every logical person would behave that way after suffering such emotional distress but that doesn't matter as i don't like it. Its what it is mate! But I hope you guys enjoy it and maybe he would get a character development in future chapters? (I hope so) but i don't have the patience to read such a Mc as its burning my already non-existent brain cells. Good luck Author as i think the fanbase this Mc's personality is targeted at will like it.Those who like to see a naive Mc go through character development and stuff and like realistic (or as i like to say pathetic-at-the-beginning) Protagonist
Its a great story witch looks prmising in the future. I read to chapter 13 and finde it great. ........... . . . .......
I have only read 8 Chapters and I know i have no right to comment on things without reading the story further but that's all I'll read. This story's World Background (although not explained till this chapter) has been good and world building and pacing is also good. The Character also has no faults 'According to his Personality'. Now to why I'm dropping this : This Novel's was definitely a good read with little to no grammar mistakes until 8th chapter but its just not to my taste. Or to be more specific I dislike the MC's personality. Although it could be debatable that every logical person would behave that way after suffering such emotional distress but that doesn't matter as i don't like it. Its what it is mate! But I hope you guys enjoy it and maybe he would get a character development in future chapters? (I hope so) but i don't have the patience to read such a Mc as its burning my already non-existent brain cells. Good luck Author as i think the fanbase this Mc's personality is targeted at will like it.Those who like to see a naive Mc go through character development and stuff and like realistic (or as i like to say pathetic-at-the-beginning) Protagonist
Its a great story witch looks prmising in the future. I read to chapter 13 and finde it great. ........... . . . .......