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The novel itself is amazing, the way that the author describes each event that is happening in the novel is very detailed and the characters that you use is really cool as well. The story that your going for is really going well from my point of view and there are not a lot of flaws in your book in my opinion. But there are flaws like a bunch of your paragraphs are a bit long which may be off putting to some readers but not all so it isn't something you need to change that much but I just suggest you do. Then the way you transition to each POV in each chapter needs a bit of work since you can't always switch it after every chapter as what I've read in other dual POV novels. But all in all the novel is great, the story is great and I totally recommend reading it if you love fantasy and romance.
Hello hello, dear author... I read a few of first chapters. I am happy to say this is so satisfying. Added to the library already. I don't know why but, When I reached here by the link, I saw that the word "crone's" is like "crone'S" May be it's because I came here from the site. Anyways love the story. But I have a suggestion. You can make your book cover better. The spellings are not clear in the cover. But I don't know if it's only for me. Anyways do as u wish... Keep going author.. i wish you best..❤️
This is so good, I love the way you described the magical transformation, you've got a good plot, the details are amazing, I'm English so I can't really understand some of those symbols you use before the characters POV aside that I'm liking where this is going 🙂
'This will be my first time riding a review but I honestly feel like that it is well warranted for the scale of potential this story has this is honestly a diamond in the rough then I can completely see if it becomes one of the top 10 someday if enough people are you able to see it but I guess that is left to us the First Commerce and find stuff like this the ones that go out their way and search but I'm getting off track I just wanted to come over here and just give my mind and you know tell everybody how good this novel was'
The novel itself is amazing, the way that the author describes each event that is happening in the novel is very detailed and the characters that you use is really cool as well. The story that your going for is really going well from my point of view and there are not a lot of flaws in your book in my opinion. But there are flaws like a bunch of your paragraphs are a bit long which may be off putting to some readers but not all so it isn't something you need to change that much but I just suggest you do. Then the way you transition to each POV in each chapter needs a bit of work since you can't always switch it after every chapter as what I've read in other dual POV novels. But all in all the novel is great, the story is great and I totally recommend reading it if you love fantasy and romance.
Hello hello, dear author... I read a few of first chapters. I am happy to say this is so satisfying. Added to the library already. I don't know why but, When I reached here by the link, I saw that the word "crone's" is like "crone'S" May be it's because I came here from the site. Anyways love the story. But I have a suggestion. You can make your book cover better. The spellings are not clear in the cover. But I don't know if it's only for me. Anyways do as u wish... Keep going author.. i wish you best..❤️
This is so good, I love the way you described the magical transformation, you've got a good plot, the details are amazing, I'm English so I can't really understand some of those symbols you use before the characters POV aside that I'm liking where this is going 🙂
'This will be my first time riding a review but I honestly feel like that it is well warranted for the scale of potential this story has this is honestly a diamond in the rough then I can completely see if it becomes one of the top 10 someday if enough people are you able to see it but I guess that is left to us the First Commerce and find stuff like this the ones that go out their way and search but I'm getting off track I just wanted to come over here and just give my mind and you know tell everybody how good this novel was'