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one of the best novel on webnovel I have ever read. It should be in top 10.Any new reader who is looking at this review please this novel it is super super good . now on main point hey author are you dead? ? why are you not releasing more chapters .I am waiting!
Very good start with the Mayan themes, very cool, I love mythology and religious themes like this. I am starting to wonder if it is just the Mayans or other pantheons that exist on earth and if they will show up later down the line. I love the start so far and usually, I can tell if I am going to like a novel from the start. Stick to the good writing and don't do stupid stuff to ruin the book like rushing it or anything. Please don't drop bro.
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Well, so far the first chapter is not holding my attention too much, but I'll wait about ten more chapters to make sure I'll continue reading it or not. Still I have high expectations for this work. I am a fan of most of the author's work though.
Sorry but for this one o have to say It in my language. Puta que pariu, que história maravilhosa, bem escrita (como as demais do mesmo autor) e que deixa o leitor avido pela continuação parabéns.[img=update]
hey just came here after reading read the Pokémon fanfic of the author...i have not started to read this story yet but i can say if its story details and amount of imagination that the author used in the Pokémon fanfic...then it is going to be amazing as well...thank u author and now i would start reading :)
If you want to read a story that slowly builds up tensions, has an actual plot that builds on itself and a powerful world building series that tackles cultivation in a unique way then I would highly recommend this
Hmm, I am really invested in this story. The MC is actually smart and witty who just doesn't blindly trust anyone. The world feels so large, world building is amazing, characters are amazing and I can't wait to read what happens next
I feel an underlying dread when reading this story like its momentum is building up to become something that is going to amazing.
more MOREMOREMORMEORMEORMEORMRKEMRKMRKEMRRKMORRMORMEORMOREMITMEKMOREMORMEOMRORMROMRORMEORMEIRMRRIMOREMORMEORMEORMEORMEIMORMEORMEOMOREMORMEORMOEMRIENRIEMMORMEORMMORR.TOMOREMORMEORM
Interesting start, I have read the author's other works and I know this is going to be good. Currently I am very interested in the mystery behind why the mc was trapped inside this mysterious prison. so excited.
No, I'm not shameless. It is only shameless if it is not true and I dare say that if you know what you came for, my novel will provide you with entertainment and delightful surprises. Thus, I give myself five stars.(But really I'm just another shameless author giving himself five stars to boost his overall rating *yikes*)
one of the best novel on webnovel I have ever read. It should be in top 10.Any new reader who is looking at this review please this novel it is super super good . now on main point hey author are you dead? ? why are you not releasing more chapters .I am waiting!
Very good start with the Mayan themes, very cool, I love mythology and religious themes like this. I am starting to wonder if it is just the Mayans or other pantheons that exist on earth and if they will show up later down the line. I love the start so far and usually, I can tell if I am going to like a novel from the start. Stick to the good writing and don't do stupid stuff to ruin the book like rushing it or anything. Please don't drop bro.
Spoiler de révélation Well, so far the first chapter is not holding my attention too much, but I'll wait about ten more chapters to make sure I'll continue reading it or not. Still I have high expectations for this work. I am a fan of most of the author's work though.
Sorry but for this one o have to say It in my language. Puta que pariu, que história maravilhosa, bem escrita (como as demais do mesmo autor) e que deixa o leitor avido pela continuação parabéns.[img=update]
hey just came here after reading read the Pokémon fanfic of the author...i have not started to read this story yet but i can say if its story details and amount of imagination that the author used in the Pokémon fanfic...then it is going to be amazing as well...thank u author and now i would start reading :)
If you want to read a story that slowly builds up tensions, has an actual plot that builds on itself and a powerful world building series that tackles cultivation in a unique way then I would highly recommend this
Hmm, I am really invested in this story. The MC is actually smart and witty who just doesn't blindly trust anyone. The world feels so large, world building is amazing, characters are amazing and I can't wait to read what happens next
I feel an underlying dread when reading this story like its momentum is building up to become something that is going to amazing.
more MOREMOREMORMEORMEORMEORMRKEMRKMRKEMRRKMORRMORMEORMOREMITMEKMOREMORMEOMRORMROMRORMEORMEIRMRRIMOREMORMEORMEORMEORMEIMORMEORMEOMOREMORMEORMOEMRIENRIEMMORMEORMMORR.TOMOREMORMEORM
Interesting start, I have read the author's other works and I know this is going to be good. Currently I am very interested in the mystery behind why the mc was trapped inside this mysterious prison. so excited.
No, I'm not shameless. It is only shameless if it is not true and I dare say that if you know what you came for, my novel will provide you with entertainment and delightful surprises. Thus, I give myself five stars.(But really I'm just another shameless author giving himself five stars to boost his overall rating *yikes*)