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Peux-tu continuer d'écrire sur toutes tes histoires sur Game of Thrones, please. Je t'informe que tes 2 histoires ont vraiment du potentiel. J'espère que tu vas continuer à apprendre dur la littérature.
I just got to chapter 3 and left it... It became very Chinese to me with the world of cultivation of cultivation jjnjkmkimoooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo
I haven't watched the series but the story is easy to follow so I still enjoy it sdf wwfhergdf sdfwg
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I really enjoy it so far. you could do alot with it i hope you add more chapters soon[img=recommend][img=update][img=recommend][img=update][img=recommend
The idea is interesting and it has a lot of potential. Sadly the writing style makes it difficult to enjoy the story. The repeat of the same sentences in different words feels like unnecessary padding and the constant use of big words feels like the author is trying too hard to make sure we know they are intelligent. In addition, the dialogue between characters is lacking in volume and the conversations feel stunted. I think this fic is salvageable though if more effort is moved away from describing everything in as big words as possible and into focusing more on the dialogue between characters.
this story is very good aside from the way how quite a few things get repeated in different wording and the excessive use of big/complicated words, the story has high potential and im looking forward to how it goes forward from here
My first time seeing a female character with space reincarnated into GOT. Very promising and would keep u wanting for more. Pls more updates pls.
Peux-tu continuer d'écrire sur toutes tes histoires sur Game of Thrones, please. Je t'informe que tes 2 histoires ont vraiment du potentiel. J'espère que tu vas continuer à apprendre dur la littérature.
I just got to chapter 3 and left it... It became very Chinese to me with the world of cultivation of cultivation jjnjkmkimoooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo
I haven't watched the series but the story is easy to follow so I still enjoy it sdf wwfhergdf sdfwg
Spoiler de révélation I really enjoy it so far. you could do alot with it i hope you add more chapters soon[img=recommend][img=update][img=recommend][img=update][img=recommend
The idea is interesting and it has a lot of potential. Sadly the writing style makes it difficult to enjoy the story. The repeat of the same sentences in different words feels like unnecessary padding and the constant use of big words feels like the author is trying too hard to make sure we know they are intelligent. In addition, the dialogue between characters is lacking in volume and the conversations feel stunted. I think this fic is salvageable though if more effort is moved away from describing everything in as big words as possible and into focusing more on the dialogue between characters.
this story is very good aside from the way how quite a few things get repeated in different wording and the excessive use of big/complicated words, the story has high potential and im looking forward to how it goes forward from here
My first time seeing a female character with space reincarnated into GOT. Very promising and would keep u wanting for more. Pls more updates pls.