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I Just want to say that if you are looking for a decent batman, its not in here. This batman has the brain of an imfant, along with the rest of the characters. Example flash:"can he be the Rider?" Batman:"highly unlikely because he said he hates violence on public TV" Ghost Rider apears where mc goes, so mc prepeares an excuse, What excuse you May ask? "Rider saved my life so I follow him everywhere and help cleaning up." which nakes no sense. Because acording to his excuse, Rider needs to appear somewhere and the mc comes. Yet mc is a world known figure so the news of him coming Should spread first. And then the Rider. So he either somehow knows where Rider will apear or its Just a lame excuse.
Man, is this even real? I mean even at the chapter 1, the story is too fast... I'm still gonna read it actually... Interesting story
I Just want to say that if you are looking for a decent batman, its not in here. This batman has the brain of an imfant, along with the rest of the characters. Example flash:"can he be the Rider?" Batman:"highly unlikely because he said he hates violence on public TV" Ghost Rider apears where mc goes, so mc prepeares an excuse, What excuse you May ask? "Rider saved my life so I follow him everywhere and help cleaning up." which nakes no sense. Because acording to his excuse, Rider needs to appear somewhere and the mc comes. Yet mc is a world known figure so the news of him coming Should spread first. And then the Rider. So he either somehow knows where Rider will apear or its Just a lame excuse.
a novel where above 15chapter is a new world introduce every chapter though the world is 1 chapter only and it is rush introducing the plot from the movie or books then change only a few things inserting mc presence in the plot and ordering people taking leadership role of the heroes and world making sure mc doing something on the chapter so the chapter can be send out some of the female characters quickly fell in love with mc by meeting him half a day maybe less and over all it is an ok novel if you want a super fast pace novel
Sorry for the low score but the character have no depth to them for example a certain someone fell in love in like 5 hours that is it or another one had a complete value change in like 10 minute or how the mc is 100% biased not to mention the story jumps from a certain thing to another completely unrelated or how major stories or plots are not shown or skipped or just said in passing on a conversation it seems like the author copy pasted wrong or had too much time between chapters and forgot what he was writing and that super forced merge was simply a mess the name should be: simpchad Sean in a crossover world great ideas terribly execution and I get that hopefully it gets edited or something.
Only on ch 6 but so far the story is really good relationships are really rushed but thats my only complaint so far really interesting how this is a ghost rider story but mc isint him anyways i like this story
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the grammar is good and it's easy to keep up with who's speaking and all, but there's just too much going on. It's like it's just this weird almagation of a bunch of different stories and things that are from completely different universes. like you just throw whatever comes to mind in it.
I got to ask is MC the main rider or something I've been reading till chapter 8 but haven't got a clue
Good story very nice to read and happily enjoy it with the different pacing of events
Story has potential to be a good ride but, come on women don’t just throw themselves on a guy on the first time they meet. Don’t rush, mate.
I Just want to say that if you are looking for a decent batman, its not in here. This batman has the brain of an imfant, along with the rest of the characters. Example flash:"can he be the Rider?" Batman:"highly unlikely because he said he hates violence on public TV" Ghost Rider apears where mc goes, so mc prepeares an excuse, What excuse you May ask? "Rider saved my life so I follow him everywhere and help cleaning up." which nakes no sense. Because acording to his excuse, Rider needs to appear somewhere and the mc comes. Yet mc is a world known figure so the news of him coming Should spread first. And then the Rider. So he either somehow knows where Rider will apear or its Just a lame excuse.
Man, is this even real? I mean even at the chapter 1, the story is too fast... I'm still gonna read it actually... Interesting story
I Just want to say that if you are looking for a decent batman, its not in here. This batman has the brain of an imfant, along with the rest of the characters. Example flash:"can he be the Rider?" Batman:"highly unlikely because he said he hates violence on public TV" Ghost Rider apears where mc goes, so mc prepeares an excuse, What excuse you May ask? "Rider saved my life so I follow him everywhere and help cleaning up." which nakes no sense. Because acording to his excuse, Rider needs to appear somewhere and the mc comes. Yet mc is a world known figure so the news of him coming Should spread first. And then the Rider. So he either somehow knows where Rider will apear or its Just a lame excuse.
a novel where above 15chapter is a new world introduce every chapter though the world is 1 chapter only and it is rush introducing the plot from the movie or books then change only a few things inserting mc presence in the plot and ordering people taking leadership role of the heroes and world making sure mc doing something on the chapter so the chapter can be send out some of the female characters quickly fell in love with mc by meeting him half a day maybe less and over all it is an ok novel if you want a super fast pace novel
Sorry for the low score but the character have no depth to them for example a certain someone fell in love in like 5 hours that is it or another one had a complete value change in like 10 minute or how the mc is 100% biased not to mention the story jumps from a certain thing to another completely unrelated or how major stories or plots are not shown or skipped or just said in passing on a conversation it seems like the author copy pasted wrong or had too much time between chapters and forgot what he was writing and that super forced merge was simply a mess the name should be: simpchad Sean in a crossover world great ideas terribly execution and I get that hopefully it gets edited or something.
Only on ch 6 but so far the story is really good relationships are really rushed but thats my only complaint so far really interesting how this is a ghost rider story but mc isint him anyways i like this story
Spoiler de révélation the grammar is good and it's easy to keep up with who's speaking and all, but there's just too much going on. It's like it's just this weird almagation of a bunch of different stories and things that are from completely different universes. like you just throw whatever comes to mind in it.
I got to ask is MC the main rider or something I've been reading till chapter 8 but haven't got a clue
Good story very nice to read and happily enjoy it with the different pacing of events
Story has potential to be a good ride but, come on women don’t just throw themselves on a guy on the first time they meet. Don’t rush, mate.