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A huge success as it didn't start with the classic Trash Young Master. It's great that their relationship isn't just seggs as he's not an emotionless MC. I love adult novels, but it's hard to read without emotions. I would like give it a solid 5 star but author didn't post new chapters regularly.
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It's a very interesting novel and has an outstanding quality, from the grammar, to the characters, to the world building, everything is perfect. Because it's entertaining, I give it five stars. By the way, don't forget to stop by my profile to get an amazing novel too.
I really hope you don't drop this novel looking forward to more chapter. enjoy so far.
A storyteller sets a good framework. A good reader fills in and flashes out the world. You write well.
Author after using female prounouns for male characters and male pronouns for female characters for the next 500 chapters:
the story is very good!! in the early chapters you can see how a capable young master is raised!!!
As a great gentleman myself i give it a five star ⭐ rating after reading this novel's introduction
Good start to the novel, I hope it continues and although I don't really like the development of power in the kingdom, it's not bad at all.(Translate review).
Hello Author, I really like the writing quality, your stability, the development, the world background but maybe, my problem can be on the character, but I give you all the rest of the marks because of your "I'm not a professional, but I have a story to tell." You also said it is your first story, so I would like to encourage you. è_é Please, I hope you always find your inspiration and creativity to strive. As an author myself, I want to learn a bit from other authors and I will like to read your books to learn. Good job and keep going!
Warning, you need to be a person of culture to enjoy this work. Lot like pokemon collecting (harem collecting) but harem members having interesting and distinct personalities.
this is a hidden gem. The author does an amazing job keeping the story engaging. The only point I would like the author to improve is the mc's fights, I would like him to demonstrate his power more. But as it is the beginning of the story (60 caps) I understand the few fights. Please, author, always pay attention to the quality of the chapters :) Congratulations on the work author <3
I like it, the segg scenes are nice and the outline or the world seems great too. At first I thought his dad was the mc 😶🌫️
I like the story, although the only thing I don't like is that he will have children so quickly, but it's also passable, Marek is my favorite character 🗿
I really like this novel, although it has some errors that can be improved. This story has a lot of potential, I hope the author doesn't drop this novel!
A good novel. This novel has everything but it only lacks frequent update and he/she as well as her/him are interchanged sometimes but as long as the updates get stable all will be good
This novem PoTentiel Is one of the best i have seen if this novel gets to at least 1 chapter a day And not losing its quality i will donate 20 dollars
It started a little fast but well. A huge success as it didn't start with the classic Trash Young Master. It's great that their relationship isn't just seggs as he's not an emotionless MC. I love adult novels, but it's hard to read without emotions.
this novel is interesting, it looks good, I really like how it is going so far, I hope many more chapters, cheer up author, I hope I don't screw it up
It's a new novel that has an interesting start, keep it up. I hope people support this novel, I think it's worth it.😬😬😬😬😬😬
I like the novel, very good would recommend. Although a bit slow the concept is wonderful. Hope for more
A person will help me with the grammar, in the next few days he will start correcting and the story will be more fluent, thank you all for supporting this work, I'm just a newbie, I'm not a professional, but, I have a story to tell.
A huge success as it didn't start with the classic Trash Young Master. It's great that their relationship isn't just seggs as he's not an emotionless MC. I love adult novels, but it's hard to read without emotions. I would like give it a solid 5 star but author didn't post new chapters regularly.
here can advertise your novel, please tell me Multiprof | Apocalypse here can advertise your novel, please tell me Multiprof | Apocalypse
It's a very interesting novel and has an outstanding quality, from the grammar, to the characters, to the world building, everything is perfect. Because it's entertaining, I give it five stars. By the way, don't forget to stop by my profile to get an amazing novel too.
I really hope you don't drop this novel looking forward to more chapter. enjoy so far.
A storyteller sets a good framework. A good reader fills in and flashes out the world. You write well.
Author after using female prounouns for male characters and male pronouns for female characters for the next 500 chapters:
the story is very good!! in the early chapters you can see how a capable young master is raised!!!
As a great gentleman myself i give it a five star ⭐ rating after reading this novel's introduction
Good start to the novel, I hope it continues and although I don't really like the development of power in the kingdom, it's not bad at all.(Translate review).
Hello Author, I really like the writing quality, your stability, the development, the world background but maybe, my problem can be on the character, but I give you all the rest of the marks because of your "I'm not a professional, but I have a story to tell." You also said it is your first story, so I would like to encourage you. è_é Please, I hope you always find your inspiration and creativity to strive. As an author myself, I want to learn a bit from other authors and I will like to read your books to learn. Good job and keep going!
Warning, you need to be a person of culture to enjoy this work. Lot like pokemon collecting (harem collecting) but harem members having interesting and distinct personalities.
this is a hidden gem. The author does an amazing job keeping the story engaging. The only point I would like the author to improve is the mc's fights, I would like him to demonstrate his power more. But as it is the beginning of the story (60 caps) I understand the few fights. Please, author, always pay attention to the quality of the chapters :) Congratulations on the work author <3
I like it, the segg scenes are nice and the outline or the world seems great too. At first I thought his dad was the mc 😶🌫️
I like the story, although the only thing I don't like is that he will have children so quickly, but it's also passable, Marek is my favorite character 🗿
I really like this novel, although it has some errors that can be improved. This story has a lot of potential, I hope the author doesn't drop this novel!
A good novel. This novel has everything but it only lacks frequent update and he/she as well as her/him are interchanged sometimes but as long as the updates get stable all will be good
This novem PoTentiel Is one of the best i have seen if this novel gets to at least 1 chapter a day And not losing its quality i will donate 20 dollars
It started a little fast but well. A huge success as it didn't start with the classic Trash Young Master. It's great that their relationship isn't just seggs as he's not an emotionless MC. I love adult novels, but it's hard to read without emotions.
this novel is interesting, it looks good, I really like how it is going so far, I hope many more chapters, cheer up author, I hope I don't screw it up
It's a new novel that has an interesting start, keep it up. I hope people support this novel, I think it's worth it.😬😬😬😬😬😬
I like the novel, very good would recommend. Although a bit slow the concept is wonderful. Hope for more
A person will help me with the grammar, in the next few days he will start correcting and the story will be more fluent, thank you all for supporting this work, I'm just a newbie, I'm not a professional, but, I have a story to tell.