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I like this a lot seems to be pretty good. Writing is good story is cool and mc seems to not be dumb or anything annoying. will keep reading definitely
The story appears to have some potential. I'll keep it in my back pocket, and see if any changes transpire. Although not my cup of tea. I would recommend it to someone that was interested in this genre.🙂 It is a solid story with potential, can't read furhter but, yeah, definitely gonna add it to my library🥰
Its pretty early into the story but I can tell this is gonna be really really cool! The writing quality is pretty top notch, at least for this sites fanfics, the story is drawing me in pretty well too and I like the character interactions and stuff. Interested to see where things go this seems really good.
The story is well written and very interesting! Goodjob author! will recommend this novel to others as well. [img=update][img=update][img=update]
The title of your book is super good no doubt, your plot is strong, I love your character arrangement, and I'm pretty sure your story will be super good.
This seems like a good fanfic I like it very much. Good writing and story is cool yeah yeah yeah ytah yeah yeah yeah yeah yeah yaeh yeah yeah yeah
My first fanfic read in webnovel and it did not disappoint! The story is well paced and the characters are written well. Keep up the good work and I look forward to more chapters from you!
This is the first fanfic I've read on webnovel and I have to admit I’m very impressed! The grammar is great, very detailed, and paced well. The character dynamics flow naturally and the story is unique on its own! Overall, I enjoyed the concept of the story and see great potential from the author. Great job! I will add that author might want to consider adding TWs to avoid upsetting potential readers on sensitive matters (violence, blood, etc).
To be honest, this is my first time reading a fanfic in webnovel, that's why I'm a bit curious might as well give it a read. I didn't expect the plot would be this good. I really enjoyed reading it just from the first chapter itself. I'll add this book in my collection and share it to my friend because she's one of the biggest DB fans👍🏻
Author self-review cause why not. This is a series I was working on awhile ago on another account, but realized some issues with so I stopped. I've now restarted the series here, hope all of you enjoy it! I'll probably have a chapter out every day or every other day, something like that.
the story is pretty ok. Good flow. Btw if the vampire was gonna get eaten anyway why bother saving her(not to the mc, but the authour). The mc is an idiot but cant really blame a bedridden normal earthling to be calculating(boy obviously never read fanfics[this time to mc not authour]) PS- Realistically speaking an evil tyrant kingpin has better things to do than read dragonball so does he know the story?
I like this a lot seems to be pretty good. Writing is good story is cool and mc seems to not be dumb or anything annoying. will keep reading definitely
The story appears to have some potential. I'll keep it in my back pocket, and see if any changes transpire. Although not my cup of tea. I would recommend it to someone that was interested in this genre.🙂 It is a solid story with potential, can't read furhter but, yeah, definitely gonna add it to my library🥰
Its pretty early into the story but I can tell this is gonna be really really cool! The writing quality is pretty top notch, at least for this sites fanfics, the story is drawing me in pretty well too and I like the character interactions and stuff. Interested to see where things go this seems really good.
The story is well written and very interesting! Goodjob author! will recommend this novel to others as well. [img=update][img=update][img=update]
The title of your book is super good no doubt, your plot is strong, I love your character arrangement, and I'm pretty sure your story will be super good.
This seems like a good fanfic I like it very much. Good writing and story is cool yeah yeah yeah ytah yeah yeah yeah yeah yeah yaeh yeah yeah yeah
My first fanfic read in webnovel and it did not disappoint! The story is well paced and the characters are written well. Keep up the good work and I look forward to more chapters from you!
This is the first fanfic I've read on webnovel and I have to admit I’m very impressed! The grammar is great, very detailed, and paced well. The character dynamics flow naturally and the story is unique on its own! Overall, I enjoyed the concept of the story and see great potential from the author. Great job! I will add that author might want to consider adding TWs to avoid upsetting potential readers on sensitive matters (violence, blood, etc).
To be honest, this is my first time reading a fanfic in webnovel, that's why I'm a bit curious might as well give it a read. I didn't expect the plot would be this good. I really enjoyed reading it just from the first chapter itself. I'll add this book in my collection and share it to my friend because she's one of the biggest DB fans👍🏻
Author self-review cause why not. This is a series I was working on awhile ago on another account, but realized some issues with so I stopped. I've now restarted the series here, hope all of you enjoy it! I'll probably have a chapter out every day or every other day, something like that.
the story is pretty ok. Good flow. Btw if the vampire was gonna get eaten anyway why bother saving her(not to the mc, but the authour). The mc is an idiot but cant really blame a bedridden normal earthling to be calculating(boy obviously never read fanfics[this time to mc not authour]) PS- Realistically speaking an evil tyrant kingpin has better things to do than read dragonball so does he know the story?