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- Qualité de l’écriture
- Stabilité des mises à jour
- Développement de l’histoire
- Conception des personnages
- Contexte du monde
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waiting for the sequel................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................
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This story has the potential to reach a place like Endless Path and Danmachi : Reborn with the powers of Emiya if the author updates daily and does the story development well.
so far this is insanely good, the quality is so good it's staggering to find it on webnovel, if it continues with the same quality and effort put into it, I'm sure it can easily become one of the top stories here, while I haven't rad shadow slave, the author explained everything clearly and it was just a treat to read honestly, give it a try even if you never rad shadow slave, its seriously amazing
As long as the quality keeps up this will become one of the top 100 fanfictions in my opinion. The writing quality is amazing, I feel like it will be a struggle to explain shadow slave as it is but the author is doing well so far.
Очень хорошо.................................................................................................. ........ .......................................
waiting for the sequel................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................
respect +++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++
This story has the potential to reach a place like Endless Path and Danmachi : Reborn with the powers of Emiya if the author updates daily and does the story development well.
so far this is insanely good, the quality is so good it's staggering to find it on webnovel, if it continues with the same quality and effort put into it, I'm sure it can easily become one of the top stories here, while I haven't rad shadow slave, the author explained everything clearly and it was just a treat to read honestly, give it a try even if you never rad shadow slave, its seriously amazing
As long as the quality keeps up this will become one of the top 100 fanfictions in my opinion. The writing quality is amazing, I feel like it will be a struggle to explain shadow slave as it is but the author is doing well so far.
Очень хорошо.................................................................................................. ........ .......................................