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Nice one author keep up the good work grammar and writing quality is way better than your first fan fiction u have improved quite a lot👍 😀 👏 [img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
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I really can't believe how you decided to Make a cultivation Mc that wants to be a hero and go around saving people which in my opinion just literally makes him the worst mc possible in a cultivation world if he didn't have plot armour he'd die the same day he tries to save someone
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Nice one author keep up the good work grammar and writing quality is way better than your first fan fiction u have improved quite a lot👍 😀 👏 [img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
I really can't believe how you decided to Make a cultivation Mc that wants to be a hero and go around saving people which in my opinion just literally makes him the worst mc possible in a cultivation world if he didn't have plot armour he'd die the same day he tries to save someone