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Hello to my readers... I know that I no longer updated my chapters for I:TB and the reason is because I have lost my ideas and decided to put this novel on hiatus for a long time. However, I have returned with a new story, and this was inspired by the novel 'Omniscient Reader Viewpoint'. I would really appreciate it if you could give a read and support my other novel, 'Protagonist's Chaperone'. Once I'm done with 'Protagonist's Chaperone', I will try to continue 'I:TB' again. Thank you for your understanding and I hope you have a nice day...!
Really entertaining novel, well written and quite thrilling. I like that its fast-paced, it keeped me on the edge of my seat. It builds up the suspense and gives just enough clues to suspect what might come. Nice work!
The book was the most fascinating I've ever read. The characters are superbly portrayed, the language choice is fantastic, and the plot is surprising. Every chapter has a shocking turn in it. The process of reading never ends. I want to read this book through to its wonderful end. You must read this book or you'll get addicted. devoted author😋💖
great synopsis and an intriguing beginning. I can wait to read more....I am already a fan of Iris, a foodian like me 😃 😀
Really interesting. I actually started reading in part because of the character description of the guy with red eyes reminded me of one of my favorite characters from a Webtoon called Windbreaker. Very cool story and I can't wait to read more!
Hi, I read your synopsis it is really interesting, your book cover is interesting, and your grip on your plot is great. I hope you complete your story. Thank you.
The style of your story is good. I love your story title. Your plot is strong and the arrangement of characters is well. I hope you will complete it.
The book is very interesting, well written, and polished the story has a good hook with only few chapters and the character has a mysterious vibes..
I greatly admired your work and impatiently waiting for the impending chapters Good characters. Good technical writing skills. The grammar is clean and the dialogue is natural. Love the idea of the story. I'm almost reading too fast with how much I enjoy this.😍 it's a good story so far, I can't wait for the chapters to come out.😋 I love the novel. Amazing story. Great chapter release frequency🤯🤯🤯👌👌👌❤️❤️❤️ Now please read my both novels too and give me a review. I will be very thankful to you.🥰
Very interesting story overall! Even though the author's first language is not english, it is well written. A good story with a very appealing story telling. [img=update][img=recommend]
The novel has a nice plot, slight mystery within. The novel is fast paced, but it doesn't diminish its worth. Keep up the good work author. All the best.
I'm really impressed at how well the story is progressing. With just a few chapters, the author has done a good job. I love the characters so far. The perfect book for me.
nice work...am loving it so far, keep up the good work author❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤
Good character settings, every one seems like just in front of me. I am successful to get into your world!. It's really a good work. Wait for further updates.
The book is very astonishing! Characters are mysterious and very we written, Very detailed, and nicely described. You have done a great job author, keep it up, and best of luck :D
it's a very interesting book, really good. Has good hook to keep you reading lol. I see what you did there and how much effort you put into this👏👏bruhh. Nice work.
From what I read of the story it seems to be an interesting story, I noticed some basic mistakes both grammatical and sentence construction, but also English is not the author's first language.
I need to sleep rn bruh But my fish is keepijg me up all night so I drank some fanta and went ti school and beat my teacher
Story telling on its finest! I must say I am engrossed to read the narratives. Also, It flows well too so I am definitely recommending this to you all. A nice read with a good story. All the best to the author and I still sense there's more to be offered! Good job for a job well done 😎
Welcome back, author Rin Nurnia 🤩 So glad to see your second novel here. Actually I didn't even know about the synopsis yet. But your novel always be my cup of tea, you know why? Because of mystery, fantasy & dark vibes 💀 Since I already read your first novel, dichroite then I won't hesitate to read this one too and wow!! Page turner!! 👏🏼👏🏼As expected. Well done and please keep writing, author Rin Nurnia✨ Cheers!🍹
Woow very intriguing and I like the storyline, it's something with alot to unfold... I recommend it and worth to try it out... good work author... more chapters [img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
I love your synopsis and love the book. I want to see more chapters author. And thank you for the hint.
The storyline is good author. You really described so well. And I think it will also help me 😂. I would love to read more. [img=update][img=update]
The story is overall engaging and has excellent flow. Despite being relatively fast paced, the plot is easy to follow and dialogue between Iris and the main character is fun to read. Regarding the obvious allusions to Tokyo Ghoul, I could only see the similarities once the author mentioned it explicitly, yet these parallels in no way detract from the overall quality. Criticism-wise, there really isn't much to say- I guess perhaps the Main Character could be fleshed out and developed more (there are only 3rd chapters at the time of my review making this assessment quite premature).In summary, excellent story-added into my collection!
Hello! This is my second work and it's my first time joining a contest so I'm a bit nervous😅 This novel is fast-paced that contains season 1 only. I've been writing this story a few years back then so I've decided to share it to the readers. If you have any questions, leave comment and I'll try my best to answer. Last but not least, please enjoy! ୧(＾ 〰 ＾)୨
Hello to my readers... I know that I no longer updated my chapters for I:TB and the reason is because I have lost my ideas and decided to put this novel on hiatus for a long time. However, I have returned with a new story, and this was inspired by the novel 'Omniscient Reader Viewpoint'. I would really appreciate it if you could give a read and support my other novel, 'Protagonist's Chaperone'. Once I'm done with 'Protagonist's Chaperone', I will try to continue 'I:TB' again. Thank you for your understanding and I hope you have a nice day...!
Really entertaining novel, well written and quite thrilling. I like that its fast-paced, it keeped me on the edge of my seat. It builds up the suspense and gives just enough clues to suspect what might come. Nice work!
The book was the most fascinating I've ever read. The characters are superbly portrayed, the language choice is fantastic, and the plot is surprising. Every chapter has a shocking turn in it. The process of reading never ends. I want to read this book through to its wonderful end. You must read this book or you'll get addicted. devoted author😋💖
great synopsis and an intriguing beginning. I can wait to read more....I am already a fan of Iris, a foodian like me 😃 😀
Really interesting. I actually started reading in part because of the character description of the guy with red eyes reminded me of one of my favorite characters from a Webtoon called Windbreaker. Very cool story and I can't wait to read more!
Hi, I read your synopsis it is really interesting, your book cover is interesting, and your grip on your plot is great. I hope you complete your story. Thank you.
The style of your story is good. I love your story title. Your plot is strong and the arrangement of characters is well. I hope you will complete it.
The book is very interesting, well written, and polished the story has a good hook with only few chapters and the character has a mysterious vibes..
I greatly admired your work and impatiently waiting for the impending chapters Good characters. Good technical writing skills. The grammar is clean and the dialogue is natural. Love the idea of the story. I'm almost reading too fast with how much I enjoy this.😍 it's a good story so far, I can't wait for the chapters to come out.😋 I love the novel. Amazing story. Great chapter release frequency🤯🤯🤯👌👌👌❤️❤️❤️ Now please read my both novels too and give me a review. I will be very thankful to you.🥰
Very interesting story overall! Even though the author's first language is not english, it is well written. A good story with a very appealing story telling. [img=update][img=recommend]
The novel has a nice plot, slight mystery within. The novel is fast paced, but it doesn't diminish its worth. Keep up the good work author. All the best.
I'm really impressed at how well the story is progressing. With just a few chapters, the author has done a good job. I love the characters so far. The perfect book for me.
nice work...am loving it so far, keep up the good work author❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤
Good character settings, every one seems like just in front of me. I am successful to get into your world!. It's really a good work. Wait for further updates.
The book is very astonishing! Characters are mysterious and very we written, Very detailed, and nicely described. You have done a great job author, keep it up, and best of luck :D
it's a very interesting book, really good. Has good hook to keep you reading lol. I see what you did there and how much effort you put into this👏👏bruhh. Nice work.
From what I read of the story it seems to be an interesting story, I noticed some basic mistakes both grammatical and sentence construction, but also English is not the author's first language.
I need to sleep rn bruh But my fish is keepijg me up all night so I drank some fanta and went ti school and beat my teacher
Story telling on its finest! I must say I am engrossed to read the narratives. Also, It flows well too so I am definitely recommending this to you all. A nice read with a good story. All the best to the author and I still sense there's more to be offered! Good job for a job well done 😎
Welcome back, author Rin Nurnia 🤩 So glad to see your second novel here. Actually I didn't even know about the synopsis yet. But your novel always be my cup of tea, you know why? Because of mystery, fantasy & dark vibes 💀 Since I already read your first novel, dichroite then I won't hesitate to read this one too and wow!! Page turner!! 👏🏼👏🏼As expected. Well done and please keep writing, author Rin Nurnia✨ Cheers!🍹
Woow very intriguing and I like the storyline, it's something with alot to unfold... I recommend it and worth to try it out... good work author... more chapters [img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
I love your synopsis and love the book. I want to see more chapters author. And thank you for the hint.
The storyline is good author. You really described so well. And I think it will also help me 😂. I would love to read more. [img=update][img=update]
The story is overall engaging and has excellent flow. Despite being relatively fast paced, the plot is easy to follow and dialogue between Iris and the main character is fun to read. Regarding the obvious allusions to Tokyo Ghoul, I could only see the similarities once the author mentioned it explicitly, yet these parallels in no way detract from the overall quality. Criticism-wise, there really isn't much to say- I guess perhaps the Main Character could be fleshed out and developed more (there are only 3rd chapters at the time of my review making this assessment quite premature).In summary, excellent story-added into my collection!
Hello! This is my second work and it's my first time joining a contest so I'm a bit nervous😅 This novel is fast-paced that contains season 1 only. I've been writing this story a few years back then so I've decided to share it to the readers. If you have any questions, leave comment and I'll try my best to answer. Last but not least, please enjoy! ୧(＾ 〰 ＾)୨