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Shiro_blank

Amazing novel with a refreshing storyline, it has almost no cliches and the mc is quite likeable. All in all worth a read.

20d
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Charles_T_5256

I like the idea and find it refreshing but the execution left much to be desired. Leaving aside grammar and such, there’s a huge problem of info-dumping/world padding of useless stuff that would put slide of life to shame and horrible pacing. At chapter 200, we are not even a week into the novel. And most of it doesn’t even bring anything substantial to the plot. Also, there’s a lot of inconsistency in the world building. Specially the timeline of various stuff. The MC said he’s 23 but a couple of chapters later, his senior of 2 years has been inquisitor for 15 years. Other time his team member saved treasures for multiples years to afford something. That’s just pure math but it goes deeper with the timeline established related to cultivation. With the life expectancy described, they shouldn’t be able to be at the palace stage at their age. Also, the Order only existed for about 500 years but they have a buttload of soul realm expert from who knows where when 50000 years old clan had 3 in their total history. Finally, the cultivation system and art related to it is very shallow right now and not explored very much or in a meaningful way despite a lot of mention about art but its always about grade and not detailed. Same thing about the Dao, always mentioned on a surface level without any dept. A lot of potential, but wasted as it is now.

1mth
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solracmar

it is one of my favorite novels. the whole Order and having a judge for cultivators is a great idea, and the author puts lots of thoughts into each character and background . if you read about a character, you will know at least a little about his motivation and background, and I really enjoy that. so you have an original premise and regular updates, good character design and background, and the author writes well. so you won't like this novel only if you don't like the genre.

7mth
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Wolf_Spirit_5499

it was really great but now it's turning boring and sloppy . Too much fillers story has deviated from daily life of yang to daily life of unknown characters . even the most recent arc giving sentence and blood duel all you will see is the author is trying to increase word count . I will drop it for now (ch-890) hope the story gets better and we get less filler chapters.

7mth
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Shibam_Pal

It is getting worse by the day. Earlier I used to love this novel.

8mth
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Luninu

LOVE the book, really... but like, why the info dumps? It's so great to read, but past chapter 400 and you feel exhausted with every chapter. Like, it has no real content and it feels like the world building never stopped because the author does TOO much world building. We get 10chapters for like every second case, then even the 'short' ones take over three chapters. We get foreshadowed for so many things and there are hints here and there, but it also lacks drastically in following these hints because the author doesn't know how to progress the story. It also feels like the author doesn't read his own novel, because several times it was mentioned he levelled up, then he didn't do that apparently, then he would level up soon, but when is soon? Like, from the beginning of the novel till around chapter 400 we have been in the world like 1 month. Seriously??? In a novel where years are thrown in the thousands, we spent ONE MONTH in 400 chapters? Another thing that really annoys me (besides the missing grammatical skills) is the fact that the author seems to forget plot points he wrote and then makes it so that the mc seemed to forget these points (like ignore the fact that heir memory is hyperspeed), also it's super weird how the info dumps come in the middle of the fights and the talks partially seem to be minutes long while the enemy waits and doesn't do anything. Please explain why a hyperspeed brain needs minutes for three-sentence-discussions?? Like you could be talking with your spiritual sense for hours in other novels, and only a second passed, while here, it seems that spiritual sense talking takes longer than normal talking.

9mth
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GreyHound_7

It’s a good story and all but i hope the author could reduce the side stories a bit

10mth
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11mth
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GhostDost

It's interesting story, But it's literally too slow, first 50 chapter and not even 2 hrs has been passed. I get it you want a slow pace but this is too much considering length of the chapters are also small.

11mth
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Crimson_Solace

story has rich world building, the characters are pretty well defined, mc has sense of humor , his actions are logical.

11mth
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Kanishk_Vats

I like this novel very much, I have read almost till the end, haven't caught up with the latest, so won't say about update stability but otherwise, this is a gem I have found, different from rest, and interesting, to the point where I stopped keeping up with some other novels like shadow slave to binge read it

12mth
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WitnessTheHeavens

Honestly one of the best books I've found on here. Characters with depth, interesting developments. a lot of elements make it seem more real and down to earth. if you are looking for an enjoyable positive read. this is it.

1yr
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Xanse94
LV 14 Badge

Currently 649 chapters into the novel. As per the title, it’s a story revolving around our young judge MC who aspires to reach the softlife in an organisation that oversees the peace of the continent despite beng the enemy of the entire continent itself. Anyway, the thing that makes this novel attractive, in my opinion, if the MC himself. I really like how Yang Qing’s character is being portrayed. He is lazy, playful and silly most of the time, but when it comes to his duty, he’s like a different person entirely. Above all, the quality of storytelling and writing is something I haven’t seen for quite some time. As a reader, I really appreciate the author’s work as this novel is able to reel in my emotions along with the story as I read through the chapters. And so far, its quality of writing doesn’t diminish like other novels do. This story is indeed a bright gem among the ocean of novels here ✨

1yr
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Gurucharan_kaur

the best novel of cultivation i have ever read no arrogant haughty overpowered mcs no romance or harem and the way mc is written with a perfect balance of comedic foodie and the story is good with no plot holes truly amazing a bit shy of translation quality but excellent concept for the story

1yr
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dildo_baggins

At first when I started reading the novel, I liked it. But slowly as time passed, I started finding reading the novel a chore. There's too much information going on with every single side plot or history being explained with a chapter. A whole chapter is based on a few enemies escaping from the good guys. There's too much info that it's frying my brain. Every chapter, something or the other is described and half the chapter is wasted with little to no plot progress. There's multiple back to back chapters wasted on the MC just talking and having fun with his friends when the main plotline is going on in the background with the side characters. After this, another few chapters with what the side characters did. The first few chapter is called "last week as a judge" or something, but the first day of the week ends only after chapter 80 or something. Every case the MC takes on is explained with a few dozen chapters. Till now there is no idea what the MC is gonna do. There is nothing to suggest what the future holds. Just taking cases and lazing around. I couldn't read it after chapter 80 or something because it's too boring without a proper plot progress. The chapters are long, which I like, but there's little progress in each chapter with the rest being info dumps. So by now, I've read around 80-90 chapters and nothing has happened. And the MC just seems too bland for me. He's the absolutely shameless type with no trace of dignity or pride. This just beats the essence of a cultivation novel. The writing is good. The world background is well explained. Too detailed if you ask me, which just takes away the beauty of the novel. As always, the MC friends are all the weirdos, and the weirdo friend group always turns out to be the OP group, just like in black clover. Overused trope. And as I said, the story development is too slow. Snails pace with too much info dumping in each chapter.My opinion is that if you're a patient person, give it a read. It's a good novel with good writing, but not my cup of tea. Perhaps after chapter 100 or 150 it'll get better. It's obvious that the author has taken immense effort to write it, and props to him. It's visible to everyone. Good work on the novel author. I'm sorry but it's just not for me. I wish you success.

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Book_of_Dao

interesting background, nice change from the existing "growing up from nothing" cultivator type novels, detailed world building and varied plot. the cases and interactions are interesting, however the author has a serious case of foreshadowing addiction, loving to drop critical hints about future plots and build conspiracies in the background which is a bit of a turn off for me. additionally, although I don't mind it some people may, there's a lot, I mean a lot, of info dump in the world building. chapters of it.

1yr
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Mithren
LV 13 Badge

The tl;dr is that it needs work but shows promise. The author goes off on side tangents, dumps a lot of info, and fails at times to give the readers a reason to care about where things seem to be going. That said the author shows promise. I could see this being reworked a few times to become a proper book I'd be willing to buy to have on my shelf. The world and character feel like they've depth to them. The author just needs enough support to keep practicing their craft and before too long they'll be an amazing writer.

1yr
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Artoriastheabyssen

So i would rate this about a 4/5. I have read about 200 chapters and the book is rather slow paced. This isn’t an action cultivation novel but more of a slice of life about a judge and the odd cases he deals with and his job assignments in the order. As i said the story is slow and loaded with cultivation jargon, but if you’re looking for a relaxed pace novel i would recommend it.

1yr
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Caos_Caos_

interesting novel for a change of peace but too much info the ch design is a full 5 star but the rest is on 3 stars with stabilty of up at 4 the story is too slow paced and there are info that are useless like when there is the story how is founded a sect or a pavilion merchant, i was like (why wold i care how this sect or pavilion is created? progress the story already) it is a very funny novel but the too much info and side chs are ruining this novel so 3.6 the novel is not averenge it is ok you can read this if you are bored of the alywas usual cultivation novel where mc talk like some chosen one it is not a master piece but an ok novel

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1yr
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Jay_Sah_3080

i liked the name emarled leaf cow,cows are so gentle😳

1yr
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Coliousthegod

bruh, this sounds really fun. I hope they do it kinda Phoenix Wright style

1yr
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Crimson_Solace

i will not give a detailed review , i will only tell what i like the most about this novel i like the most about the novel is he does not have a solitude persona and have friends like literally friends with equal standing cause in most eastern novel mc has friends but they seem like little subordinate to mc

1yr
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prakhar_saxena

i don't no where to start its a gem of a book .i dont know why its not getting the reputation it deserves a new concept with great characters that have both a depth and a personality different from other. here side characters dont feel like sode character and mc is not the overly powerful overly talented guy yes he is talented and string but there are people who are stronger than him moreover this dosen't have dumb people everywhere but how civilized people who know how to behave. read it it might be a bit boring in the start but becomes a absolute gem in the later parts

1yr
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Daoistd7913V

In the realm of comedy novels, "cultivation judge" reigns supreme as a true gem. The author's impeccable delivery and knack for foreshadowing elevate this book to the highest echelons of comedic brilliance. From start to finish, the narrative is laced with rib-tickling humor that leaves readers in stitches. What sets this novel apart is the author's uncanny ability to build anticipation through expertly placed foreshadowing. Every punchline is carefully planted, blossoming into hilarious moments that catch readers off guard. The seamless integration of comedic elements and well-executed foreshadowing creates an addictive reading experience. As a fan, I sincerely hope that the author continues to maintain the remarkable quality displayed in this novel. Their talent for comedy and storytelling shines brightly, leaving readers eagerly anticipating future works. "cultivation judge" is an absolute triumph, a testament to the author's comedic prowess, and a must-read for any fan of the genre.

1yr
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ImmortalDoggo

Too much details, it's too irritating to read, please author, reduce the details by removing the unecessary ones and only focus on the plot, chapter 27 in but the plot doesn't forward at all, over 10 chapters of useless and unecessary details that even if you skip it, you can still know the plot overall. DON'T PAD THE WORD COUNT BY UNECESSARY DETAILS...

1yr
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DaoistGIbjfL

It is one of the best new novels out here. Writing quality is 4 for me because of some writing mistakes, but the author is actively correcting them. Story development is amazing, character design is deep and not just mc but people around him too, regular updates and world backround is so well detailed and portrayed it sucks you in. Really recommend it!!

1yr
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cva34
LV 4 Badge

This is a really well written novel that clearly has a focus on world building and charcter writing. as far as ive read the plot seems to be more of episodic type arcs with different characters introduced in each ome

1yr
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Fent0
LV 11 Badge

Attention to detail I like but there is a reason Main characters need to have an ambition that the reader would like to see. People to like to have an overarching idea of where the story is going when reading and the MC for this story has zero ambition which means the reader has no idea what the main goal of this whole story is. Im around chapter 60 now and the Main character just wants to laze around and do nothing but is at the same time super serious about his work as a Judge which would make a cool side character but as a main character the story feels cheapened cuz of lack of ambition leaving the reader confused on the point of this story. i.e. Naruto has the ambition of being the hokage, luffy the ambition of being the pirate king now imagine naruto doesn't have that goal the story is just super lackluster. This can be mitigated like in bleach with certain enemies being the focal point to defeat so life can go back as normal but there is a reason bleach is always considered worse than naruto and one piece for a reason it is cuz ichigo does not have any sort of ambition and that is important for the reader to be invested in. If the main character wanted to become the greatest judge which was a title given in the universe that would mean I have something to look forward to and learn more about the universe thru world building which is well done in this novel. If the main character realized an ambition this novel would have been a much better read but going thru case by case feels like chore to me with no overarching goal in mind rather than something I enjoyed.

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1yr
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1yr
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Haiiko
LV 15 Badge

A really good novel with an interesting concept ! Keep up the good work Author!

1yr
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Shiro_blank

Amazing novel with a refreshing storyline, it has almost no cliches and the mc is quite likeable. All in all worth a read.

20d
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Charles_T_5256

I like the idea and find it refreshing but the execution left much to be desired. Leaving aside grammar and such, there’s a huge problem of info-dumping/world padding of useless stuff that would put slide of life to shame and horrible pacing. At chapter 200, we are not even a week into the novel. And most of it doesn’t even bring anything substantial to the plot. Also, there’s a lot of inconsistency in the world building. Specially the timeline of various stuff. The MC said he’s 23 but a couple of chapters later, his senior of 2 years has been inquisitor for 15 years. Other time his team member saved treasures for multiples years to afford something. That’s just pure math but it goes deeper with the timeline established related to cultivation. With the life expectancy described, they shouldn’t be able to be at the palace stage at their age. Also, the Order only existed for about 500 years but they have a buttload of soul realm expert from who knows where when 50000 years old clan had 3 in their total history. Finally, the cultivation system and art related to it is very shallow right now and not explored very much or in a meaningful way despite a lot of mention about art but its always about grade and not detailed. Same thing about the Dao, always mentioned on a surface level without any dept. A lot of potential, but wasted as it is now.

1mth
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solracmar

it is one of my favorite novels. the whole Order and having a judge for cultivators is a great idea, and the author puts lots of thoughts into each character and background . if you read about a character, you will know at least a little about his motivation and background, and I really enjoy that. so you have an original premise and regular updates, good character design and background, and the author writes well. so you won't like this novel only if you don't like the genre.

7mth
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Wolf_Spirit_5499

it was really great but now it's turning boring and sloppy . Too much fillers story has deviated from daily life of yang to daily life of unknown characters . even the most recent arc giving sentence and blood duel all you will see is the author is trying to increase word count . I will drop it for now (ch-890) hope the story gets better and we get less filler chapters.

7mth
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Shibam_Pal

It is getting worse by the day. Earlier I used to love this novel.

8mth
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Luninu

LOVE the book, really... but like, why the info dumps? It's so great to read, but past chapter 400 and you feel exhausted with every chapter. Like, it has no real content and it feels like the world building never stopped because the author does TOO much world building. We get 10chapters for like every second case, then even the 'short' ones take over three chapters. We get foreshadowed for so many things and there are hints here and there, but it also lacks drastically in following these hints because the author doesn't know how to progress the story. It also feels like the author doesn't read his own novel, because several times it was mentioned he levelled up, then he didn't do that apparently, then he would level up soon, but when is soon? Like, from the beginning of the novel till around chapter 400 we have been in the world like 1 month. Seriously??? In a novel where years are thrown in the thousands, we spent ONE MONTH in 400 chapters? Another thing that really annoys me (besides the missing grammatical skills) is the fact that the author seems to forget plot points he wrote and then makes it so that the mc seemed to forget these points (like ignore the fact that heir memory is hyperspeed), also it's super weird how the info dumps come in the middle of the fights and the talks partially seem to be minutes long while the enemy waits and doesn't do anything. Please explain why a hyperspeed brain needs minutes for three-sentence-discussions?? Like you could be talking with your spiritual sense for hours in other novels, and only a second passed, while here, it seems that spiritual sense talking takes longer than normal talking.

9mth
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GreyHound_7

It’s a good story and all but i hope the author could reduce the side stories a bit

10mth
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Wokieyas

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11mth
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GhostDost

It's interesting story, But it's literally too slow, first 50 chapter and not even 2 hrs has been passed. I get it you want a slow pace but this is too much considering length of the chapters are also small.

11mth
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Crimson_Solace

story has rich world building, the characters are pretty well defined, mc has sense of humor , his actions are logical.

11mth
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Kanishk_Vats

I like this novel very much, I have read almost till the end, haven't caught up with the latest, so won't say about update stability but otherwise, this is a gem I have found, different from rest, and interesting, to the point where I stopped keeping up with some other novels like shadow slave to binge read it

12mth
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WitnessTheHeavens

Honestly one of the best books I've found on here. Characters with depth, interesting developments. a lot of elements make it seem more real and down to earth. if you are looking for an enjoyable positive read. this is it.

1yr
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Xanse94
LV 14 Badge

Currently 649 chapters into the novel. As per the title, it’s a story revolving around our young judge MC who aspires to reach the softlife in an organisation that oversees the peace of the continent despite beng the enemy of the entire continent itself. Anyway, the thing that makes this novel attractive, in my opinion, if the MC himself. I really like how Yang Qing’s character is being portrayed. He is lazy, playful and silly most of the time, but when it comes to his duty, he’s like a different person entirely. Above all, the quality of storytelling and writing is something I haven’t seen for quite some time. As a reader, I really appreciate the author’s work as this novel is able to reel in my emotions along with the story as I read through the chapters. And so far, its quality of writing doesn’t diminish like other novels do. This story is indeed a bright gem among the ocean of novels here ✨

1yr
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Gurucharan_kaur

the best novel of cultivation i have ever read no arrogant haughty overpowered mcs no romance or harem and the way mc is written with a perfect balance of comedic foodie and the story is good with no plot holes truly amazing a bit shy of translation quality but excellent concept for the story

1yr
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dildo_baggins

At first when I started reading the novel, I liked it. But slowly as time passed, I started finding reading the novel a chore. There's too much information going on with every single side plot or history being explained with a chapter. A whole chapter is based on a few enemies escaping from the good guys. There's too much info that it's frying my brain. Every chapter, something or the other is described and half the chapter is wasted with little to no plot progress. There's multiple back to back chapters wasted on the MC just talking and having fun with his friends when the main plotline is going on in the background with the side characters. After this, another few chapters with what the side characters did. The first few chapter is called "last week as a judge" or something, but the first day of the week ends only after chapter 80 or something. Every case the MC takes on is explained with a few dozen chapters. Till now there is no idea what the MC is gonna do. There is nothing to suggest what the future holds. Just taking cases and lazing around. I couldn't read it after chapter 80 or something because it's too boring without a proper plot progress. The chapters are long, which I like, but there's little progress in each chapter with the rest being info dumps. So by now, I've read around 80-90 chapters and nothing has happened. And the MC just seems too bland for me. He's the absolutely shameless type with no trace of dignity or pride. This just beats the essence of a cultivation novel. The writing is good. The world background is well explained. Too detailed if you ask me, which just takes away the beauty of the novel. As always, the MC friends are all the weirdos, and the weirdo friend group always turns out to be the OP group, just like in black clover. Overused trope. And as I said, the story development is too slow. Snails pace with too much info dumping in each chapter.My opinion is that if you're a patient person, give it a read. It's a good novel with good writing, but not my cup of tea. Perhaps after chapter 100 or 150 it'll get better. It's obvious that the author has taken immense effort to write it, and props to him. It's visible to everyone. Good work on the novel author. I'm sorry but it's just not for me. I wish you success.

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Book_of_Dao

interesting background, nice change from the existing "growing up from nothing" cultivator type novels, detailed world building and varied plot. the cases and interactions are interesting, however the author has a serious case of foreshadowing addiction, loving to drop critical hints about future plots and build conspiracies in the background which is a bit of a turn off for me. additionally, although I don't mind it some people may, there's a lot, I mean a lot, of info dump in the world building. chapters of it.

1yr
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Mithren
LV 13 Badge

The tl;dr is that it needs work but shows promise. The author goes off on side tangents, dumps a lot of info, and fails at times to give the readers a reason to care about where things seem to be going. That said the author shows promise. I could see this being reworked a few times to become a proper book I'd be willing to buy to have on my shelf. The world and character feel like they've depth to them. The author just needs enough support to keep practicing their craft and before too long they'll be an amazing writer.

1yr
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Artoriastheabyssen

So i would rate this about a 4/5. I have read about 200 chapters and the book is rather slow paced. This isn’t an action cultivation novel but more of a slice of life about a judge and the odd cases he deals with and his job assignments in the order. As i said the story is slow and loaded with cultivation jargon, but if you’re looking for a relaxed pace novel i would recommend it.

1yr
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Caos_Caos_

interesting novel for a change of peace but too much info the ch design is a full 5 star but the rest is on 3 stars with stabilty of up at 4 the story is too slow paced and there are info that are useless like when there is the story how is founded a sect or a pavilion merchant, i was like (why wold i care how this sect or pavilion is created? progress the story already) it is a very funny novel but the too much info and side chs are ruining this novel so 3.6 the novel is not averenge it is ok you can read this if you are bored of the alywas usual cultivation novel where mc talk like some chosen one it is not a master piece but an ok novel

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Jay_Sah_3080

i liked the name emarled leaf cow,cows are so gentle😳

1yr
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Coliousthegod

bruh, this sounds really fun. I hope they do it kinda Phoenix Wright style

1yr
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Crimson_Solace

i will not give a detailed review , i will only tell what i like the most about this novel i like the most about the novel is he does not have a solitude persona and have friends like literally friends with equal standing cause in most eastern novel mc has friends but they seem like little subordinate to mc

1yr
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prakhar_saxena

i don't no where to start its a gem of a book .i dont know why its not getting the reputation it deserves a new concept with great characters that have both a depth and a personality different from other. here side characters dont feel like sode character and mc is not the overly powerful overly talented guy yes he is talented and string but there are people who are stronger than him moreover this dosen't have dumb people everywhere but how civilized people who know how to behave. read it it might be a bit boring in the start but becomes a absolute gem in the later parts

1yr
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Daoistd7913V

In the realm of comedy novels, "cultivation judge" reigns supreme as a true gem. The author's impeccable delivery and knack for foreshadowing elevate this book to the highest echelons of comedic brilliance. From start to finish, the narrative is laced with rib-tickling humor that leaves readers in stitches. What sets this novel apart is the author's uncanny ability to build anticipation through expertly placed foreshadowing. Every punchline is carefully planted, blossoming into hilarious moments that catch readers off guard. The seamless integration of comedic elements and well-executed foreshadowing creates an addictive reading experience. As a fan, I sincerely hope that the author continues to maintain the remarkable quality displayed in this novel. Their talent for comedy and storytelling shines brightly, leaving readers eagerly anticipating future works. "cultivation judge" is an absolute triumph, a testament to the author's comedic prowess, and a must-read for any fan of the genre.

1yr
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ImmortalDoggo

Too much details, it's too irritating to read, please author, reduce the details by removing the unecessary ones and only focus on the plot, chapter 27 in but the plot doesn't forward at all, over 10 chapters of useless and unecessary details that even if you skip it, you can still know the plot overall. DON'T PAD THE WORD COUNT BY UNECESSARY DETAILS...

1yr
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DaoistGIbjfL

It is one of the best new novels out here. Writing quality is 4 for me because of some writing mistakes, but the author is actively correcting them. Story development is amazing, character design is deep and not just mc but people around him too, regular updates and world backround is so well detailed and portrayed it sucks you in. Really recommend it!!

1yr
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cva34
LV 4 Badge

This is a really well written novel that clearly has a focus on world building and charcter writing. as far as ive read the plot seems to be more of episodic type arcs with different characters introduced in each ome

1yr
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Fent0
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Attention to detail I like but there is a reason Main characters need to have an ambition that the reader would like to see. People to like to have an overarching idea of where the story is going when reading and the MC for this story has zero ambition which means the reader has no idea what the main goal of this whole story is. Im around chapter 60 now and the Main character just wants to laze around and do nothing but is at the same time super serious about his work as a Judge which would make a cool side character but as a main character the story feels cheapened cuz of lack of ambition leaving the reader confused on the point of this story. i.e. Naruto has the ambition of being the hokage, luffy the ambition of being the pirate king now imagine naruto doesn't have that goal the story is just super lackluster. This can be mitigated like in bleach with certain enemies being the focal point to defeat so life can go back as normal but there is a reason bleach is always considered worse than naruto and one piece for a reason it is cuz ichigo does not have any sort of ambition and that is important for the reader to be invested in. If the main character wanted to become the greatest judge which was a title given in the universe that would mean I have something to look forward to and learn more about the universe thru world building which is well done in this novel. If the main character realized an ambition this novel would have been a much better read but going thru case by case feels like chore to me with no overarching goal in mind rather than something I enjoyed.

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Haiiko
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A really good novel with an interesting concept ! Keep up the good work Author!

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