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Hm... The discord link is not working, can u post a new one or maybe comment me a new link.🍕🍕
My only problem with this is the constant info dumping. One moment 2 people are talking to each other, then after the first 2 sentences, we get an explanation on how strong they are, how much universes they could destroy/trancendence, what law they have and thiers background that. I feel like you could introduce these slowly, like when they fight you could tell us the law they used or how powerful they're skill was.
everything is ok but i am not a big fan of [god or his follower] type novels. i like more of mc who is either solo or with companions. but still its not bad novel so far, just not my cup of tea. and yes this novel is unique in my opinion.
the concept was good and all and like the tag mc should be overpowered but the author in nerfing him too much. the world background is also very good but only if the author didn't nerfed the mc so much i would have continued the story.
Author here, and this is not a shameless review. Not a proper review either. Basically, this is not a review. This is important information for my current readers, and future readers. Note: I have decided to remove all chapters, and re-upload them again while reducing the word count from 3k words to 1,5k words minimum. And then to 2k minimum after a hundred chapters or so. Hopefully, this will only take a day, if not just two days. Thank you.
The writing is actually good. Just drop in to help support:) ......................................................................................................
Hi, author here with a shameless review, and a newbie at best. But I assure you that you won't hate this novel~ And I just wanted to say that thank you to the people that have graced my novel with their time, and hope they enjoy exploring the novel world with me. It is the first to a series of novels. I also want to say that this is a novel compromised of a bunch of stories inter-linked, in other words, there are a lot of Povs, which I consider Chronicles, that direct the movement of the story. Join in to find out what I mean. You don't definitely won't hate it~
i just love this novel. I won't say anything just read this novel and explore it's mysteries, it's one of the best novels i have ever read
Hm... The discord link is not working, can u post a new one or maybe comment me a new link.🍕🍕
My only problem with this is the constant info dumping. One moment 2 people are talking to each other, then after the first 2 sentences, we get an explanation on how strong they are, how much universes they could destroy/trancendence, what law they have and thiers background that. I feel like you could introduce these slowly, like when they fight you could tell us the law they used or how powerful they're skill was.
everything is ok but i am not a big fan of [god or his follower] type novels. i like more of mc who is either solo or with companions. but still its not bad novel so far, just not my cup of tea. and yes this novel is unique in my opinion.
the concept was good and all and like the tag mc should be overpowered but the author in nerfing him too much. the world background is also very good but only if the author didn't nerfed the mc so much i would have continued the story.
Author here, and this is not a shameless review. Not a proper review either. Basically, this is not a review. This is important information for my current readers, and future readers. Note: I have decided to remove all chapters, and re-upload them again while reducing the word count from 3k words to 1,5k words minimum. And then to 2k minimum after a hundred chapters or so. Hopefully, this will only take a day, if not just two days. Thank you.
The writing is actually good. Just drop in to help support:) ......................................................................................................
Hi, author here with a shameless review, and a newbie at best. But I assure you that you won't hate this novel~ And I just wanted to say that thank you to the people that have graced my novel with their time, and hope they enjoy exploring the novel world with me. It is the first to a series of novels. I also want to say that this is a novel compromised of a bunch of stories inter-linked, in other words, there are a lot of Povs, which I consider Chronicles, that direct the movement of the story. Join in to find out what I mean. You don't definitely won't hate it~
i just love this novel. I won't say anything just read this novel and explore it's mysteries, it's one of the best novels i have ever read