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Very nice novel. I have been searching for good AL novels for some time and found this by chance. I hope it continues. If there are other such novels please recommend them to me till I wait for new chapters of this one! Cheers!
silent reader here: keep going it's an great story 😁and just by the system alone to have to many materials to get like creating auto bots in runetera that would be fun.or creating the big intergalactic Mecha like from the legendary mechanic manga for the space problems hehehe.or creating an bio mechanical weapon for Kaisa hehehe
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Great story overall, slightly overrated but that's it really. Only wish the story actually had somewhat of a pacing forward, got halfway through the book and i was bored out of my mind. Literally nothing happens, there's full dialogues that lasts chapters, to then conclude that nothing really important were mentioned at all.
Great story. Translation is good as well. There a few mistakes here and there, but they are pretty much unnoticeable. The MC's ability is basically the system from The Legendary Mechanic, though tweeked in a way to work for LoL. Works surprisingly well, and he seems like a good level-headed character. Doesn't act like a spoiled young master, doesn't complain about his system non stop, but rather looked at what he got and decided to make use off it as best as possible. Plot is moving at a good pace, and he seems to have knowledge about LoL lore, but he lacks information about Arcane. So, he has a general idea of what's going on, but at the same time, not really. It's a fun read overall.
please don't drop this, I've been searching for this kind of fanfiction for ages. There're some here in WN but they don't have atleast 20 chapter then the Author drop it, I'm begging you maam/sir, Don't drop this.
Really great story, well worth the read. The main character doesn't instantly become OP, and it isn't a 1 to 1 with the show. The author seems to want to add their own twist and secrets to this new story. Really looking forward to future chapters. All in all a great read.
Eu achei simplesmente incrível essa novel, o autor descreveu muito bem o cenário, ambiente e as personalidades dos personagens em si, simplesmente incrível, continue com o ótimo trabalho ❤❤❤❤❤❤❤
the paragraphs are good the description of what the characters are and the backgrounds are good as well including all other such as the narration, wording, pov and the roles of the characters are good
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there are some mistakes here and there but nothing serious, there is something that I didn't like very much and that is the fact that mc gives all his inventions to caitlyn's family, but it's a good novel to pass time. I recommend. (Google translator)
well, I really liked this novel, it's very good to read, and ... I really hope that the author won't drop it.
Did you get the contract yet? or something. Tried reading the MTL version (basically translating the entire Quidan site using a google feature) and reached up to chapter 70 but the MTL just can't compare to this translation. More updates pls!
I've read upto 200 chapters in MTL and I can say that this fanfic is done right if the translation quality is good. The pacing of the story is just right, not too fast and not too slow. the character development is also good, he isnt OP in 20 chapters or so, in fact he is still very weak compared to others since the story is focusing more on world building, probably the groundwork for the future plots. overall, this fanfic may become one, if not the best Arcane fic to come.
take my stars for thy book is magnificent I for one cannot stop reading it for you have me hooked dear author take it all for when the sun rises annnnd... I forgot 😅😅😅
He knows a lot about the world he is writing in. His characters have their own personality and interact with each other. He posts pretty frequently, and the story is interesting with a system that isn’t boring. All in all a really good fic that deserves more views. Better then most, and I it looks like it’s getting better.
The book's QD link is down.. could this be riot? If so, they have to calm down, it's not that serious. Great job keep it up
Ngl the more you read the better it gets. It’s also one of the few arcane novels with more than 12 chapters.
This sh** is good. Keep up the good work on translating!! On to the spam, EHEHEHEHEHEHEHEHEHEHEHEHEHEHHEHEHEHEHEHEHEHEHEHEHEHEHEHEHEHEHEHEHEHEHEHEHEHEHEHEHEHEHEHEHEHEHEHEHEHEHEHEHEHEHEHEHEHEHEHEHEHEHEHEHEHEHEHEHEHEHEHEHEHEHEHEHEHEHEHEHEHEHEHEHEHEHEHEHEHE
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Synopsis: Li Lin s'est rendu à Piltover sur le continent Valoran. Il pensait à l'origine que sa vie serait si médiocre, jusqu'à ce qu'il devienne un ouvrier de la famille Gilamain, mais il a découvert qu'il avait en fait le système [Mécanicien]. . Dans ce monde magique de guerres et de conflits, Li Lin, qui connaît le sort de Runeterra, n'est pas satisfait des petites inventions telles que les vélos, les montres mécaniques et les générateurs qui lui ont valu la gloire et d'innombrables richesses. Pour faire face à la future crise de Runeterra, il sait très bien ce qu'il doit faire ! En partant d'une simple unité de puissance exosquelette, jusqu'à l'armure de plan source entièrement automatique de type "Iron Man" ; du robot à vapeur produit en série au champ de bataille et à la série Batian de mechas qui peuvent répondre aux crises mondiales ; en passant par la recherche sur l'astral magie du monde et magie des runes, il a même inventé la combinaison de la magie et de la technologie, ce qui est suffisant pour dominer le dieu machine du royaume du monde! Cependant, Li Lin, qui a un tel pouvoir, a déclaré à de nombreux héros lors de la conférence des pays unis pour former la League of Legends : "Je n'ai qu'un seul souhait du début à la fin, et c'est la paix dans le monde."
a synopsis of the novel and tags would be appreciated. a synopsis of the novel and tags would be appreciated.
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Great work. Fantastic translation. As on hitas, off to read the MTL - found by searching "Two Cities: I am building a mecha in Pi City"
Very nice novel. I have been searching for good AL novels for some time and found this by chance. I hope it continues. If there are other such novels please recommend them to me till I wait for new chapters of this one! Cheers!
silent reader here: keep going it's an great story 😁and just by the system alone to have to many materials to get like creating auto bots in runetera that would be fun.or creating the big intergalactic Mecha like from the legendary mechanic manga for the space problems hehehe.or creating an bio mechanical weapon for Kaisa hehehe
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Great story overall, slightly overrated but that's it really. Only wish the story actually had somewhat of a pacing forward, got halfway through the book and i was bored out of my mind. Literally nothing happens, there's full dialogues that lasts chapters, to then conclude that nothing really important were mentioned at all.
Great story. Translation is good as well. There a few mistakes here and there, but they are pretty much unnoticeable. The MC's ability is basically the system from The Legendary Mechanic, though tweeked in a way to work for LoL. Works surprisingly well, and he seems like a good level-headed character. Doesn't act like a spoiled young master, doesn't complain about his system non stop, but rather looked at what he got and decided to make use off it as best as possible. Plot is moving at a good pace, and he seems to have knowledge about LoL lore, but he lacks information about Arcane. So, he has a general idea of what's going on, but at the same time, not really. It's a fun read overall.
please don't drop this, I've been searching for this kind of fanfiction for ages. There're some here in WN but they don't have atleast 20 chapter then the Author drop it, I'm begging you maam/sir, Don't drop this.
Really great story, well worth the read. The main character doesn't instantly become OP, and it isn't a 1 to 1 with the show. The author seems to want to add their own twist and secrets to this new story. Really looking forward to future chapters. All in all a great read.
Eu achei simplesmente incrível essa novel, o autor descreveu muito bem o cenário, ambiente e as personalidades dos personagens em si, simplesmente incrível, continue com o ótimo trabalho ❤❤❤❤❤❤❤
the paragraphs are good the description of what the characters are and the backgrounds are good as well including all other such as the narration, wording, pov and the roles of the characters are good
جميلا جدن [img=exp][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
there are some mistakes here and there but nothing serious, there is something that I didn't like very much and that is the fact that mc gives all his inventions to caitlyn's family, but it's a good novel to pass time. I recommend. (Google translator)
well, I really liked this novel, it's very good to read, and ... I really hope that the author won't drop it.
Did you get the contract yet? or something. Tried reading the MTL version (basically translating the entire Quidan site using a google feature) and reached up to chapter 70 but the MTL just can't compare to this translation. More updates pls!
I've read upto 200 chapters in MTL and I can say that this fanfic is done right if the translation quality is good. The pacing of the story is just right, not too fast and not too slow. the character development is also good, he isnt OP in 20 chapters or so, in fact he is still very weak compared to others since the story is focusing more on world building, probably the groundwork for the future plots. overall, this fanfic may become one, if not the best Arcane fic to come.
take my stars for thy book is magnificent I for one cannot stop reading it for you have me hooked dear author take it all for when the sun rises annnnd... I forgot 😅😅😅
He knows a lot about the world he is writing in. His characters have their own personality and interact with each other. He posts pretty frequently, and the story is interesting with a system that isn’t boring. All in all a really good fic that deserves more views. Better then most, and I it looks like it’s getting better.
The book's QD link is down.. could this be riot? If so, they have to calm down, it's not that serious. Great job keep it up
Ngl the more you read the better it gets. It’s also one of the few arcane novels with more than 12 chapters.
This sh** is good. Keep up the good work on translating!! On to the spam, EHEHEHEHEHEHEHEHEHEHEHEHEHEHHEHEHEHEHEHEHEHEHEHEHEHEHEHEHEHEHEHEHEHEHEHEHEHEHEHEHEHEHEHEHEHEHEHEHEHEHEHEHEHEHEHEHEHEHEHEHEHEHEHEHEHEHEHEHEHEHEHEHEHEHEHEHEHEHEHEHEHEHEHEHEHEHEHEHEHE
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Synopsis: Li Lin s'est rendu à Piltover sur le continent Valoran. Il pensait à l'origine que sa vie serait si médiocre, jusqu'à ce qu'il devienne un ouvrier de la famille Gilamain, mais il a découvert qu'il avait en fait le système [Mécanicien]. . Dans ce monde magique de guerres et de conflits, Li Lin, qui connaît le sort de Runeterra, n'est pas satisfait des petites inventions telles que les vélos, les montres mécaniques et les générateurs qui lui ont valu la gloire et d'innombrables richesses. Pour faire face à la future crise de Runeterra, il sait très bien ce qu'il doit faire ! En partant d'une simple unité de puissance exosquelette, jusqu'à l'armure de plan source entièrement automatique de type "Iron Man" ; du robot à vapeur produit en série au champ de bataille et à la série Batian de mechas qui peuvent répondre aux crises mondiales ; en passant par la recherche sur l'astral magie du monde et magie des runes, il a même inventé la combinaison de la magie et de la technologie, ce qui est suffisant pour dominer le dieu machine du royaume du monde! Cependant, Li Lin, qui a un tel pouvoir, a déclaré à de nombreux héros lors de la conférence des pays unis pour former la League of Legends : "Je n'ai qu'un seul souhait du début à la fin, et c'est la paix dans le monde."
a synopsis of the novel and tags would be appreciated. a synopsis of the novel and tags would be appreciated.
i like were this is going.---------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------
Great work. Fantastic translation. As on hitas, off to read the MTL - found by searching "Two Cities: I am building a mecha in Pi City"