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The author is very good with making the dialogue seem natural like he was in the anime from the start The banter is fun to read and doesn't compromise the original characters personalities The mc himself is very likable and not overly pushy on his opinions he doesn't need to take Center Stage to be the main character he's written really well All in all it was a relaxing yet exhilarating and I look forward to the new chapters
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This is an interesting story but please make the harem at least 3 or 4 girl cause i mean it's gonna be boring if the MC has all the girls Right? anyway keep up with the good work dude and please at least update once a week thank you for the new chapter 😉
It feels like the main character is just an extra that adds his own opinion and nothing else. There is no canon deviation. He seems as cliche as cliche can get.
He made hajime as strong yoruichi witch is stupid he is mire if a side character than a protagonist he didn't get yue and he gets jealous when they maje out.
i feel MC is a side character ......................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................
i will leave and comeback later if you do as i told and rate you a higher one than this one
Can i ask something? Why did you send the main character in the second part to another world? I think he can at least spend some time in his original world. We would have understood the personality of the character a little more during the time he spent in his original world. But still, I hope you write the sequel of this funny novel soon.
is this harem??????????????? pls harem!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! pls pls pls pls harem pls pls pls pls pls pls pls
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The author is very good with making the dialogue seem natural like he was in the anime from the start The banter is fun to read and doesn't compromise the original characters personalities The mc himself is very likable and not overly pushy on his opinions he doesn't need to take Center Stage to be the main character he's written really well All in all it was a relaxing yet exhilarating and I look forward to the new chapters
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I'm looking forward to the continuation [img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][im[img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]g=update]
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This is an interesting story but please make the harem at least 3 or 4 girl cause i mean it's gonna be boring if the MC has all the girls Right? anyway keep up with the good work dude and please at least update once a week thank you for the new chapter 😉
It feels like the main character is just an extra that adds his own opinion and nothing else. There is no canon deviation. He seems as cliche as cliche can get.
He made hajime as strong yoruichi witch is stupid he is mire if a side character than a protagonist he didn't get yue and he gets jealous when they maje out.
i feel MC is a side character ......................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................
i will leave and comeback later if you do as i told and rate you a higher one than this one
Can i ask something? Why did you send the main character in the second part to another world? I think he can at least spend some time in his original world. We would have understood the personality of the character a little more during the time he spent in his original world. But still, I hope you write the sequel of this funny novel soon.
is this harem??????????????? pls harem!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! pls pls pls pls harem pls pls pls pls pls pls pls
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