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There are so many ups and downs. This story has such great potential. I can't wait to see what happens next.
Your book is imbued with mystery from the beginning and having different beings in your story is always a good point. It fascinated people and develop interest. I liked his MC had his dilemmas going on. Updating stability is good and you are perfectly building the essence of your world. Good job and keep writing.
Still short but a great beginning for a novel. We only saw the mc so I hope you will present us new characters to enjoy and help us read further
The storyline is well planned out, and it has the potential to turn into a really good story, the author has done a good job in creating the world background and characters writing a war story isn't easy so I hope the author adds good strategy in it.
No harem 5 star from me. [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
I like the synopsis. Love the concept so 4.8 for now just to motive you. Chane my review after few chapters.
Still quite early to say but love the war then so 4.8 for me. Will change my review after more chapters.[img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp]
Supporting my friend for his first novel. Nice start and good potential. Love to read what happens next.😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁[img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
Yeah, one of the best works I write. Give me the self-motivating first review. Hope you guys share your thought on the novel. Open to criticism and looking for improvement.
There are so many ups and downs. This story has such great potential. I can't wait to see what happens next.
Your book is imbued with mystery from the beginning and having different beings in your story is always a good point. It fascinated people and develop interest. I liked his MC had his dilemmas going on. Updating stability is good and you are perfectly building the essence of your world. Good job and keep writing.
Still short but a great beginning for a novel. We only saw the mc so I hope you will present us new characters to enjoy and help us read further
The storyline is well planned out, and it has the potential to turn into a really good story, the author has done a good job in creating the world background and characters writing a war story isn't easy so I hope the author adds good strategy in it.
No harem 5 star from me. [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
I like the synopsis. Love the concept so 4.8 for now just to motive you. Chane my review after few chapters.
Still quite early to say but love the war then so 4.8 for me. Will change my review after more chapters.[img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp]
Supporting my friend for his first novel. Nice start and good potential. Love to read what happens next.😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁[img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
Yeah, one of the best works I write. Give me the self-motivating first review. Hope you guys share your thought on the novel. Open to criticism and looking for improvement.