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Wow... I must say that this book is really worth the read. The characters, world-building, plot, and everything about the book are great. I've gotten pretty hooked up with it.
Lorem Ipsum errr, I don't remember the rest so let's move on. The story paints a vivid picture of the world where the action takes place. Through the usage of the tiny elements of the world, the author instantly immerses the reader into the rich in flavour world of his/her creation. I really hate speaking about the plot as I believe everyone should try it themselves. Despite that, solidly written cliches and relatively standard openings allows me to peer into what possibly this novel have in store. Execution of the further plot is what I'm actually curious about, as I have a feeling that it will exceed my expectations on this one. In the end, I cannot really say much about the story. It's a solid piece of the literature that promises a tasty piece of webnovel down the line. Now it's up to author to live up to the promises his/her chapters give.
Like the author said, 4 star at best. The novel is alright, a decent read for webnovel quality. Would I go crazy for it? Prob not, and I'll just treat this as a junk read.
Second book that involves system that I'm reading Jeri did a great job writing this👏👏👏. I'm curious after reading each chappy... The cliffhanger makes it more exciting? Making me full of curiosity 😄
The first chapter was kind of emotional and boring. The MC was cocky from the beginning and I was seriously waiting for him to change, but I didn't wait long. Thank you for that, author. The second chapter, although the begining jumped and didn't flow well, was a super fun and the most hooking story I have read this month. And the author's writing skill is just so good that you can't help but wanting more. The suspense was excellent and tbh, I felt his fear, although it was telling and not showing. The system is simply savage and I must give it to the author for the brilliance in coming up with such a unique system. The dragon's coming was comical and I wanted to say 'embarrassing' too, but after realizing it was a girl, I simply fell in love with how she was portrayed. Yes, her anger was justified and it made that plot real. But what ticked me off was not letting the story flow at that part I mentioned in the comment. Over all, this book has the potential to be among the best and I hope to see it up there, Jeri. You did a wonderful job and I'm impressed.
It's still very early on, but the potential is enormous, with already engaging and well written characters and an excellent world setting. So far, the story setup is wonderful and piqued my interest. Kali❤️ . . . . . . . . . . . . She bribed me into giving her a five-star rating.🙂
My name is Walter Hartwell White. I live at 308 Negra Arroyo Lane, Albuquerque, New Mexico, 87104. This is my confession. If you're watching this tape, I'm probably dead– murdered by my brother-in-law, Hank Schrader. Hank has been building a meth empire for over a year now, and using me as his chemist. Shortly after my 50th birthday, he asked that I use my chemistry knowledge to cook methamphetamine, which he would then sell using connections that he made through his career with the DEA. I was... astounded. I... I always thought Hank was a very moral man, and I was particularly vulnerable at the time – something he knew and took advantage of. I was reeling from a cancer diagnosis that was poised to bankrupt my family. Hank took me in on a ride-along and showed me just how much money even a small meth operation could make. And I was weak. I didn't want my family to go into financial ruin, so I agreed. Hank had a partner, a businessman named Gustavo Fring. Hank sold me into servitude to
According to the first two chapters I read, this novel has a unique plot whilst it doesn't waste time to hook the audience to immerse in the story as it progresses. Honestly, I think it's a typical japanese rom-com fantasy genre where the story will be interesting as well as hilarious to read. For someone who read cautious hero, Iruma Kun, Slime datte Kun, this is a feast. Although the character design is slightly sloppy and it doesn't give time to attach oneself to the character much. but what can you expect from a fast plot! It is what it is. As it is a plot driven story, I'm thinking it has the potential to reach the top rankings if the author does portray the story at its best standards while maintaining quality as it is. I recommend this novel to anyone who likes a light hearted novel with adventurous story (Though it might get dark in the future). My best wishes to the author who made this amazing story. 😊 Hope you reach great heights, Jeri.
A MUST READ STORY! All in all, this is a well-written novel with a unique take on the typical isekie-system novels. I have a love-hate relationship with the ML, but at least he isn't your typical protag who is either too passive, or too dark, or too detached in the beginning chapters. He can be fairly relatable, and I am anticipating a human growth arc for him very soon. So kudos to the characters! Kali is cool as well, and even the system feels like an actual character without having any of those typical system qualities. The world-building, the story pace, the mystery elements, and everything else with beautifully woven together. In places, the language might seem a lil unpolished, but that doesn't dim the storyline at all. If you're a fan of fresh stories based on your favourite trope, I will highly recommend this :>
It's overall great :3 Lucas is frustrating, but because of that, it's pretty interesting to see his character development. Kali is a very good character ^o^ She's supporting the mc's character pretty well :) Maybe I'll come back and give another review once there are more chaps ^ω^
I like how author wrote the mc, more space for developments :>. The story itself moves at a comfortable pace; not too slow, not too fast. I like how the characters interact with each other, Kali and Lucas as a duo seemed nice and comical. Minor nitpicks, some description regarding the setting was a bit awkward to me, but it isn't that much of a problem. I'll be looking forward to this book and Lucas' character development. Keep it going, author! ^^
I like the interaction between the characters well-done author, although the mc can be a bit annoying with his other persona but hey it's pretty accurate to some. and also thanks for the chapter I'm a super bot ready to support this novel
This is a must read for me! With each chapter, the story gets better and better. I don't think many other stories can compare to the uniqueness of the storyline and great execution of the world that's being built. I think the characters are done well considering they evoke an emotional response from me. I find myself cheering them on as they go through the story. I'll be reading each update from here forward!
What an absolute new gem on the platform! Written by the ever talented Jeri_ and has delivered another great story. The main characters are both interesting and they are not flat one dimensional. Their feelings and thoughts are well written and expressive. The story is tried and true but Jeri_ has brought a nice and unique twist to the system and transmigration genres. As the novel is new cant really attest to the upload frequency but I hope the author keeps the story going and uploads enough to satisfy my hunger to read more!!! The world is beautifully described and can’t wait to see more of this new world our MCs find themselves in. Absolutely a must read! Can’t wait to see what’s in store!!
I've read the author's previous work so I didn't even bother to skim through the synopsis I gladly flew to the first chapter. This is the first ML novel I've read to this length and I've seen immense improvement in the author's writing style. The descriptions are soooo good, I pictured myself watching it on Netflix. This is giving me pokémon vibes and as a lover of Pikachu, the hour has come to read til' this ends ✊
A different spin on how mc gets isekai’d. Realistic frustration, mc not OP yet too, which makes it fun to read and he is bit annoying but in a good way. Also I love that female lead is not afraid to express her anger to him, to mc cluelessness😂 it adds that little spice on how those two gonna work on those issues in next chapters Can’t wait to see how story develops futher.
This author here is shameless to think that this story is worth 4 stars. I want to warn you before reading that the first few chapters may make you cringe, but that's just for now. I hope you will enjoy this story. I am still a newbie author so if you see any mistakes please point them out and I will do my best to correct them. 🌝 🦋🦋🦋🦋🦋
This is a different story from what we read usually on webnovel with the story being more character driven than plot driven. The POV switches between the ML and FL and shows both their emotions beautifully. For anyone wondering if they should read this book, id say yes read the book but also know full well that it will take you 30 chapters minimum to start falling in love with the characters and care about their journey so have patience. The writing quality is good, no major grammatical mistakes or spelling mistakes, however at 6chaps/week the update stability is 3 stars at best, hopefully the author works on it and improves it in the future
Wow... I must say that this book is really worth the read. The characters, world-building, plot, and everything about the book are great. I've gotten pretty hooked up with it.
Lorem Ipsum errr, I don't remember the rest so let's move on. The story paints a vivid picture of the world where the action takes place. Through the usage of the tiny elements of the world, the author instantly immerses the reader into the rich in flavour world of his/her creation. I really hate speaking about the plot as I believe everyone should try it themselves. Despite that, solidly written cliches and relatively standard openings allows me to peer into what possibly this novel have in store. Execution of the further plot is what I'm actually curious about, as I have a feeling that it will exceed my expectations on this one. In the end, I cannot really say much about the story. It's a solid piece of the literature that promises a tasty piece of webnovel down the line. Now it's up to author to live up to the promises his/her chapters give.
Like the author said, 4 star at best. The novel is alright, a decent read for webnovel quality. Would I go crazy for it? Prob not, and I'll just treat this as a junk read.
Second book that involves system that I'm reading Jeri did a great job writing this👏👏👏. I'm curious after reading each chappy... The cliffhanger makes it more exciting? Making me full of curiosity 😄
The first chapter was kind of emotional and boring. The MC was cocky from the beginning and I was seriously waiting for him to change, but I didn't wait long. Thank you for that, author. The second chapter, although the begining jumped and didn't flow well, was a super fun and the most hooking story I have read this month. And the author's writing skill is just so good that you can't help but wanting more. The suspense was excellent and tbh, I felt his fear, although it was telling and not showing. The system is simply savage and I must give it to the author for the brilliance in coming up with such a unique system. The dragon's coming was comical and I wanted to say 'embarrassing' too, but after realizing it was a girl, I simply fell in love with how she was portrayed. Yes, her anger was justified and it made that plot real. But what ticked me off was not letting the story flow at that part I mentioned in the comment. Over all, this book has the potential to be among the best and I hope to see it up there, Jeri. You did a wonderful job and I'm impressed.
It's still very early on, but the potential is enormous, with already engaging and well written characters and an excellent world setting. So far, the story setup is wonderful and piqued my interest. Kali❤️ . . . . . . . . . . . . She bribed me into giving her a five-star rating.🙂
My name is Walter Hartwell White. I live at 308 Negra Arroyo Lane, Albuquerque, New Mexico, 87104. This is my confession. If you're watching this tape, I'm probably dead– murdered by my brother-in-law, Hank Schrader. Hank has been building a meth empire for over a year now, and using me as his chemist. Shortly after my 50th birthday, he asked that I use my chemistry knowledge to cook methamphetamine, which he would then sell using connections that he made through his career with the DEA. I was... astounded. I... I always thought Hank was a very moral man, and I was particularly vulnerable at the time – something he knew and took advantage of. I was reeling from a cancer diagnosis that was poised to bankrupt my family. Hank took me in on a ride-along and showed me just how much money even a small meth operation could make. And I was weak. I didn't want my family to go into financial ruin, so I agreed. Hank had a partner, a businessman named Gustavo Fring. Hank sold me into servitude to
According to the first two chapters I read, this novel has a unique plot whilst it doesn't waste time to hook the audience to immerse in the story as it progresses. Honestly, I think it's a typical japanese rom-com fantasy genre where the story will be interesting as well as hilarious to read. For someone who read cautious hero, Iruma Kun, Slime datte Kun, this is a feast. Although the character design is slightly sloppy and it doesn't give time to attach oneself to the character much. but what can you expect from a fast plot! It is what it is. As it is a plot driven story, I'm thinking it has the potential to reach the top rankings if the author does portray the story at its best standards while maintaining quality as it is. I recommend this novel to anyone who likes a light hearted novel with adventurous story (Though it might get dark in the future). My best wishes to the author who made this amazing story. 😊 Hope you reach great heights, Jeri.
A MUST READ STORY! All in all, this is a well-written novel with a unique take on the typical isekie-system novels. I have a love-hate relationship with the ML, but at least he isn't your typical protag who is either too passive, or too dark, or too detached in the beginning chapters. He can be fairly relatable, and I am anticipating a human growth arc for him very soon. So kudos to the characters! Kali is cool as well, and even the system feels like an actual character without having any of those typical system qualities. The world-building, the story pace, the mystery elements, and everything else with beautifully woven together. In places, the language might seem a lil unpolished, but that doesn't dim the storyline at all. If you're a fan of fresh stories based on your favourite trope, I will highly recommend this :>
It's overall great :3 Lucas is frustrating, but because of that, it's pretty interesting to see his character development. Kali is a very good character ^o^ She's supporting the mc's character pretty well :) Maybe I'll come back and give another review once there are more chaps ^ω^
I like how author wrote the mc, more space for developments :>. The story itself moves at a comfortable pace; not too slow, not too fast. I like how the characters interact with each other, Kali and Lucas as a duo seemed nice and comical. Minor nitpicks, some description regarding the setting was a bit awkward to me, but it isn't that much of a problem. I'll be looking forward to this book and Lucas' character development. Keep it going, author! ^^
I like the interaction between the characters well-done author, although the mc can be a bit annoying with his other persona but hey it's pretty accurate to some. and also thanks for the chapter I'm a super bot ready to support this novel
This is a must read for me! With each chapter, the story gets better and better. I don't think many other stories can compare to the uniqueness of the storyline and great execution of the world that's being built. I think the characters are done well considering they evoke an emotional response from me. I find myself cheering them on as they go through the story. I'll be reading each update from here forward!
What an absolute new gem on the platform! Written by the ever talented Jeri_ and has delivered another great story. The main characters are both interesting and they are not flat one dimensional. Their feelings and thoughts are well written and expressive. The story is tried and true but Jeri_ has brought a nice and unique twist to the system and transmigration genres. As the novel is new cant really attest to the upload frequency but I hope the author keeps the story going and uploads enough to satisfy my hunger to read more!!! The world is beautifully described and can’t wait to see more of this new world our MCs find themselves in. Absolutely a must read! Can’t wait to see what’s in store!!
I've read the author's previous work so I didn't even bother to skim through the synopsis I gladly flew to the first chapter. This is the first ML novel I've read to this length and I've seen immense improvement in the author's writing style. The descriptions are soooo good, I pictured myself watching it on Netflix. This is giving me pokémon vibes and as a lover of Pikachu, the hour has come to read til' this ends ✊
A different spin on how mc gets isekai’d. Realistic frustration, mc not OP yet too, which makes it fun to read and he is bit annoying but in a good way. Also I love that female lead is not afraid to express her anger to him, to mc cluelessness😂 it adds that little spice on how those two gonna work on those issues in next chapters Can’t wait to see how story develops futher.
This author here is shameless to think that this story is worth 4 stars. I want to warn you before reading that the first few chapters may make you cringe, but that's just for now. I hope you will enjoy this story. I am still a newbie author so if you see any mistakes please point them out and I will do my best to correct them. 🌝 🦋🦋🦋🦋🦋
This is a different story from what we read usually on webnovel with the story being more character driven than plot driven. The POV switches between the ML and FL and shows both their emotions beautifully. For anyone wondering if they should read this book, id say yes read the book but also know full well that it will take you 30 chapters minimum to start falling in love with the characters and care about their journey so have patience. The writing quality is good, no major grammatical mistakes or spelling mistakes, however at 6chaps/week the update stability is 3 stars at best, hopefully the author works on it and improves it in the future