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Dont stop.......... please dont stop this got me hooked i really love it. if u want i can even gift u with castle. and lots and lots of power stones, but please continue.......... even tho this is completed different from original version but some how it gets me think about mahabharatha all the time. it express the feeling of an orphan who got the worlds best mother, SI PLEASE CONTINUE
sir please continue this novel. we love it too much, be not afraid of negative comments if there are people there to oppose u then we are here to support you so please continue it
it would be much better if you dont stop writing this after leaving on a cliffhanger
Your novel is really good, with interesting characters and a story that keeps readers hooked. Your writing is clear, and your ideas are great. Keep going, because your story has the potential to be something special.
it's been almost of time please update new chapter I'm curious about next story development
I am muslim and a student of comparative religion and I do not recommend this novel as it is misleading and biased. and I will never tolerate playing with holy scriptures of major religions. I will police complaint if possible this novel spreads disinformation and discord between people. as a muslim even I know genuine mahabharata because I study neutrally. those who accuse me of narrow mindedness please eat dirt.
GREAT STORY OVERALL FROM MY POINT OF VIEW. BUT WHY THE HECK IT'S NOT UPDATING HUH! ??
Author ,I hope you are in good health and start writing this novel again.Anyone who is reading my comment,pls understand that this is just a fiction and not real.If you come looking for the real “Mahabharata” on (webnovel) then there is issue with “you”.If you have already read the poem by Sage Vyasa ,then why are you being influenced by what is written in this story.Just enjoy it or just ignore it. Criticizing the author here for what he has wrote in his story makes no sense .He is just trying to create a story that is enjoyable and has clearly written in his description that this story has no relation to the real Mahabharata whatsoever and is just an au.No need to get hyped up.
First read the original book there many things is not correct in tv shows like Karna was not taught by Dronacharya and many others so first read the book and do not pass judgement . Some say Mahabharata was written by victor but this is not correct it was written by Ved Vyas . He was the one from which Pandavas and Kaurava emerged so no matter who won hi Great grandchildren died in the war . The he with the help of lord Ganesha the book was written . So kindly i advise you to read the book it's entertaining like awesome novels.
Because of you guys the writer is not updating this novel. Not everyone has the capability of becoming author or right something. You guys don't have any kind of creativity in your brain and if someone has it you will try to say that his writing or his thinking is bad. If you have the capability then write a novel about Jesus Christ or Mohammed I promise you I will read the novel. Oh and also mahabharat is actually fiction it is the oldest novel written by Hindus. Have you ever thought a woman having five husband this novel is actually rivers harem novel and maybe NTR also. also how can I forget about Krishna he has the biggest Harem in all the histories in planet Earth (16,000 wives). If you really think that mahabharat is not a made up story then the second person in history who has the most wife is King Solomon and he has 700 wives and 300 concubines totally 1000 and the third person is Maharaja Bhupinder Singh and he has 365 wives, one for each day of the year. So I can say mahabharat is one of the greatest novel ever written and also it is a made up story and it has everything in it action, romance, Harem, rivers Harem, NTR, blackmail, betrayal, gender rivers act, public humiliation, gambling, horror, mystery, drama and etc.
The author when the next chapter will get released you have already taken too long of a break from this work no. you should know it's been more than 8 months.when you took the break you told us readers that you will go for the break for 3 months only. so upload your work fast yaar we are still waiting for what will be next. And one more thing if you are not going to continue the story then at least tell us that you have dropped this novel so we don't wait for you to upload this novel. I have already been faking and waited for this work for more than 8 months so tell us something.
hello? author update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update please bro please .......
please update new chapters .Its really interesting,please continue to write this work like your other work
please update its been 3 months more than the mentioned hiatus, I really like this novel.
Author please Update this Novel. I have now also given it power stone, So please UPDATE THIS NOVEL AUTHOR
por ahora me está encantando voy por el capítulo 140 no se porque se pelearon tanto en las reseñas pero está espectacular la historia ví que el autor lleva meses sin actualizar esta bien o ya dropeo la historia ?
There are some grammatical mistakes but overall like it . I feel so bad for Pandavas too. I hope Karn makes everyone united
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Dont stop.......... please dont stop this got me hooked i really love it. if u want i can even gift u with castle. and lots and lots of power stones, but please continue.......... even tho this is completed different from original version but some how it gets me think about mahabharatha all the time. it express the feeling of an orphan who got the worlds best mother, SI PLEASE CONTINUE
sir please continue this novel. we love it too much, be not afraid of negative comments if there are people there to oppose u then we are here to support you so please continue it
it would be much better if you dont stop writing this after leaving on a cliffhanger
Your novel is really good, with interesting characters and a story that keeps readers hooked. Your writing is clear, and your ideas are great. Keep going, because your story has the potential to be something special.
it's been almost of time please update new chapter I'm curious about next story development
I am muslim and a student of comparative religion and I do not recommend this novel as it is misleading and biased. and I will never tolerate playing with holy scriptures of major religions. I will police complaint if possible this novel spreads disinformation and discord between people. as a muslim even I know genuine mahabharata because I study neutrally. those who accuse me of narrow mindedness please eat dirt.
GREAT STORY OVERALL FROM MY POINT OF VIEW. BUT WHY THE HECK IT'S NOT UPDATING HUH! ??
Author ,I hope you are in good health and start writing this novel again.Anyone who is reading my comment,pls understand that this is just a fiction and not real.If you come looking for the real “Mahabharata” on (webnovel) then there is issue with “you”.If you have already read the poem by Sage Vyasa ,then why are you being influenced by what is written in this story.Just enjoy it or just ignore it. Criticizing the author here for what he has wrote in his story makes no sense .He is just trying to create a story that is enjoyable and has clearly written in his description that this story has no relation to the real Mahabharata whatsoever and is just an au.No need to get hyped up.
First read the original book there many things is not correct in tv shows like Karna was not taught by Dronacharya and many others so first read the book and do not pass judgement . Some say Mahabharata was written by victor but this is not correct it was written by Ved Vyas . He was the one from which Pandavas and Kaurava emerged so no matter who won hi Great grandchildren died in the war . The he with the help of lord Ganesha the book was written . So kindly i advise you to read the book it's entertaining like awesome novels.
Because of you guys the writer is not updating this novel. Not everyone has the capability of becoming author or right something. You guys don't have any kind of creativity in your brain and if someone has it you will try to say that his writing or his thinking is bad. If you have the capability then write a novel about Jesus Christ or Mohammed I promise you I will read the novel. Oh and also mahabharat is actually fiction it is the oldest novel written by Hindus. Have you ever thought a woman having five husband this novel is actually rivers harem novel and maybe NTR also. also how can I forget about Krishna he has the biggest Harem in all the histories in planet Earth (16,000 wives). If you really think that mahabharat is not a made up story then the second person in history who has the most wife is King Solomon and he has 700 wives and 300 concubines totally 1000 and the third person is Maharaja Bhupinder Singh and he has 365 wives, one for each day of the year. So I can say mahabharat is one of the greatest novel ever written and also it is a made up story and it has everything in it action, romance, Harem, rivers Harem, NTR, blackmail, betrayal, gender rivers act, public humiliation, gambling, horror, mystery, drama and etc.
The author when the next chapter will get released you have already taken too long of a break from this work no. you should know it's been more than 8 months.when you took the break you told us readers that you will go for the break for 3 months only. so upload your work fast yaar we are still waiting for what will be next. And one more thing if you are not going to continue the story then at least tell us that you have dropped this novel so we don't wait for you to upload this novel. I have already been faking and waited for this work for more than 8 months so tell us something.
hello? author update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update please bro please .......
please update new chapters .Its really interesting,please continue to write this work like your other work
please update its been 3 months more than the mentioned hiatus, I really like this novel.
Author please Update this Novel. I have now also given it power stone, So please UPDATE THIS NOVEL AUTHOR
por ahora me está encantando voy por el capítulo 140 no se porque se pelearon tanto en las reseñas pero está espectacular la historia ví que el autor lleva meses sin actualizar esta bien o ya dropeo la historia ?
There are some grammatical mistakes but overall like it . I feel so bad for Pandavas too. I hope Karn makes everyone united
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