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THIS BOOK IS SOO COOL. It starts garb you in and so does the plot. It's a unique type, not much to be found. On the other hand, the writing is simple. Is a great story I would recommend all to read it. HOPE IT WINS.
Thank you so much for the support everyone! Just a heads up, if you don't feel like vibing with this novel, please read up to chapter 13, I got a little surprise for you there hehhe~ >///<
Hey author. Hope you're doing well. I'm loving your novel and I'm starting over. Much love to you fam. Your work is a light in the darkness that is life.
As someone who added 36k popularity in total,( 5k on Arisu, 25k on Kazuichi and 10 for tris) I think it's fairly obvious who I'm rooting for as the main couple (if there is).
Author-san... You wrote an amazing novel. Why? Because I read somewhere that " A good book makes you want to live in the story. A great book gives you no choice " and it's true you've transported me to the world your mind made!! So cool! THANK YOU🌸❤️
I read your other novel and it was great so I am expecting this book to be a great story too even though I'm not reading it yet. But don't push yourself too hard and take some rest if you need it. We would rather have a short hiatus rather than a long hiatus because you are sick after all.
Awww yeah. I read this story and had a blast with it. This is really good and I usually don't read zombie stuff. The worldbuilding is excellent. description top notch, characters are interesting, and so on. There are some decisions characters make that make me laugh or that I don't agree with at times but that's all in the fun of the story. Best wishes to the author and I hope you also give my stories a peek.
So I read it, here's my two cents about this book, at first I like how the story was portrayed by first person but it suddenly change to third person that actually mad me lose interest it changes abruptly. I do not relate to the main character so I was not hook, I think, just my suggestion you should consider changing point to point perspective with considerations. The writing quality it good and it was mysterious but some may not find it catching when the mystery is not that something where when you read it you'll be full of questions, In terms of plot and world building, I think it's good to make it more interesting. Remember, that's just my opinion don't take it to the heart. It's better than average just need some work, keep up the good work
I was not expecting anything when I started reading this. BUT this was a pleasant surprise because I find myself enjoying reading them. It's immersive, engaging and overall a pleasant read. The author really knows how to hook the readers. Give it a try!
Just let me say one thing in advance your novel is great, from the introduction of the characters to the world-building. The story isn't too fast- or too slow-paced and has a perfect tempo. I will definetly keep reading this story!
Overall I actually enjoyed parts of the story. I hope this one continues to release new chapters. I wanna see more of how his shut in lifestyle affects his journey through the new apocalyptic world with the zombies.
Shameless author here reviewing his own work! This is not your typical zombie story as the virus itself doesn't work the way it is usually portrayed in most novels. It still affects the brain, but that doesn't mean it turns the infected into undead. I hope you enjoy this novel about our shut-in. As usual, all your power stones, comments, reviews, and gifts are always welcome! Send them my way and I'll upload even more chapters aside from the regular updates. I assure you that this is worth the read so add it to your collection! hehhe~ This is DaisukiDayoSenpai signing out ^-^
Another novel from this suler talented author.... Always a fan of weak to storng type of story because we can see a lots of rolarcoaster type of vibe tgere and do read it and now become a fan of it.... The world background and the characters are super cool and well written story.... Hope this gonna ve a master piece for our author...
Dear author Im already a fan of your book one and this one is quite interesting too. I love the world background and the character building.....There is so much in this story to learn and live. Your writing skill make the imagination alive. kuddo author.... all the best
I hate bullies ... di ld you read mine story?? You will get to know what my character had done with them😂 Btw just came here A WHILE AGO and already loving it.... the story the synopsis everything is amazing can't stop to give you ⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐ stars !
Well well well the story is well written and I'm already in love with the plot. The description of the characters is straight forward and simple, The first person point of view makes it more interesting, I loved your story and I am definitely gonna read this one till the end ❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️
I'm bad at writing reviews so I'll be honest as possible. The story was intriguing and the author has good writing skills. Aside from the minor mistakes the author made, everything is all set! If there's something I don't like, it's the anime cliche like opening the bathroom door while there is a girl inside or the FL with the typical anime girl stereotype.
THIS BOOK IS SOO COOL. It starts garb you in and so does the plot. It's a unique type, not much to be found. On the other hand, the writing is simple. Is a great story I would recommend all to read it. HOPE IT WINS.
Thank you so much for the support everyone! Just a heads up, if you don't feel like vibing with this novel, please read up to chapter 13, I got a little surprise for you there hehhe~ >///<
Hey author. Hope you're doing well. I'm loving your novel and I'm starting over. Much love to you fam. Your work is a light in the darkness that is life.
As someone who added 36k popularity in total,( 5k on Arisu, 25k on Kazuichi and 10 for tris) I think it's fairly obvious who I'm rooting for as the main couple (if there is).
Author-san... You wrote an amazing novel. Why? Because I read somewhere that " A good book makes you want to live in the story. A great book gives you no choice " and it's true you've transported me to the world your mind made!! So cool! THANK YOU🌸❤️
I read your other novel and it was great so I am expecting this book to be a great story too even though I'm not reading it yet. But don't push yourself too hard and take some rest if you need it. We would rather have a short hiatus rather than a long hiatus because you are sick after all.
Awww yeah. I read this story and had a blast with it. This is really good and I usually don't read zombie stuff. The worldbuilding is excellent. description top notch, characters are interesting, and so on. There are some decisions characters make that make me laugh or that I don't agree with at times but that's all in the fun of the story. Best wishes to the author and I hope you also give my stories a peek.
So I read it, here's my two cents about this book, at first I like how the story was portrayed by first person but it suddenly change to third person that actually mad me lose interest it changes abruptly. I do not relate to the main character so I was not hook, I think, just my suggestion you should consider changing point to point perspective with considerations. The writing quality it good and it was mysterious but some may not find it catching when the mystery is not that something where when you read it you'll be full of questions, In terms of plot and world building, I think it's good to make it more interesting. Remember, that's just my opinion don't take it to the heart. It's better than average just need some work, keep up the good work
I was not expecting anything when I started reading this. BUT this was a pleasant surprise because I find myself enjoying reading them. It's immersive, engaging and overall a pleasant read. The author really knows how to hook the readers. Give it a try!
Just let me say one thing in advance your novel is great, from the introduction of the characters to the world-building. The story isn't too fast- or too slow-paced and has a perfect tempo. I will definetly keep reading this story!
Overall I actually enjoyed parts of the story. I hope this one continues to release new chapters. I wanna see more of how his shut in lifestyle affects his journey through the new apocalyptic world with the zombies.
Shameless author here reviewing his own work! This is not your typical zombie story as the virus itself doesn't work the way it is usually portrayed in most novels. It still affects the brain, but that doesn't mean it turns the infected into undead. I hope you enjoy this novel about our shut-in. As usual, all your power stones, comments, reviews, and gifts are always welcome! Send them my way and I'll upload even more chapters aside from the regular updates. I assure you that this is worth the read so add it to your collection! hehhe~ This is DaisukiDayoSenpai signing out ^-^
Another novel from this suler talented author.... Always a fan of weak to storng type of story because we can see a lots of rolarcoaster type of vibe tgere and do read it and now become a fan of it.... The world background and the characters are super cool and well written story.... Hope this gonna ve a master piece for our author...
Dear author Im already a fan of your book one and this one is quite interesting too. I love the world background and the character building.....There is so much in this story to learn and live. Your writing skill make the imagination alive. kuddo author.... all the best
I hate bullies ... di ld you read mine story?? You will get to know what my character had done with them😂 Btw just came here A WHILE AGO and already loving it.... the story the synopsis everything is amazing can't stop to give you ⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐ stars !
Well well well the story is well written and I'm already in love with the plot. The description of the characters is straight forward and simple, The first person point of view makes it more interesting, I loved your story and I am definitely gonna read this one till the end ❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️
I'm bad at writing reviews so I'll be honest as possible. The story was intriguing and the author has good writing skills. Aside from the minor mistakes the author made, everything is all set! If there's something I don't like, it's the anime cliche like opening the bathroom door while there is a girl inside or the FL with the typical anime girl stereotype.