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oh come on dude where the hell are the chapters at like really I wanted to reread this but all of the chapters are gone how could you do this author
a very good novel i like the way that its so straight forward but the writing is sometimes... interesting from the grammatical aspect
maybe sometimes unusual or bad writing but i like the story and how he goes on about it
fast h@४६m. I like mind manipulation plots so this is for me. has a huge vatiety of girls. read it
i just don't like the start, he just adapt to everything that happened to him easily.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,..,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,..,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,,.
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Giving my honest opinion, it is a very good read, as far as I am reading it is very good, there is no Yuri, stupid morals, nonsense of hesitation or meek MC, this is your novel if you like yanderes and ocenity , So I give it a 9/10, not nine because it is impossible with the number of women it has to pay attention to each one unless it does 100 chapters for each one so it was something that was not I could avoid, although I like the harem, that would be its fault that I see.
I am the bone of my XP Grinding is my body Spamming is my blood I have written countless messages Unknown to Trolls Nor known to Mods Have withstood countless aching joints but my fingers just can't stop ( ͡° ͜ʖ ͡°) So as I pray UNLIMITED EXP WORKS!!
More Chapters Every Day Brother Heheheh Thanks For Novel Brother Hopefully Not DROPPED In Novel Brother And Keep Spirit Brother Nice Novel Brother God bless you Brother [img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
I love it bro, i hope continue even if it's for slow updates [img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
oh come on dude where the hell are the chapters at like really I wanted to reread this but all of the chapters are gone how could you do this author
a very good novel i like the way that its so straight forward but the writing is sometimes... interesting from the grammatical aspect
maybe sometimes unusual or bad writing but i like the story and how he goes on about it
fast h@४६m. I like mind manipulation plots so this is for me. has a huge vatiety of girls. read it
i just don't like the start, he just adapt to everything that happened to him easily.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,..,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,..,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,,.
💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕 . . . . . . . . . 💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕
Giving my honest opinion, it is a very good read, as far as I am reading it is very good, there is no Yuri, stupid morals, nonsense of hesitation or meek MC, this is your novel if you like yanderes and ocenity , So I give it a 9/10, not nine because it is impossible with the number of women it has to pay attention to each one unless it does 100 chapters for each one so it was something that was not I could avoid, although I like the harem, that would be its fault that I see.
I am the bone of my XP Grinding is my body Spamming is my blood I have written countless messages Unknown to Trolls Nor known to Mods Have withstood countless aching joints but my fingers just can't stop ( ͡° ͜ʖ ͡°) So as I pray UNLIMITED EXP WORKS!!
More Chapters Every Day Brother Heheheh Thanks For Novel Brother Hopefully Not DROPPED In Novel Brother And Keep Spirit Brother Nice Novel Brother God bless you Brother [img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
I love it bro, i hope continue even if it's for slow updates [img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
Ohh Bloody Hell !!!!!! All Chapters Are Gone