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It's amazing. ....it's been a while since I actually saw a Dimensional chat story with powerful and mature characters. .........pls don't drop
world background is decent character design is average at best story development is also decent writing quality is bad the writing it self is understandable but it is not something that i want to read regularly even if the story is amazing if the writing quality is bad its gonna turn a lot of people away. although i encourage the author to write more and maybe try some free spell checking software its gonna help with the writing quality. thanks for writing the book and i wish the author good luck on their next endeavor
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it's fun. even though it is sometimes repeated, just like part of the original! I still liked it.
I read your story, It's good but, you need to enhance your English skill, it's readable and the story is good so far, I hope you don't drop this[img=update]
Great story. Love the reincarnated sorcerer theme because one if my favorite manwha is I am the sorcerer king. I like the OC characters because it gives the story its uniqueness unlike other stories where we get the same old girls from orher stories dating the mc. Thank you author!!!
I want to read it and I tried reading it but a pity why good story has to have an harem in it. I feel devastated but my dislike for harem can't be overcome on how good of such writing quality
It might be a good idea, but i can't be really sure , cause the grammar is really bad... like really bad. I couldn't make it past the first chapter.
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Hello everyone i am the author of this story. And for sure i will give the best review 😉. I hope you will like this book, also i am not good at English so if you ever read some problem you can comment then i will edit it ☺️.
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If the iterations and personalities of the characters improve, you may read it again. The dialogues feel empty and seem to copy and paste. All that's left is for the MC to say "I know your future" and ruin the whole story with clichés.
It's amazing. ....it's been a while since I actually saw a Dimensional chat story with powerful and mature characters. .........pls don't drop
world background is decent character design is average at best story development is also decent writing quality is bad the writing it self is understandable but it is not something that i want to read regularly even if the story is amazing if the writing quality is bad its gonna turn a lot of people away. although i encourage the author to write more and maybe try some free spell checking software its gonna help with the writing quality. thanks for writing the book and i wish the author good luck on their next endeavor
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Spoiler de révélation it's fun. even though it is sometimes repeated, just like part of the original! I still liked it.
I read your story, It's good but, you need to enhance your English skill, it's readable and the story is good so far, I hope you don't drop this[img=update]
Great story. Love the reincarnated sorcerer theme because one if my favorite manwha is I am the sorcerer king. I like the OC characters because it gives the story its uniqueness unlike other stories where we get the same old girls from orher stories dating the mc. Thank you author!!!
I want to read it and I tried reading it but a pity why good story has to have an harem in it. I feel devastated but my dislike for harem can't be overcome on how good of such writing quality
It might be a good idea, but i can't be really sure , cause the grammar is really bad... like really bad. I couldn't make it past the first chapter.
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Hello everyone i am the author of this story. And for sure i will give the best review 😉. I hope you will like this book, also i am not good at English so if you ever read some problem you can comment then i will edit it ☺️.
Nice idea[img=recommend]. ."………………………………………………..l..l………………………….l……………l…..l…………lll.
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If the iterations and personalities of the characters improve, you may read it again. The dialogues feel empty and seem to copy and paste. All that's left is for the MC to say "I know your future" and ruin the whole story with clichés.