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Sheizzcoldasice

This is the second novel that I am writing after reading lots of villian and antihero stories because I also wanted to write one. you will definitely be surprised by this book’s new and different touch on villian genre and hopefully it will keep you entertained. 😊😊

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2yr
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Angry_Reviewer

Typical CN psychotic female leads that belong either in prison or a mental hospital. I seriously fear for the mental health of anyone who finds the way the female leads act to being anything other than disgusting and disturbing.

3mth
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ACHILLES

Its great came back to reread and still is one of the best i've read

3mth
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SovereignOfDarc

Its a very good story , unfortunately at the first locked chapter I need to pay 3 FP to unlick a single chap?? why so much , others already ask for 2 and that is a lot

8mth
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jotaro_kujo_5443

i came to read a generic boring story but i found was gold. Really amazing story it got me hooked by the author writing. He has no plot holes(he explains throughly) and he does good character development. Must try novel for harem enjoyers.

9mth
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Author_for_fun

honestly, I liked the book up until the whole reveal with the sister. It felt forced like it was put there for shock value, or the author changed their mind at the last minute.Or perhaps the signs were there early on, but I missed it because of the dialog and Grammer.The book is not the worst thing I've read when it comes to this genre but it ain't the best either.

11mth
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Pix3L
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Bro author you are my spirit animal.........

11mth
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NyxOuroboros

Perfection 😌⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️😌 . . .

11mth
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ItzWaqaz

is this piece going to continue or not?[img=update]

11mth
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Dream_Watcher

Why did you drop your other novel. It was very good. I was fan of that novel. Hope you continue it. Well this novel is also good. You have my support.

12mth
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DaoistUd1JD0

I READ THIS BEFORE BUT I FORGOT THE TITLE (AHHRGG SOOOO ANNOYING)

1yr
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NW_48
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I gave this thing 2 golden tickets, is there anything that needs to be asked or.

1yr
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AKD_Khmer

For inner-voice enjoyers. Entertaining before I stopped to pick it back up later when further chapters come. Fun series with focus on character reactions.

1yr
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Carl_Cortes

I already read 20+ chapter so far I really enjoy this novel thank you author please upload more chapters in the future..

1yr
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CrimsonN7

fantastic read ....................................................................................................................................

1yr
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ShinySinner

author great job. keep doing it man. keep posting as for future readers please don't drop this after reading d title or d first 3-4 chapters cuz those r generic -- author does his unique magic only after that -- so atleast read it till ch 15 before dropping it(that is if u can - after reading till then🤣🤣🤣)

1yr
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Dick_Wizard

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1yr
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Rygurd

lately i kinda like a villain story where the heroines can hears the villain(mc) inner thought. and this novel is one of it. not only that, this novel shows us that inner voice getting heard by the heroines can have another implication

1yr
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Dangerlives

I don't usually do reviews. However I enjoy this book like your style keep up the work.we should see more please don't drop it like other authors

1yr
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kartik_agarwal

I read a similar story to this novel, but there the villain decided to give up original story and behave like a villain after 1000 restarts.. Seriously, thousand.. There were many other problems in that story. This novel doesn't has the problem which were in that novel. Also, the editing is quite sharp here. This is a very good crisp story. Do read it

1yr
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Oswaldjosue

Happy new year author thank you for bringing us Chapter of your novel many blessings and have a good time this day December 31 Mmmmmm mmmmmm mmmmmm mmmmmm mmmmmm mmmmmm mmmmmm mmmmmm mmmmmm

1yr
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Melshan

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1yr
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Xerxes_73

I've been reading a lot of villain novels lately and sometimes the dumb decisions they make just makes me want to personally kill them. Thankfully I've found the perfect villain novel. Author please come back .... it's 22nd(from my time zone ) which isn't much different from 27th. Waiting is really torturing me.

1yr
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1yr
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Bibongsensei

This is my 2nd review and it's 4.8 star. This novel is "embodiment of perfection" in my POV and in chapter 36 is really unpredictable i thought his sister would really like him but turns out just a facade to hide her calculative mind. Ohh! btw i gave it a 4.8 star because of updating stability. Keep up Author-san.😁

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1yr
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Francia

I like the novel

1yr
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MaidenPurpleWorld

Very different and unique book with very good realistic villainous character. writing quality very high, suspense plus story build up and background is very interesting. characters arw written properly not giving the idea that they are forced or 2d.

2yr
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2yr
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OpDonghuaLoverGirl

Great great , i very choosy in reading as i finish what i read, only read 9-10 books full here but this one was in top popular and other rankings continuosly, and it was worth reading.

2yr
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DaoistTgtwm9

this is a 10/10 story; This is a special novel. You won't regret put your time on it

2yr
Voir 0 Réponses
Dantrlan

Estoy bastante sorprendido, antes lo deje caer porque no me gustaba la personalidad del protagonista villano, es demasiado suave para ser un villano en un cuarto reinicio, pero conforme segui avanzando hay un desarrollo real y por lo menos este usa su cerebro. Para quienes lean esto, no se dejen llevar por la personalidad del villano, la historia mejora con el pasar de los capitulos

2yr
Voir 0 Réponses
Sheizzcoldasice

This is the second novel that I am writing after reading lots of villian and antihero stories because I also wanted to write one. you will definitely be surprised by this book’s new and different touch on villian genre and hopefully it will keep you entertained. 😊😊

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2yr
Voir 54 Réponses
Angry_Reviewer

Typical CN psychotic female leads that belong either in prison or a mental hospital. I seriously fear for the mental health of anyone who finds the way the female leads act to being anything other than disgusting and disturbing.

3mth
Voir 0 Réponses
ACHILLES

Its great came back to reread and still is one of the best i've read

3mth
Voir 0 Réponses
SovereignOfDarc

Its a very good story , unfortunately at the first locked chapter I need to pay 3 FP to unlick a single chap?? why so much , others already ask for 2 and that is a lot

8mth
Voir 3 Réponses
jotaro_kujo_5443

i came to read a generic boring story but i found was gold. Really amazing story it got me hooked by the author writing. He has no plot holes(he explains throughly) and he does good character development. Must try novel for harem enjoyers.

9mth
Voir 0 Réponses
Author_for_fun

honestly, I liked the book up until the whole reveal with the sister. It felt forced like it was put there for shock value, or the author changed their mind at the last minute.Or perhaps the signs were there early on, but I missed it because of the dialog and Grammer.The book is not the worst thing I've read when it comes to this genre but it ain't the best either.

11mth
Voir 0 Réponses
Pix3L
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Bro author you are my spirit animal.........

11mth
Voir 0 Réponses
NyxOuroboros

Perfection 😌⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️😌 . . .

11mth
Voir 0 Réponses
ItzWaqaz

is this piece going to continue or not?[img=update]

11mth
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Dream_Watcher

Why did you drop your other novel. It was very good. I was fan of that novel. Hope you continue it. Well this novel is also good. You have my support.

12mth
Voir 0 Réponses
DaoistUd1JD0

I READ THIS BEFORE BUT I FORGOT THE TITLE (AHHRGG SOOOO ANNOYING)

1yr
Voir 0 Réponses
NW_48
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I gave this thing 2 golden tickets, is there anything that needs to be asked or.

1yr
Voir 0 Réponses
AKD_Khmer

For inner-voice enjoyers. Entertaining before I stopped to pick it back up later when further chapters come. Fun series with focus on character reactions.

1yr
Voir 0 Réponses
Carl_Cortes

I already read 20+ chapter so far I really enjoy this novel thank you author please upload more chapters in the future..

1yr
Voir 0 Réponses
CrimsonN7

fantastic read ....................................................................................................................................

1yr
Voir 0 Réponses
ShinySinner

author great job. keep doing it man. keep posting as for future readers please don't drop this after reading d title or d first 3-4 chapters cuz those r generic -- author does his unique magic only after that -- so atleast read it till ch 15 before dropping it(that is if u can - after reading till then🤣🤣🤣)

1yr
Voir 0 Réponses
Dick_Wizard

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1yr
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Rygurd

lately i kinda like a villain story where the heroines can hears the villain(mc) inner thought. and this novel is one of it. not only that, this novel shows us that inner voice getting heard by the heroines can have another implication

1yr
Voir 0 Réponses
Dangerlives

I don't usually do reviews. However I enjoy this book like your style keep up the work.we should see more please don't drop it like other authors

1yr
Voir 0 Réponses
kartik_agarwal

I read a similar story to this novel, but there the villain decided to give up original story and behave like a villain after 1000 restarts.. Seriously, thousand.. There were many other problems in that story. This novel doesn't has the problem which were in that novel. Also, the editing is quite sharp here. This is a very good crisp story. Do read it

1yr
Voir 4 Réponses
Oswaldjosue

Happy new year author thank you for bringing us Chapter of your novel many blessings and have a good time this day December 31 Mmmmmm mmmmmm mmmmmm mmmmmm mmmmmm mmmmmm mmmmmm mmmmmm mmmmmm

1yr
Voir 0 Réponses
Melshan

HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM

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1yr
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Xerxes_73

I've been reading a lot of villain novels lately and sometimes the dumb decisions they make just makes me want to personally kill them. Thankfully I've found the perfect villain novel. Author please come back .... it's 22nd(from my time zone ) which isn't much different from 27th. Waiting is really torturing me.

1yr
Voir 0 Réponses
ILHAM_NUR

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1yr
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Bibongsensei

This is my 2nd review and it's 4.8 star. This novel is "embodiment of perfection" in my POV and in chapter 36 is really unpredictable i thought his sister would really like him but turns out just a facade to hide her calculative mind. Ohh! btw i gave it a 4.8 star because of updating stability. Keep up Author-san.😁

Spoiler de révélation
1yr
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Francia

I like the novel

1yr
Voir 0 Réponses
MaidenPurpleWorld

Very different and unique book with very good realistic villainous character. writing quality very high, suspense plus story build up and background is very interesting. characters arw written properly not giving the idea that they are forced or 2d.

2yr
Voir 0 Réponses
Bibongsensei

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2yr
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OpDonghuaLoverGirl

Great great , i very choosy in reading as i finish what i read, only read 9-10 books full here but this one was in top popular and other rankings continuosly, and it was worth reading.

2yr
Voir 0 Réponses
DaoistTgtwm9

this is a 10/10 story; This is a special novel. You won't regret put your time on it

2yr
Voir 0 Réponses
Dantrlan

Estoy bastante sorprendido, antes lo deje caer porque no me gustaba la personalidad del protagonista villano, es demasiado suave para ser un villano en un cuarto reinicio, pero conforme segui avanzando hay un desarrollo real y por lo menos este usa su cerebro. Para quienes lean esto, no se dejen llevar por la personalidad del villano, la historia mejora con el pasar de los capitulos

2yr
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