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This is a nice story, less of a fanfic though. I loved the flow and plot, but there isn't much Marvel element in it. The grammar is excellent without any problems.
I honestly love this books and also other books from the author but this hasn't been updated for awhile..
Well his Patreon only has his newest story 47 chapters so don’t go there and waste your money, hasn’ been updated since march, prompts his patreon on all his story’s about as well!
Am I the only person concerned about the fact the author hasn’t done anything online in two months
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This is a fantastic fanfiction with no grammar mistake and the author has a vast vocabulary. The author updates daily and all of those chapters are long ( around 5.000 words I think). There is great development though I would call it a bit too slow and sometimes we need to really pay attention to the details to see it. The characters all have a personality and there are no young master cliche, though because there are no image sometimes it is a bit hard to imagine it. The universe that the mc is in gets developed and explained so this is good. Over all a too good story for Webnovel (fanfiction), many people do not understand the story because like me English is not their native language. Also this story has a reall plot and plot develoment and because the mc is not your typicall 'sigma' main character that 'walks on everybody' some do not like it, as they go to Webnovel to see 'strong'/'fearless'/'womanizer'/... main characters and do not want to use their brains. P.s: I know I alredy did a review but I saw that many review on this novel do not explain why they don't like it and all so here am I. Good luck writing the rest of the story author and ignore those that spit on this story without constructive comments except 'it is bad'. I hope many people will see this review and will then decide to read it. Have a good day!
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Sa va être compliqué pour moi j'ai pas le temps de faire un plan de travail et de la muscu et voila je joue a la base de la muscu et je joue a la base de la base de travail et de faire un plan de travail et de faire le sang de faire mes courses de travail de travail pour la flemme d être en faite a demain. Comprendra qui pourra mdrr🧐🧐🤔🤔🤣🤣🤣😖😖🥳🥳🤙🖖
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I'm pretty tired On your own college so I'm not writing a review, just know that it's one of the best I've ever read. .................................................................................................................................................................................................. ...................................................................................................................................................................................................
esta e a melhor historia de mitologia grega que eu já vi ,rico em sentimentos e conhecimento o autor e um gênio e eu quero ver mas capítulos ,por favor não deixe esta obra-prima cair no esquecimento ,e continue fazendo um bom trabalho
I was very much disappointed when you announced the story to be discontinued, but it seems as if you've continued with the same momentum you did before. Thank you for continuing to write this wonderful fanfic, and I hope you can finish it. Good luck! 🍀
As a long time reader I can say this a one of top fanfic. While I don't like how Mc cares for family instead of pursuing power at all cost and his still remaining human attributes, the idea and story is very unique. Mc personality is somewhat unstable. He isn't fully God. Update rate should be increased .But still, this novel is better than 99% of other. So I hope author will continue.
This is one of the best fanfics I have read on this sight it’s a shame to see it not be posted anymore. Wish you all the best.
Well idk if i alredy wrote a review but anyway, one of the best fanfic on this site easily in my top 10. While the pace might seem slow i really like it idk how you can write so much without it being repeating.
this is a goodbye review as this was my favorite webnovel but I'll have to drop this. The writing quality is good and the story is interesting with a rare pov for marvel verse. But the latest chapters so far have been ... unpleasant. I know it's your choice of plot progression but I can't help that I'm hating it. Here's my point, I read webnovels because I like those wish fulfilling fantasies and not feel depressed as reality is enough. Also if I want realistic novel, there're tons of real literature compared to webnovels written by amateurs. Sorry for the long rant but I'm sad that this story made me so much invested. Maybe I'll read this again but not before a few tens or hundreds of chapters available.
That was beautifully done!👏 The previous chapter painted Apollo as some entity that forwent his emotions, almost like the lords of Order. It's nice to see that you haven't let Apollo forget his origins, and we humans know how powerful hope truely is.
This was truly a freaking awesome story in the first 45 chapters. Slowly the MC has changed or begun to show his true colors, or lack of. Starting to slowly becoming the typical indifferent cold MC from what he seemed to be in the beginning. which was curious and passionate, most of that seems dead at this point and while I bet the scenarios and characters he meets will still make for an interesting story, ill basically be reading just for those moments involving the endless or heros. worth the read but the path the MC seems to be on doesn't seem to be as exciting and enjoyable to read as it was in the beginning. I havent given up on it yet but its turning into less my kinda read. However, people like this kinda MC so id say you should definitely give it a chance. Most of this was opinionated from my perspective and preference. so take it with that grain of salt.
I like this story very much because its like a nostalgic story but with different take or something like this similar feeling.
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author can please tell me if I am wrong but I swear applo is the god of music not the sun and Helios is the god of sun if I am correct I would like to know if I am wrong sorry if I sounded rude did not mean to be just love mythology stuff especially Greek ones
good work keep it up!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
The novel is very good i like it very much I wish it would show more of other pantheons and it would show a war which involves all pantheons of gods like in highschool dxd
Author forgot he was writting marvel fic and started introducing dc character such Lucifer and death of endless . .. .. .. ...... .. ..
This is a nice story, less of a fanfic though. I loved the flow and plot, but there isn't much Marvel element in it. The grammar is excellent without any problems.
I honestly love this books and also other books from the author but this hasn't been updated for awhile..
Well his Patreon only has his newest story 47 chapters so don’t go there and waste your money, hasn’ been updated since march, prompts his patreon on all his story’s about as well!
Am I the only person concerned about the fact the author hasn’t done anything online in two months
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This is a fantastic fanfiction with no grammar mistake and the author has a vast vocabulary. The author updates daily and all of those chapters are long ( around 5.000 words I think). There is great development though I would call it a bit too slow and sometimes we need to really pay attention to the details to see it. The characters all have a personality and there are no young master cliche, though because there are no image sometimes it is a bit hard to imagine it. The universe that the mc is in gets developed and explained so this is good. Over all a too good story for Webnovel (fanfiction), many people do not understand the story because like me English is not their native language. Also this story has a reall plot and plot develoment and because the mc is not your typicall 'sigma' main character that 'walks on everybody' some do not like it, as they go to Webnovel to see 'strong'/'fearless'/'womanizer'/... main characters and do not want to use their brains. P.s: I know I alredy did a review but I saw that many review on this novel do not explain why they don't like it and all so here am I. Good luck writing the rest of the story author and ignore those that spit on this story without constructive comments except 'it is bad'. I hope many people will see this review and will then decide to read it. Have a good day!
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Very good. Very good. Very good. Very good. Very good. Very good. Very good. Very good. Very good. Very good. Very good. Very good. Very good.
Sa va être compliqué pour moi j'ai pas le temps de faire un plan de travail et de la muscu et voila je joue a la base de la muscu et je joue a la base de la base de travail et de faire un plan de travail et de faire le sang de faire mes courses de travail de travail pour la flemme d être en faite a demain. Comprendra qui pourra mdrr🧐🧐🤔🤔🤣🤣🤣😖😖🥳🥳🤙🖖
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I'm pretty tired On your own college so I'm not writing a review, just know that it's one of the best I've ever read. .................................................................................................................................................................................................. ...................................................................................................................................................................................................
esta e a melhor historia de mitologia grega que eu já vi ,rico em sentimentos e conhecimento o autor e um gênio e eu quero ver mas capítulos ,por favor não deixe esta obra-prima cair no esquecimento ,e continue fazendo um bom trabalho
I was very much disappointed when you announced the story to be discontinued, but it seems as if you've continued with the same momentum you did before. Thank you for continuing to write this wonderful fanfic, and I hope you can finish it. Good luck! 🍀
As a long time reader I can say this a one of top fanfic. While I don't like how Mc cares for family instead of pursuing power at all cost and his still remaining human attributes, the idea and story is very unique. Mc personality is somewhat unstable. He isn't fully God. Update rate should be increased .But still, this novel is better than 99% of other. So I hope author will continue.
This is one of the best fanfics I have read on this sight it’s a shame to see it not be posted anymore. Wish you all the best.
Well idk if i alredy wrote a review but anyway, one of the best fanfic on this site easily in my top 10. While the pace might seem slow i really like it idk how you can write so much without it being repeating.
this is a goodbye review as this was my favorite webnovel but I'll have to drop this. The writing quality is good and the story is interesting with a rare pov for marvel verse. But the latest chapters so far have been ... unpleasant. I know it's your choice of plot progression but I can't help that I'm hating it. Here's my point, I read webnovels because I like those wish fulfilling fantasies and not feel depressed as reality is enough. Also if I want realistic novel, there're tons of real literature compared to webnovels written by amateurs. Sorry for the long rant but I'm sad that this story made me so much invested. Maybe I'll read this again but not before a few tens or hundreds of chapters available.
That was beautifully done!👏 The previous chapter painted Apollo as some entity that forwent his emotions, almost like the lords of Order. It's nice to see that you haven't let Apollo forget his origins, and we humans know how powerful hope truely is.
This was truly a freaking awesome story in the first 45 chapters. Slowly the MC has changed or begun to show his true colors, or lack of. Starting to slowly becoming the typical indifferent cold MC from what he seemed to be in the beginning. which was curious and passionate, most of that seems dead at this point and while I bet the scenarios and characters he meets will still make for an interesting story, ill basically be reading just for those moments involving the endless or heros. worth the read but the path the MC seems to be on doesn't seem to be as exciting and enjoyable to read as it was in the beginning. I havent given up on it yet but its turning into less my kinda read. However, people like this kinda MC so id say you should definitely give it a chance. Most of this was opinionated from my perspective and preference. so take it with that grain of salt.
I like this story very much because its like a nostalgic story but with different take or something like this similar feeling.
Need more!!!!![img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
author can please tell me if I am wrong but I swear applo is the god of music not the sun and Helios is the god of sun if I am correct I would like to know if I am wrong sorry if I sounded rude did not mean to be just love mythology stuff especially Greek ones
good work keep it up!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
The novel is very good i like it very much I wish it would show more of other pantheons and it would show a war which involves all pantheons of gods like in highschool dxd
Author forgot he was writting marvel fic and started introducing dc character such Lucifer and death of endless . .. .. .. ...... .. ..