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The story was interesting to the end. The grammar was good, which is good, the scenes were painted correctly and immersive. What more can I ask for?
Thx for the help back there, also your novel seems quite interesting, I could learn a thing or two from this, or maybe use this novel as breakthrough for my writing skills. Exp
The writing quality is good and easy to understand. There are emotions to the character unlike some novel, even the side character have a basic background. You should give this novel a try while saving some fishes
Compared to the usual reincarnation romp you'd expect from the genre this book is a breath of fresh air. Great work so far Xuckless. I look forward to more, especially considering the recent developments in the story. I do like a good antihero. No spoilers though. :)
Really good plot. The first chapter had me hooked already but the time skip was way too early and abrupt. Overall it was nice and I hope to see more updates as I read the rest.
A very interesting story so far, portrays a story of reincarnation in a fantasy world possibly as it would be instead of the intersting part just as they are usually portrayed, I recommend everyone to read it.
If not me, then who will give the story a 5 star review. This is my first work, but I still think people can enjoy it and posted it to WebNovel. If your like the story then give it a review. More power-stones are also needed to get this piece out there. I will continue updating this novel as long as I am motivated and people read it. Enjoy, Author-San
The story was interesting to the end. The grammar was good, which is good, the scenes were painted correctly and immersive. What more can I ask for?
Thx for the help back there, also your novel seems quite interesting, I could learn a thing or two from this, or maybe use this novel as breakthrough for my writing skills. Exp
The writing quality is good and easy to understand. There are emotions to the character unlike some novel, even the side character have a basic background. You should give this novel a try while saving some fishes
Compared to the usual reincarnation romp you'd expect from the genre this book is a breath of fresh air. Great work so far Xuckless. I look forward to more, especially considering the recent developments in the story. I do like a good antihero. No spoilers though. :)
Really good plot. The first chapter had me hooked already but the time skip was way too early and abrupt. Overall it was nice and I hope to see more updates as I read the rest.
A very interesting story so far, portrays a story of reincarnation in a fantasy world possibly as it would be instead of the intersting part just as they are usually portrayed, I recommend everyone to read it.
If not me, then who will give the story a 5 star review. This is my first work, but I still think people can enjoy it and posted it to WebNovel. If your like the story then give it a review. More power-stones are also needed to get this piece out there. I will continue updating this novel as long as I am motivated and people read it. Enjoy, Author-San