Dead monster carcasses littered the ground as a fierce battle was coming to a close. Rune smacked a blur of spinning armor with the flat of his blade before piercing its soft underside. Black spiny legs shot out from its shell as the creature writhed and screeched during its last breath until its legs curled inwards and it lay motionless on its back.
"Is that the last of them?" Rune asked, turning to Carin, who had just plunged her sword through the head of another monster.
"I think so." She said, removing the blood and fluids from her blade with a flick of her wrist before returning it to its sheathe.
Luna walked up to one of the carcasses and nudged it with her foot, "These things sure were annoying, though. And disgusting," She said with a grimace. This one had been her kill, and shell fragments were scattered around it giving everyone a good look at what lay beneath the resilient armor.
I didn't get the chance to ask during the last authors note, but how did you guys feel about the side story being in first person? I starting to feel like switching writing entirely in first person to entirely to 3rd person might not have been the way to go. I'd like to incorporate for paragraphs and Pov's in 1st person for a mix of the the two, but I am worried about changing up the writing style too much. If you think it is a good idea then be sure to let me know in the comments.
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