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how weak clan like hyuga become strong in this ff without system or cheat .. before they use gentle fist they already killed by susanoo or wood releast .. or kill by strong body of raikage or by magnet releast they had normal body that are not strong like raikage their byukugan are mid without tenseigan their chakra are at most jonin or low kage normaly there jack of all trade master of none but hyuga are all low taijutsu 3 / 5 ninjutsu 2/5 fuinjutsu 1/5 they can only bully their branch clan with that one seal dojutsu 3/5 easy to fool (normal sharingan are 4/5 rinnegan are 4.5/5) chakra qt 2/5 (senju 4/5 , usumaki 5/5 uchiha 3/5 ) that it..... they mid clan like in fight of the strong they nothing .. no effect atall when they spam s rank jutsu as each other in madara era in grand sheme of thing in crash of titan they are trash cannon fodder.. this is reality .. atleast usumaki are best at fuinjutsu but this white eyes weakling even weaker than raikage at taijutsu something their whole clan pround of ... the only thing they mid at .. other than that they compleatly useless even someone without bloodline like might guy,duy can beat them on something they good at...😬🙄
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I mean no disrespect in this review. I'll start with the brightest point, the author has good grammar and puts in effort. Now the dark spots, I assume the author does not do his research of the timeline. I only read around 10-15 chapters, but he has things that shouldn't be there; Ninja ranks were later invented by Tobirama after the villages were founded. I may be wrong, feel free to correct me.
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i enjoyed reading it so far ........................................................................................................................................
i really like this I only wish it had even more chapters Insanely good story and i like how the MC goes about becoming stronger and i cant wait to see where he goes from now. i would like for him to make a journal of his adventures so later hyuga's can see would be dope.
The idea of the story is very good, but the way the characters speak or even the idea of the tailed beasts being friendly with humans and even saying their name to a random human disappointed me....
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this is good. this is good. this is good. this is good. this is good. this is good. this is good. this is good. this is good. this is good. this is good.
Overall the story is good, chapters tend to be short but it’s a fun read. Only thing I would suggest is changing how the characters speech is written/layed out.
The story has an interesting idea but the format of how the characters speak is completely horrible
keep up the great work............................................................................................................................
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how weak clan like hyuga become strong in this ff without system or cheat .. before they use gentle fist they already killed by susanoo or wood releast .. or kill by strong body of raikage or by magnet releast they had normal body that are not strong like raikage their byukugan are mid without tenseigan their chakra are at most jonin or low kage normaly there jack of all trade master of none but hyuga are all low taijutsu 3 / 5 ninjutsu 2/5 fuinjutsu 1/5 they can only bully their branch clan with that one seal dojutsu 3/5 easy to fool (normal sharingan are 4/5 rinnegan are 4.5/5) chakra qt 2/5 (senju 4/5 , usumaki 5/5 uchiha 3/5 ) that it..... they mid clan like in fight of the strong they nothing .. no effect atall when they spam s rank jutsu as each other in madara era in grand sheme of thing in crash of titan they are trash cannon fodder.. this is reality .. atleast usumaki are best at fuinjutsu but this white eyes weakling even weaker than raikage at taijutsu something their whole clan pround of ... the only thing they mid at .. other than that they compleatly useless even someone without bloodline like might guy,duy can beat them on something they good at...😬🙄
Spoiler de révélation I mean no disrespect in this review. I'll start with the brightest point, the author has good grammar and puts in effort. Now the dark spots, I assume the author does not do his research of the timeline. I only read around 10-15 chapters, but he has things that shouldn't be there; Ninja ranks were later invented by Tobirama after the villages were founded. I may be wrong, feel free to correct me.
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i enjoyed reading it so far ........................................................................................................................................
i really like this I only wish it had even more chapters Insanely good story and i like how the MC goes about becoming stronger and i cant wait to see where he goes from now. i would like for him to make a journal of his adventures so later hyuga's can see would be dope.
The idea of the story is very good, but the way the characters speak or even the idea of the tailed beasts being friendly with humans and even saying their name to a random human disappointed me....
Spoiler de révélation this is good. this is good. this is good. this is good. this is good. this is good. this is good. this is good. this is good. this is good. this is good.
Overall the story is good, chapters tend to be short but it’s a fun read. Only thing I would suggest is changing how the characters speech is written/layed out.
The story has an interesting idea but the format of how the characters speak is completely horrible
keep up the great work............................................................................................................................
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