Is it Wrong that I Woke Up in Danmachi as the Main Character?

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IAMGORGEOUS

Shame it's Not harem... I want Hephaestus😭😭😭 AHHH!!!!!😭?...........why [img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap] .... ......

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ShadowMonarch185

No harem. Sign me up. Noiceeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee

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Plebston323

Honest Opinion, this is probably one of the better Danmachi Fanfics I've read. The pacings great, no mistakes grammatically so far, Bell's practically an original character which makes the story more lively, and the characters themselves seem more real than the show. Overall I think this will blow up quickly, keep it up!

LV 4

LazyMartialSage

I like the story but I think the main character is really a hypocrite he flirts all-day but says he'll only love Hestia which is unreasonable and you nerfed quantum magic so much that it's not a joke

LV 2

Gratiz_

The more I read the more the story becomes a slice of life. At this point nothing new happens in the story. It's boring. The story is not about the mc anymore, it's about his daughter. Dropped.

LV 4

BobboLobbo

Good story. Very good to be fair, the grammar is on point, the story is developing towards a good path but I dropped it. The reason I dropped it is because of one reason but it's a very annoying thing. The reason being, the MC says and gives unnecessary information to others, as in: (spoiler) He told eina how he got stronger using potions to help her, and she'll use that information by giving it to the guild to help other adventurers and our MC doesn't get anything from it. He did this before as well. No benefits, only another illogical headache. Why give this information when an enemy might use this and why do it if you don't get anything out of it? I don't think I'd like to read a story that stresses me out. Anyway, good luck with this story. Bye

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Cleiton_Sena_6677

It had a lot of potential but in chapter 15, the story had a first and giant mistake for me that made it seem like a cliché isekai anime, I don't know if it was because of that, but from then on I even lost a lot of desire to continue reading and somehow the story seemed to have dropped in quality by 80%, DISAPPOINTMENT

LV 5

gamabunda4873

one of the best danmachi fics ever happy it got posted here by author found with a copier which led to real author I never rate 5 in update release unless it is completely finished sooo full marks

LV 1

eQzy

I started reading, and then I remembered that I had already read it. And I quit because of the unrealistic relationship between the characters and, most importantly... Seriously, the author? Did you bring home a bird from the dungeon, and then she became a human, the daughter of the protagonist, and has the powers of the OP? He literally thinks she's his daughter right after he finds the animal? which?

LV 13

GENGHIS_KHAN

I don’t like how he calls her Tia when they first meet. Giving a nickname to a stranger is odd not to mention a god. Bhbuh bhuuhbhubhubhubnjinjibhubhubygvgyvtyvfyvhu injin

LV 14

TBlank

I really like this story thx author you have my respect and power stones... I still need to write or else it won't let me post my post...

LV 4

Reaper_2985

I don't get it what's it about raising children it's less about adventures and more about slice of life it gets boring very Fast

LV 5

Gridmark

Chaptes feels bloated, main character is too op its boring, its one of those stories where lots of female characters fall for the mc but hes monogamous which is good, the problem is you already know nothings going to happen so the scenes where it shows those female chracter falling for the mc feels pointless and feels like uneeded filler

LV 5

Lordmoonlight

it was ok at the start but when magical children started to just pop up killed it for me I was ok with bells but welf just came out of the blue was just wild

it's a shme that the mc is not the only special one. you made a supporting character into one of the male leads and always pops up every 2nd half into the chapter.

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Daoist170471

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AllucardTheSpong

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