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I have to say. in just 3 chapters I was hooked. After reading all 10 I'm obsessed. please please please come back to this story. I didn't know I needed this in my life but now I'm in love with the story.
excellent job author you have created a proper story line with excellent background for the upcoming wars now you just have to make it to the future but am sure you have it covered.
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A história parece bastante interessante e tem muito lugar para se desenvolver , espero que todas as gems não sejam homens , e ficarei muito curioso com a interação do MC com as jóias do infinito.
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I have to say. in just 3 chapters I was hooked. After reading all 10 I'm obsessed. please please please come back to this story. I didn't know I needed this in my life but now I'm in love with the story.
excellent job author you have created a proper story line with excellent background for the upcoming wars now you just have to make it to the future but am sure you have it covered.
,😝😝😝😝😝😝😝😝😝😝😝😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😝😝😆😆😀😀😆😆😝😝😁😝😆😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆
A história parece bastante interessante e tem muito lugar para se desenvolver , espero que todas as gems não sejam homens , e ficarei muito curioso com a interação do MC com as jóias do infinito.
( /^ω^)/♪♪( /^ω^)/♪♪( /^ω^)/♪♪( /^ω^)/♪♪( /^ω^)/♪♪( /^ω^)/♪♪( /^ω^)/♪♪( /^ω^)/♪♪( /^ω^)/♪♪( /^ω^)/♪♪( /^ω^)/♪♪( /^ω^)/♪♪( /^ω^)/♪♪( /^ω^)/♪♪( /^ω^)/♪♪( /^ω^)/♪♪( /^ω^)/♪♪( /^ω^)/♪♪( /^ω^)/♪♪( /^ω^)/♪♪( /^ω^)/♪♪( /^ω^)/♪♪( /^ω^)/♪♪( /^ω^)/♪♪( /^ω^)/♪♪( /^ω^)/♪♪( /^ω^)/♪♪( /^ω^)/♪♪( /^ω^)/♪♪( /^ω^)/♪♪( /^ω^)/♪♪( /^ω^)/♪♪
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This is really good hopes it gets new chapters.