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Not sure why this didn't get much support but I really like this story 👍 The ending was an excellent touch! Just the right pace and length. I'd urge readers to give this a try 😄
I really liked the book and I would definitely recommend. Don't get me wrong, this book has it's flaw, but I like that author connected such a long story well and it was MUCH better than some of the reborn/transmigration romance fiction Chinese novels I have read. Here is a detailed review: CONS: 1) Translation & Grammatical error: Names, relationship, grammar, gender and pronoun are messed up. And the usage of some of the real world countries name like "British" Manor , "Turkey" dessert or "Persian" silk was very awkward to read in a fiction! 2) Excessive description: Honestly, at times it was beautiful and the metaphors & comparisons formed a vivid picture. But most of the time, they were VERY REPEATITIVE. The hyperbolic and over description of the ML and FL's beauty was mind shatteringly boring. And the worst was the over descriptions of trivial things connected to leads but big matters were ended in a line or two like the last battle's aftermath, Li Yunrong's marriage, the romantic moments between the leads etc 3) Casual racism and colorism: I know it is common in Chinese novels but deliberately showing people of lower status to be dark, small minded and ugly and the only beautiful ones are white skinned is very racist! 4) Awkward details: There were some strange things that just came out of nowhere & become important part in the story like Li Yunrong & Emperor Taizu being transmigrator, Emperor Taizu's notebook, Emperor Taizu being saved by dragon, Chu yi's sister, Eldest Princess Feng Yang's legend, Emperor Taizu wanting Fengyang to be King, etc 5) Unrealistic relationship dynamic: Gu Yuan turning cold to Yunrong even after growing up with her, Yuan being suddenly overly attached to his newly back sister and not even being as attached or caring towards the older sister, etc. It would have been better and believable if he slowly lost his interest after their TRUE colors started showing 7) Dragging the story with unnecessary side story: There was some weird tangent, the story went and started telling story of side characters like Wei Wan, or Lu Qin and Hua family, or Zheng family silver etc. I would have preferred it if author focused a bit more on developing the romance or use it to tie some lose ends like Baili Yin's case, Gu Yuan and Yunzhen's life, etc PROS 1) For me, one of the biggest pros was that no character was dumb. Whether protagonist or antagonist or even side characters, they were all smart and active. That made me look forward to the development of the story 2) Fleshed out characters: Though the FL was a bit passive about everything, I found most character believable which is saying something considering all Chinese characters are written cliche and 1D. 3) Likeable ML: I have always been horrified by how much Chinese novels especially reborn/rebirth novel focus on normalizing emotional manipulation, stalking and abusive behavior of ML. But here the ML was very well written and was really likeable. He trusted his woman, didn't get into her personal space, showed her respect and treated her like equals, always had frank and open dialouge with her, was protective but not possessive, was understanding, & courted her sweetly and patiently, making it more heart felt. There was NO stalking, NO abusive behavior, NO deception, & NO sexual harassment. He is by far my favorite Chinese Reborn novel ML. 4) Story development and connecting dots: The story did dragged and went to weird tangents at times but it never got completely off the main story and author did try to connect every side character story with main plot. The story followed opened with a revenge plot and stuck to it till the end 5) Beautiful depiction of female frdship: I am tired of reading stories where FL is always pitted against other women over the ML. As if other women have no other job in life except being jealous and having cat fights. So here the frdship of Wei Jiaoniang, Fan Mushuang, Lu Qin and Yanfei was actually touching and even fun 6) Spiritual power and limits: I was truly glad that the FL n ML were not omnipotent. They had to face lot of scheming, disbelief and limitations of being abandoned by heaven. Many of the time both had to rely on their cool headedness and rationality to fight with the situation especially Chu Yi. It makes you appreciate the leads more It is definitely worth a read and was agood story overall
The story was good, but the ending was rushed. There were little to no mention about what happened to some of the other characters, like FL's siblings. It's a short read (<1000 chapters) but could be improved by clarifying the ending a bit.
i just have to say that ch 6, and 7 are unrelated like what jill?, what Jessica?,what rose? i mean it doesn't make any sense
Very cliche face-slapping novel with a Mary Sue lead, but some very distracting errors. Chapters 6 and 7 are the wrong novel.
I feel like this is one of the most underrated book on Webnovel. They are so fantastic , you end up having your heart pound as you wait for events to unfold. There is no duplication of events like with most other books. It’s exciting and new and fresh. It’s a reincarnation with deep intelligence. It shows the FL struggles as she overcomes her pain. She doesn’t dust it off, or ignore it her mental issues
I had to stop after hitting chapter 8 because the wrong story was put in and hasn't been corrected. Some authors like to advertise their other works which is fine but at least put the missing chapters in. The story goes from her slashing a door down to some pawnshop incident and a sudden character growth without explaination (this is why chapters shouldnt be missing). I couldnt keep reading after that. However I do think it has potential to be a good story. I doubt the missing chapters would bother this much if it wasnt. It just needs some maintence...... And if it was translated maybe get a second opinion.
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good read! although updates are regular, I'm always eager for the next chapter!
I've completely read this book and I can assure you that it's barely average. Here are the pros : - The Fl is smart and calm. - The Ml is calm and sympathetic. - The enemies aren’t brain dead . - The fake daughter isn't easy to deal with because she's the world’s chosen one( or something like this). Let's go down to the cons now : - The pace is slow . The chapters are nor short nor long , however they feel boring because events seem to take forever to be dealt with. As an illustration, i take the fact that the Fl only gets married in the last chapter. Also , the story feels stretched after a hundred chapters( By the way , i skimmed to the end at some point), because the fake daughter and her fiance just become so annoying ! - The characters are not that appealing. First, the Fl is too passive. Sure Gu yanfei is smart , strong and calm. However , her not reacting at all( or reacting late) in almost every situation just makes her annoying because she seems too passive. If one looks closely , he / she will realize that the times she confronts people directly are rares . Second , the enemies are annoying . The antagonists are smart but the fact that they almost all despise the Fl for no good reason is just unerving. Plus , as i said previously , Fl doesn't really stand for herself and mostly ignores people , which makes it so that almost every chapters are focused on these antagonists' thoughts and/or plots , which just makes my blood pression rise up. Third, the Fl's older brother . I appreciate him as he is one of the few who stand up for Fl. However him immediately putting aside yunrong appears to me to be really unreal. Who can stop loving a sibling he/she had grew up with just because he/she discovered that they weren’t linked by blood ? I command his loving attitude towards the Fl and his desire to make up for all the hardships she suffered. But still , is it necessary/ truly realistic that he immediately rejects yunrong ? Beside all this , Yunrong and the Gu family's hypocrisy is just unbearable the more you go through the book. - Certain things aren't explained clearly. It's a good thing to let the reader understand somethings for himself /herself. However , there’s a difference between making one work his/her brain and confusing him/her. Honestly, it's thanks to some comments that i came to understand certain things that happened . - The translation is lacking. "British family " ? The british royal family has nothing to do with the Fang family in the book. so why translate the original word when it clearly feels wrong ? Please translator, correct your mistakes, because when we pay , we await a certain level of translation . All in all , this book started well but ended up boring. If anything, you won’t lose anything if you don’t read it( i doubt it's even good enough to be taken as a book to pass time).
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I dropped this because i was getting too fed up with the purple prose. I know this is a thing typical of "blood dog" dramas, but for some reason, this time around it was turning me off. Also, it was annoying to read about the "British Monarchy," the "British" Duke or the "British" Crown Prince. I don't know the original word the author meant to use but it had nothing to do with the real life British Crown. It was jarring and pulled me out of the story every time I came across it. I wished they would fix that. Either leave the word untranslated or use something other than British because that word only refers to one thing only. And that has nothing to do with Ancient China or their ruling families. The characters themselves I can't complain about, though they aren't memorable. Nothing about them sticks out to be honest.
this story is very good love it but the only thing I don't really like is the fact that the Fl consistently tries to ruin her sister multiple times due to the random reason of mental demons even Tho her sister never did anything to her in both lives the fls sister has been the most neutral and non bish fake girl that got swapped with the fl at birth and even tries to make up for the fls 14 years of not being part of the family at this point the fls just salty cause her sister was better than her in the first life
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A well written story but unfortunately the ending is too rushed, not satisfactory at all. A few plot holes remain till end. So much talk about FL father, but no mention of her mother at all. Even after she had left a suspicious jade for her. When did her sister transmigrate into this world? Nothing is mentioned at all. A good read if you can ignore the end
This story has already been completely translated online some where so don't waste your time on webnovel!!!! I would like to think i rarely give a full 5 star review because there's always parts im not statisfied with and althoigh this novel may be slightly cliche, it is very realistic. Many may not enjoy or like how realistic the ending is thinking it as bland or boring or something but personally i quite enjoyed this book overall.
I love how calm and strong the FL is and how she tries to protect everyone close to her. And the grammar here is better than the raws.
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I like the FL and ML didn't automatically fall in love but found similarities and grew to respect each other. strong fl and interesting development on the protagonist of novel heaven blessings are not infinite and harming others unintentional is no excuse for being ignorant and selfish.
I really enjoyed this book. found that someone posted the raw in the review and checked it out. it's not too long, just 361 chapters. things moved fast in a satisfying way. it did not feel rushed. lots of funny moments. I only missed being able to leave chapter comments and paragraph comments, and better English (had to deal with gender mix-ups and all that which is normal for google translation). hopefully, the book gets released here soon and it can be enjoyed better. all in all it is recommended. Thank you Author
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So far.. there's been no grammar mistakes and the development of the characters has been well done. The story is developing well consider there's only 40 chapters. overall is not high but I do have high hope for this book.. good luck!
A haven of face slapping and sweet , sweet revenge... Eagerly awaitting more chapters" shameless begging"..
Really like this, hope it will be picked. Translation is good. FL is interesting, slow cook revenge! ML is going to be worth watching I bet! Add an adorable fluffy feline And it definitely seems like a good recipe. More please?
I don't quite understand how there's British Royalty involved, but other than this, I do like this story. There's a bit of confusion for me as to how all the characters that are supposed to be princes are connected, but other than this, I like how things are progressing with the FL and who I belive will be the ML in the end. More chapters soon, please!
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I really liked it Ending was too fast paced Did fl go to cultivation realm ? Did she cross her tribulations ? Did she meet ml?? How did li yunrong know that she wasn't the real daughter ?
Not sure why this didn't get much support but I really like this story 👍 The ending was an excellent touch! Just the right pace and length. I'd urge readers to give this a try 😄
I really liked the book and I would definitely recommend. Don't get me wrong, this book has it's flaw, but I like that author connected such a long story well and it was MUCH better than some of the reborn/transmigration romance fiction Chinese novels I have read. Here is a detailed review: CONS: 1) Translation & Grammatical error: Names, relationship, grammar, gender and pronoun are messed up. And the usage of some of the real world countries name like "British" Manor , "Turkey" dessert or "Persian" silk was very awkward to read in a fiction! 2) Excessive description: Honestly, at times it was beautiful and the metaphors & comparisons formed a vivid picture. But most of the time, they were VERY REPEATITIVE. The hyperbolic and over description of the ML and FL's beauty was mind shatteringly boring. And the worst was the over descriptions of trivial things connected to leads but big matters were ended in a line or two like the last battle's aftermath, Li Yunrong's marriage, the romantic moments between the leads etc 3) Casual racism and colorism: I know it is common in Chinese novels but deliberately showing people of lower status to be dark, small minded and ugly and the only beautiful ones are white skinned is very racist! 4) Awkward details: There were some strange things that just came out of nowhere & become important part in the story like Li Yunrong & Emperor Taizu being transmigrator, Emperor Taizu's notebook, Emperor Taizu being saved by dragon, Chu yi's sister, Eldest Princess Feng Yang's legend, Emperor Taizu wanting Fengyang to be King, etc 5) Unrealistic relationship dynamic: Gu Yuan turning cold to Yunrong even after growing up with her, Yuan being suddenly overly attached to his newly back sister and not even being as attached or caring towards the older sister, etc. It would have been better and believable if he slowly lost his interest after their TRUE colors started showing 7) Dragging the story with unnecessary side story: There was some weird tangent, the story went and started telling story of side characters like Wei Wan, or Lu Qin and Hua family, or Zheng family silver etc. I would have preferred it if author focused a bit more on developing the romance or use it to tie some lose ends like Baili Yin's case, Gu Yuan and Yunzhen's life, etc PROS 1) For me, one of the biggest pros was that no character was dumb. Whether protagonist or antagonist or even side characters, they were all smart and active. That made me look forward to the development of the story 2) Fleshed out characters: Though the FL was a bit passive about everything, I found most character believable which is saying something considering all Chinese characters are written cliche and 1D. 3) Likeable ML: I have always been horrified by how much Chinese novels especially reborn/rebirth novel focus on normalizing emotional manipulation, stalking and abusive behavior of ML. But here the ML was very well written and was really likeable. He trusted his woman, didn't get into her personal space, showed her respect and treated her like equals, always had frank and open dialouge with her, was protective but not possessive, was understanding, & courted her sweetly and patiently, making it more heart felt. There was NO stalking, NO abusive behavior, NO deception, & NO sexual harassment. He is by far my favorite Chinese Reborn novel ML. 4) Story development and connecting dots: The story did dragged and went to weird tangents at times but it never got completely off the main story and author did try to connect every side character story with main plot. The story followed opened with a revenge plot and stuck to it till the end 5) Beautiful depiction of female frdship: I am tired of reading stories where FL is always pitted against other women over the ML. As if other women have no other job in life except being jealous and having cat fights. So here the frdship of Wei Jiaoniang, Fan Mushuang, Lu Qin and Yanfei was actually touching and even fun 6) Spiritual power and limits: I was truly glad that the FL n ML were not omnipotent. They had to face lot of scheming, disbelief and limitations of being abandoned by heaven. Many of the time both had to rely on their cool headedness and rationality to fight with the situation especially Chu Yi. It makes you appreciate the leads more It is definitely worth a read and was agood story overall
The story was good, but the ending was rushed. There were little to no mention about what happened to some of the other characters, like FL's siblings. It's a short read (<1000 chapters) but could be improved by clarifying the ending a bit.
i just have to say that ch 6, and 7 are unrelated like what jill?, what Jessica?,what rose? i mean it doesn't make any sense
Very cliche face-slapping novel with a Mary Sue lead, but some very distracting errors. Chapters 6 and 7 are the wrong novel.
I feel like this is one of the most underrated book on Webnovel. They are so fantastic , you end up having your heart pound as you wait for events to unfold. There is no duplication of events like with most other books. It’s exciting and new and fresh. It’s a reincarnation with deep intelligence. It shows the FL struggles as she overcomes her pain. She doesn’t dust it off, or ignore it her mental issues
I had to stop after hitting chapter 8 because the wrong story was put in and hasn't been corrected. Some authors like to advertise their other works which is fine but at least put the missing chapters in. The story goes from her slashing a door down to some pawnshop incident and a sudden character growth without explaination (this is why chapters shouldnt be missing). I couldnt keep reading after that. However I do think it has potential to be a good story. I doubt the missing chapters would bother this much if it wasnt. It just needs some maintence...... And if it was translated maybe get a second opinion.
Spoiler de révélation good read! although updates are regular, I'm always eager for the next chapter!
I've completely read this book and I can assure you that it's barely average. Here are the pros : - The Fl is smart and calm. - The Ml is calm and sympathetic. - The enemies aren’t brain dead . - The fake daughter isn't easy to deal with because she's the world’s chosen one( or something like this). Let's go down to the cons now : - The pace is slow . The chapters are nor short nor long , however they feel boring because events seem to take forever to be dealt with. As an illustration, i take the fact that the Fl only gets married in the last chapter. Also , the story feels stretched after a hundred chapters( By the way , i skimmed to the end at some point), because the fake daughter and her fiance just become so annoying ! - The characters are not that appealing. First, the Fl is too passive. Sure Gu yanfei is smart , strong and calm. However , her not reacting at all( or reacting late) in almost every situation just makes her annoying because she seems too passive. If one looks closely , he / she will realize that the times she confronts people directly are rares . Second , the enemies are annoying . The antagonists are smart but the fact that they almost all despise the Fl for no good reason is just unerving. Plus , as i said previously , Fl doesn't really stand for herself and mostly ignores people , which makes it so that almost every chapters are focused on these antagonists' thoughts and/or plots , which just makes my blood pression rise up. Third, the Fl's older brother . I appreciate him as he is one of the few who stand up for Fl. However him immediately putting aside yunrong appears to me to be really unreal. Who can stop loving a sibling he/she had grew up with just because he/she discovered that they weren’t linked by blood ? I command his loving attitude towards the Fl and his desire to make up for all the hardships she suffered. But still , is it necessary/ truly realistic that he immediately rejects yunrong ? Beside all this , Yunrong and the Gu family's hypocrisy is just unbearable the more you go through the book. - Certain things aren't explained clearly. It's a good thing to let the reader understand somethings for himself /herself. However , there’s a difference between making one work his/her brain and confusing him/her. Honestly, it's thanks to some comments that i came to understand certain things that happened . - The translation is lacking. "British family " ? The british royal family has nothing to do with the Fang family in the book. so why translate the original word when it clearly feels wrong ? Please translator, correct your mistakes, because when we pay , we await a certain level of translation . All in all , this book started well but ended up boring. If anything, you won’t lose anything if you don’t read it( i doubt it's even good enough to be taken as a book to pass time).
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I dropped this because i was getting too fed up with the purple prose. I know this is a thing typical of "blood dog" dramas, but for some reason, this time around it was turning me off. Also, it was annoying to read about the "British Monarchy," the "British" Duke or the "British" Crown Prince. I don't know the original word the author meant to use but it had nothing to do with the real life British Crown. It was jarring and pulled me out of the story every time I came across it. I wished they would fix that. Either leave the word untranslated or use something other than British because that word only refers to one thing only. And that has nothing to do with Ancient China or their ruling families. The characters themselves I can't complain about, though they aren't memorable. Nothing about them sticks out to be honest.
this story is very good love it but the only thing I don't really like is the fact that the Fl consistently tries to ruin her sister multiple times due to the random reason of mental demons even Tho her sister never did anything to her in both lives the fls sister has been the most neutral and non bish fake girl that got swapped with the fl at birth and even tries to make up for the fls 14 years of not being part of the family at this point the fls just salty cause her sister was better than her in the first life
Spoiler de révélation A well written story but unfortunately the ending is too rushed, not satisfactory at all. A few plot holes remain till end. So much talk about FL father, but no mention of her mother at all. Even after she had left a suspicious jade for her. When did her sister transmigrate into this world? Nothing is mentioned at all. A good read if you can ignore the end
This story has already been completely translated online some where so don't waste your time on webnovel!!!! I would like to think i rarely give a full 5 star review because there's always parts im not statisfied with and althoigh this novel may be slightly cliche, it is very realistic. Many may not enjoy or like how realistic the ending is thinking it as bland or boring or something but personally i quite enjoyed this book overall.
I love how calm and strong the FL is and how she tries to protect everyone close to her. And the grammar here is better than the raws.
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I like the FL and ML didn't automatically fall in love but found similarities and grew to respect each other. strong fl and interesting development on the protagonist of novel heaven blessings are not infinite and harming others unintentional is no excuse for being ignorant and selfish.
I really enjoyed this book. found that someone posted the raw in the review and checked it out. it's not too long, just 361 chapters. things moved fast in a satisfying way. it did not feel rushed. lots of funny moments. I only missed being able to leave chapter comments and paragraph comments, and better English (had to deal with gender mix-ups and all that which is normal for google translation). hopefully, the book gets released here soon and it can be enjoyed better. all in all it is recommended. Thank you Author
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So far.. there's been no grammar mistakes and the development of the characters has been well done. The story is developing well consider there's only 40 chapters. overall is not high but I do have high hope for this book.. good luck!
A haven of face slapping and sweet , sweet revenge... Eagerly awaitting more chapters" shameless begging"..
Really like this, hope it will be picked. Translation is good. FL is interesting, slow cook revenge! ML is going to be worth watching I bet! Add an adorable fluffy feline And it definitely seems like a good recipe. More please?
I don't quite understand how there's British Royalty involved, but other than this, I do like this story. There's a bit of confusion for me as to how all the characters that are supposed to be princes are connected, but other than this, I like how things are progressing with the FL and who I belive will be the ML in the end. More chapters soon, please!
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I really liked it Ending was too fast paced Did fl go to cultivation realm ? Did she cross her tribulations ? Did she meet ml?? How did li yunrong know that she wasn't the real daughter ?