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Read this in a single day and it was a great read. Wrapped up rather nicely and although it only covers the last book of the franchise it was spaced well.
Kudos to the orginal writer and thanks for posting this story here. I hope you post more of these.
This is the most incredible story I have ever read regarding the ending of Harry Potter. (•‿•)(•‿•)(•‿•)(•‿•)(•‿•)(•‿•)(•‿•)(•‿•)(•‿•)(•‿•)(•‿•)(•‿•)(•‿•)
Как по мне эта один из лучших фанфиков по гарри/ дафна который я читал на этом и других сайтах. Уступаюший только "Оплачено кровью" и "чти свою кровь". [img=update]
This fan-fic was just perfect and I’m so happy you wrote this master piece I hope you keep writing more
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There are a few minor details that are different from the world setting like Daphne's appearance, but an amazing read. A beautiful ending to the franchise that really made it excellent .
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I liked the ending and think that Harry and Daphne are a great couple. Thanks for this work 🫶
The story isn't bad but it seems a bit like a caricature of the characters, but at some points we can actually imagine some of these things happening, although I think the love potions part is unnecessary, the romance part in the canon is really ruined by the author especially the romance between Harry and Ginny, it was very strange, Ginny entered the relationship with much more experience than Harry and their romance started very suddenly without much planning on the author's part, the author left Ginny's image very tarnished by the amount of experience she had compared to Harry, let's face it Ginny didn't have the courage to talk to Harry, the boy she supposedly liked but had the courage to kiss her boyfriend Dino intensely in front of everyone not long ago and pleased very few, that's certainly one of the biggest reasons for the authors to attack Ginny so much, anyway the romance was well executed and one of the things that definitely should have happened in the Canon was Harry dating and marrying a Slytherin.
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Absolutely excellent. While I wish there had been maybe a little more on their relationship, the story is good and the characters seem realistic
This is one of the most amazing short stories on Harry Potter I've seen in my life. The 'evil' Snape didn't really fit in, but considering it was written by Colt01, it was to be expected. There is some slight Ron, Dumbledore and Snape bashing, but other than that, amazing read honestly.
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Hey you....come here, listen.....you've found a gold mine, it must be cherished , enjoyed and shared. Now go, enjoy it and don't forget, spread the word.
Thoroughly enjoyable read and a significantly better ending then the original work.
Me encanto es una muy buena historia aunque me ubiera gustado que hermalloni siguiera siendo su amiga y que ron guera dejado solo [img=recommend] [img=recommend] [img=recommend]
This book even though it was short the book had a good story line and a perfect ending
I prefer this to the book ending honestly. 13/10 ............................................................................................
It is short, but it was a great story nonetheless. For people who enjoyed Paid in Blood this should be worth reading.
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This was a fantastic read for such a short story. The ending is well written if a bit fast but otherwise a great read. Would recommend to any who enjoy Harry Potter fan fics.
Read this in a single day and it was a great read. Wrapped up rather nicely and although it only covers the last book of the franchise it was spaced well.
Kudos to the orginal writer and thanks for posting this story here. I hope you post more of these.
This is the most incredible story I have ever read regarding the ending of Harry Potter. (•‿•)(•‿•)(•‿•)(•‿•)(•‿•)(•‿•)(•‿•)(•‿•)(•‿•)(•‿•)(•‿•)(•‿•)(•‿•)
Как по мне эта один из лучших фанфиков по гарри/ дафна который я читал на этом и других сайтах. Уступаюший только "Оплачено кровью" и "чти свою кровь". [img=update]
This fan-fic was just perfect and I’m so happy you wrote this master piece I hope you keep writing more
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There are a few minor details that are different from the world setting like Daphne's appearance, but an amazing read. A beautiful ending to the franchise that really made it excellent .
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I liked the ending and think that Harry and Daphne are a great couple. Thanks for this work 🫶
The story isn't bad but it seems a bit like a caricature of the characters, but at some points we can actually imagine some of these things happening, although I think the love potions part is unnecessary, the romance part in the canon is really ruined by the author especially the romance between Harry and Ginny, it was very strange, Ginny entered the relationship with much more experience than Harry and their romance started very suddenly without much planning on the author's part, the author left Ginny's image very tarnished by the amount of experience she had compared to Harry, let's face it Ginny didn't have the courage to talk to Harry, the boy she supposedly liked but had the courage to kiss her boyfriend Dino intensely in front of everyone not long ago and pleased very few, that's certainly one of the biggest reasons for the authors to attack Ginny so much, anyway the romance was well executed and one of the things that definitely should have happened in the Canon was Harry dating and marrying a Slytherin.
Spoiler de révélation Absolutely excellent. While I wish there had been maybe a little more on their relationship, the story is good and the characters seem realistic
This is one of the most amazing short stories on Harry Potter I've seen in my life. The 'evil' Snape didn't really fit in, but considering it was written by Colt01, it was to be expected. There is some slight Ron, Dumbledore and Snape bashing, but other than that, amazing read honestly.
Spoiler de révélation Hey you....come here, listen.....you've found a gold mine, it must be cherished , enjoyed and shared. Now go, enjoy it and don't forget, spread the word.
Thoroughly enjoyable read and a significantly better ending then the original work.
Me encanto es una muy buena historia aunque me ubiera gustado que hermalloni siguiera siendo su amiga y que ron guera dejado solo [img=recommend] [img=recommend] [img=recommend]
This book even though it was short the book had a good story line and a perfect ending
I prefer this to the book ending honestly. 13/10 ............................................................................................
It is short, but it was a great story nonetheless. For people who enjoyed Paid in Blood this should be worth reading.
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This was a fantastic read for such a short story. The ending is well written if a bit fast but otherwise a great read. Would recommend to any who enjoy Harry Potter fan fics.