Pokemon : The Force Of Chaos

LV 13

Tesseis

Historia interessante, bem escrita. Tem muito potencial. Fiquei feliz por encontrar essa Fanfic no começo e infeliz com os poucos capítulos (apesar da atualização de capítulos constante, não é o suficiente para minha sede).

LV 2

DotComplex

Is good so far. Good english and grammar, story is unique and intriguing, MC feels a bit too edgy sometimes but that doesn't really ruin the feel of it that much.

LV 1

Heinzbeansscranner

Good. Grammar isn't the best though but that's hard for a author :3 little bit vague in places aswell. xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx

LV 4

CruelReality

The story is off to a great start and far above the normal quality of writing on this site. The author understands the concept of showing not telling, characters backstories and depths are being gradually revealed, and it is clear that some amount of planning went into this. I am excited to read more, and I am hoping that the foolish monkeys on this site are tickled enough to support this novel.

LV 1

ALonelySigmaMale

Ngl i am a sucker for dark pokemon stories , i really enjoyed pokemon : dark uprising or whatever that was a Chinese fanfic , which i recommend even though it's slow. This seems to have a story that slowly is starting to get fleshed out , but it is a little bit vague at the moment , probably gonna get explained later on by the author. Mc is ruthless, will torture and will kill , but he seems to have flaws , and i like that. He seems to be traumatized (lil bit insane?) but it seems that the author is trying not to make him seem edgy by giving him flaws. The concepts about energies i think is incredibly interesting , as it's cool to imagine people fighting while their pokemon's are lol. It seems to be every 2 days in update schedule , which is good.

LV 4

Nyxio

Interesting and well written but depressing af. His powers are limited too and probably have a hidden danger which we don’t know yet.

LV 1

Heinzbeansscranner

i did a review before , and wow. I gotta say that i think that the author has improved since the beginning. My comment about grammar is becoming better and the author seems to be adressing issues. I feel like it is still vague atm but the author is leading to a climax. I feel like cults in pokemon is such a good idea , and i love pokemon insurgence so it's a win win for me lol.

Good book , i do feel like the beginning is a tiny bit weak compared to the later stages but you can see that the author has a clear plan for what he has in the future. The characters are kind of mysterious as well and I'm looking forward to their backgrounds/powers/mark's.

ugh this is the second time i've wrote a review and i've had to make another account for this since the other one was "limited on reviews" even though none of them went through. Very webnovel like , isn't it? better than most of the things in here , grammar is quite bad in places but meh its good. Another complaint is that it may have words in that are kinda complex? not to sound like a kindergarten person but if english isn't your first language it may be diffucult , but good story none of the less!

saw the author's request for a rating so i created account. You should feel honoured author-san alright story [img=recommend] ajdisadiajdidjisda