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A great story so far with sensibly good development, hope it won't get dropped or discontinued . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . End
Can't get myself to like it no matter how many times I read this, dunno why. Can't get myself to like it no matter how many times I read this, dunno why. Can't get myself to like it no matter how many times I read this, dunno why. Can't get myself to like it no matter how many times I read this, dunno why.
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Love it so far. Can't wait for more! .......................................................................................................
this review is to encourage the author to keep the story going, the idea is good and the characters interactions are interesting to read. althought, I am curious as to how things will become when Ban and his crew meet Shanks and his crew, a fair warning that Shanks althought is pretty strong, he is not even close to his canon self. he still haven't become a Yonko, according to chapter 957 & episode 958 when Sengoku & Brandnew showed the bounties of the Yonko along with Roger's. they stated that Shanks became a Yonko 6 years ago(post time-skip) meaning he became a Yonko about 4 years before canon started, aroune when Luffy was 13 years old (since Luffy started his journey at 17 years old) so Shanks althought is very strong, he is not close to the level of power he have currently in canon. also Luffy was 7 when he meet Shanks, and Shanks already fought Teach and got the eye scar, and Luffy didn't meet Ace until after Shanks left. exactly when Garp came and found Luffy with a straw hat shouting about becoming a pirate. so if Shanks and his crew still in Foosha Village it means there is still about 6 years before he became a Yonko, and 10 years away from canon, & 12 years before current timeline in Anime/Manga. (Shanks age post-timeskip is 39, and 37 pre-timeskip, and currently he is 27 years old; he is 20 years older than Luffy.) hope this informations help you with the current timeline.
A great story so far with sensibly good development, hope it won't get dropped or discontinued . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . End
Can't get myself to like it no matter how many times I read this, dunno why. Can't get myself to like it no matter how many times I read this, dunno why. Can't get myself to like it no matter how many times I read this, dunno why. Can't get myself to like it no matter how many times I read this, dunno why.
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Love it so far. Can't wait for more! .......................................................................................................
this review is to encourage the author to keep the story going, the idea is good and the characters interactions are interesting to read. althought, I am curious as to how things will become when Ban and his crew meet Shanks and his crew, a fair warning that Shanks althought is pretty strong, he is not even close to his canon self. he still haven't become a Yonko, according to chapter 957 & episode 958 when Sengoku & Brandnew showed the bounties of the Yonko along with Roger's. they stated that Shanks became a Yonko 6 years ago(post time-skip) meaning he became a Yonko about 4 years before canon started, aroune when Luffy was 13 years old (since Luffy started his journey at 17 years old) so Shanks althought is very strong, he is not close to the level of power he have currently in canon. also Luffy was 7 when he meet Shanks, and Shanks already fought Teach and got the eye scar, and Luffy didn't meet Ace until after Shanks left. exactly when Garp came and found Luffy with a straw hat shouting about becoming a pirate. so if Shanks and his crew still in Foosha Village it means there is still about 6 years before he became a Yonko, and 10 years away from canon, & 12 years before current timeline in Anime/Manga. (Shanks age post-timeskip is 39, and 37 pre-timeskip, and currently he is 27 years old; he is 20 years older than Luffy.) hope this informations help you with the current timeline.