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The pacing is mid. Not enough character traits given to the MC regarding him as a reincarnator.
Currently chapter 12 A Naruto story worth trying at least once. I love the characters and the MC so far and they don't break the immersion. It's a slow paced well built and thought out ff with an creative twist; it starts off with the MC being Itachi's gf and her mom as adopted son/brother. A story worthy of being in the top 5 rankings if it had a faster update schedule. The writing style is perfectly readable and makes time fly. I would remember this to any romance loving naruto fan. And at the very least, the author doesn't give the feeling of an amateur writer and that's saying something.
This is beautiful all the words that i can say but the mc does remind me of rudeus a tiny amount but i guess i can mind that since character development exists. For now he is still a child in the story so far and he behaves like one too. The story development is a tad bit slow, and the world background is developed fantastically the updates are quite stable too
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I like the story, keep it up and don't hesitate if randon come to tell you that the power system is wrong or the canon is not the same (because I have read thousands of naruto fanfics and there is always someone who criticizes and they think they are wise xD, it is better to do it the way you like it and you can ask for comments on how to improve so you can implement it in your own way).
The pacing is mid. Not enough character traits given to the MC regarding him as a reincarnator.
Currently chapter 12 A Naruto story worth trying at least once. I love the characters and the MC so far and they don't break the immersion. It's a slow paced well built and thought out ff with an creative twist; it starts off with the MC being Itachi's gf and her mom as adopted son/brother. A story worthy of being in the top 5 rankings if it had a faster update schedule. The writing style is perfectly readable and makes time fly. I would remember this to any romance loving naruto fan. And at the very least, the author doesn't give the feeling of an amateur writer and that's saying something.
This is beautiful all the words that i can say but the mc does remind me of rudeus a tiny amount but i guess i can mind that since character development exists. For now he is still a child in the story so far and he behaves like one too. The story development is a tad bit slow, and the world background is developed fantastically the updates are quite stable too
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I like the story, keep it up and don't hesitate if randon come to tell you that the power system is wrong or the canon is not the same (because I have read thousands of naruto fanfics and there is always someone who criticizes and they think they are wise xD, it is better to do it the way you like it and you can ask for comments on how to improve so you can implement it in your own way).