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The story is alright and interesting.The grammar is fine as well no major mistakes.The only things worth complaining about is the translation errors because there’s no way you repeatedly continue the mistake of that word unless you’re translating in a different language. Like Magical circuits becoming magical chains and moonlit world becoming lunar world or moon world and many other fate terms got mixed up like different words for the magic of reinforcement,alteration,structural analysis… Other than the multiple errors of fate terms I’d say the story’s alright
Good nasuverse fanfic ................................................................................................................................
ok, i am on chapter 4 and the only thing i understood about the prologue is that mc is from terraria, wich is weird given the fic's name is about having satoro gojo's powers me confused o_0
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I might have found a diamond I might have found a diamond I might have found a diamond I might have found a diamond I might have found a diamond I might have found a diamond I might have found a diamond I might have found a diamond I might have found a diamond I might have found a diamond I might have found a diamond I might have found a diamond I might have found a diamond I might have found a diamond
Great fanfic with some mistranslations......................................................................................................
I would say this is a very good novel like what you have so far I mean it's it's better than most fate novels that are out there and you actually care enough to actually give them a background that doesn't just oh yeah on the son of a God yeah bro yeah you know just casual son of a God I don't know it I'm not going to know it until the end of the story or I have to be a villain and I emo edgy emo edgy emo edgy yeah I'm emo where you going to do about it but it's good that's a good start has a development line and you know just good overall so far I'm coming to like this a lot anyways thanks for the entertainment there's not really any good novels on this site so I'm really looking forward to reading all of this
The story is alright and interesting.The grammar is fine as well no major mistakes.The only things worth complaining about is the translation errors because there’s no way you repeatedly continue the mistake of that word unless you’re translating in a different language. Like Magical circuits becoming magical chains and moonlit world becoming lunar world or moon world and many other fate terms got mixed up like different words for the magic of reinforcement,alteration,structural analysis… Other than the multiple errors of fate terms I’d say the story’s alright
Good nasuverse fanfic ................................................................................................................................
ok, i am on chapter 4 and the only thing i understood about the prologue is that mc is from terraria, wich is weird given the fic's name is about having satoro gojo's powers me confused o_0
Great Great Great Great...................................................................................................,....................
I might have found a diamond I might have found a diamond I might have found a diamond I might have found a diamond I might have found a diamond I might have found a diamond I might have found a diamond I might have found a diamond I might have found a diamond I might have found a diamond I might have found a diamond I might have found a diamond I might have found a diamond I might have found a diamond
Great fanfic with some mistranslations......................................................................................................
I would say this is a very good novel like what you have so far I mean it's it's better than most fate novels that are out there and you actually care enough to actually give them a background that doesn't just oh yeah on the son of a God yeah bro yeah you know just casual son of a God I don't know it I'm not going to know it until the end of the story or I have to be a villain and I emo edgy emo edgy emo edgy yeah I'm emo where you going to do about it but it's good that's a good start has a development line and you know just good overall so far I'm coming to like this a lot anyways thanks for the entertainment there's not really any good novels on this site so I'm really looking forward to reading all of this