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nice novel op mc story 👍 we need more chapters author [img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
A masterpiece novel ,the most impressive thing about this novel is about its world building and power system. which makes this one of my most favorite novel, only thing i want to advice the author is that he should slow the pace of the plot ,in high realm arc I kind of feel like we could have explored more things. I hope that the author correct it in next arc and please also minimize the use of clone ,i don't like the clone getting more screentime instead of main body because i sometimes generalize them as different entity instead of same entity and it kinds of makes the story sometimes irritable (or you can make the clone do the progressing and in the time of main plot you should swap them) and lastly in later chapter their is very less smut which is disappointing ,and he also should add more harem members and do some face slapping as well which we got in beast realm arc (one of my favorite arc) it will help the viewers to to engage in the story more. Hope author implement this . Damn I'm again gonna reread this .Thank you
Nice story, though this updating stability has left the chat. But it’s one of my favorite stories.
Uma novel muito boa , só que tá demorando muito pra lançar capítulo, se não fosse por isso seria 10 de 10 . Mais mesmo assim eu gosto da história de como o protagonista usa seus poderes de como ele cresce rápido em questão de força .
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This is it I like that kind of story and hope author brings new chapter's SOOOOONNN
I like fast paced story so its a 5 star for me but update time is irregular i don't know when its gonna drop.i have a suggestion though many have suggested or you yourself thought about it "why don't you stack up the chapters in your free time and update one chapter regularly on a certain interval of time?" Other things like background,story development, writing is 5 star for me as English is my second language, As for character design I don't like some of the characters design of Dave's family like his wives as i think its poorly done but overall its fine i gave 4 star for it
the writing and grammar at the beginning of the story is terrible , i hope it improves further in or i'll be dropping this novel
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For me this is one of the best webnovels that I am continuously looking forward to as it has best elements in Every background wether power up set up or realms system although considering his future Enemies his power development is kinda slow not battle power but realm power apart from that everything is well explained And I hope author can continue this kind of work ❤️❤️
Hi bro, thanks for the novel, I would like to request something if you do not mind ............ When writing and showing "SYSTEM RESPONSES" .... instead of using it like this << Welcome Host >> or < Welcome Host > , please use square brackets like [ Welcome Host ]. The reason for this request is because, I always use text to speech , software to listen and they always skip << >> or < > THanks
The story and all the plot are so good that I am always looking up for new chapters and Thanks to you author for giving us read without spending 💰 for because sadly I do want to read but can't afford to many webnovels are like that for me so thank you author
For me it's best as the story and plot is thrilling as well as cultivation system here in this novel is also very good not much confusing although the mc strength is weak compared to enemy he will face currently I hope his speedy can keep up it would be even more good if cheat like ability were to be add although I am somewhat disappointed with update as it takes time to update
A really good novel, read up to 500+ chap and its good you guys should definitely try it
i really really enjoyed it , I will not tell what others have already said , so I'll say you just start reading it you will not be disappointed
It's a good novel idea but it's trash with how he likes disgusting womans first the arrogant bi ch duke daugter susan then the princess and even gives them benefits and makes them stronger which I don't see any reason too I mean are you doing that just because they are beautiful? even while they show gold digger signs it's just them being with him for his status and then after knowing he can make them even stronger they trying to act as if he is their slave. That duke daughter tried to aphrodisiac him and leave him to get humiliated and that princess tried to make him her slave by signing a soul contract. Lina teacher and Sophia auction owner daughter are much better than them and even if they got powered because of that I wouldn't feel anything.
Esta muy bueno,me gusto bastante y espero que lo actualicen pronto,por que esta genial y le gustó bastanteb. Fnkd. Rbr jf t rj rjt rjt hr rj tjr ur 4nt ht fj rjr tjr rbkrt
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Love this Novel. please upload more chapters why did you stop uploading more chapters 😢 ?
one of the best story [img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
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This is for you author. if you dare to drop this novel I'll do everything in my power to search your address and punish you.
So this is one of my favorite novels. The main character isn’t going to change, and he just does whatever he wants. He steadily gains strength, and gets women. Though after the school arc, they aren’t really the main focus of the story anymore. I like how he is OP no matter what, and just keeps getting better and better. He also has a background that can’t be messed with, so he isn’t targeted when he shows his strength. He doesn’t bother hiding that he is strong either. Honestly I don’t know how this hasn’t gotten contracted yet. Love the book.
Hi, I am the 61st to Review. This is novel is soooooooooooooooooooo good. Really loved it. Continue the good work. Waiting for many more updates.
author are you there? I don't know about the rest but I need updates. I am a culture man, I need to read some gods and man *$# 😉
nice novel op mc story 👍 we need more chapters author [img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
A masterpiece novel ,the most impressive thing about this novel is about its world building and power system. which makes this one of my most favorite novel, only thing i want to advice the author is that he should slow the pace of the plot ,in high realm arc I kind of feel like we could have explored more things. I hope that the author correct it in next arc and please also minimize the use of clone ,i don't like the clone getting more screentime instead of main body because i sometimes generalize them as different entity instead of same entity and it kinds of makes the story sometimes irritable (or you can make the clone do the progressing and in the time of main plot you should swap them) and lastly in later chapter their is very less smut which is disappointing ,and he also should add more harem members and do some face slapping as well which we got in beast realm arc (one of my favorite arc) it will help the viewers to to engage in the story more. Hope author implement this . Damn I'm again gonna reread this .Thank you
Nice story, though this updating stability has left the chat. But it’s one of my favorite stories.
Uma novel muito boa , só que tá demorando muito pra lançar capítulo, se não fosse por isso seria 10 de 10 . Mais mesmo assim eu gosto da história de como o protagonista usa seus poderes de como ele cresce rápido em questão de força .
Spoiler de révélation This is it I like that kind of story and hope author brings new chapter's SOOOOONNN
I like fast paced story so its a 5 star for me but update time is irregular i don't know when its gonna drop.i have a suggestion though many have suggested or you yourself thought about it "why don't you stack up the chapters in your free time and update one chapter regularly on a certain interval of time?" Other things like background,story development, writing is 5 star for me as English is my second language, As for character design I don't like some of the characters design of Dave's family like his wives as i think its poorly done but overall its fine i gave 4 star for it
the writing and grammar at the beginning of the story is terrible , i hope it improves further in or i'll be dropping this novel
Spoiler de révélation For me this is one of the best webnovels that I am continuously looking forward to as it has best elements in Every background wether power up set up or realms system although considering his future Enemies his power development is kinda slow not battle power but realm power apart from that everything is well explained And I hope author can continue this kind of work ❤️❤️
Hi bro, thanks for the novel, I would like to request something if you do not mind ............ When writing and showing "SYSTEM RESPONSES" .... instead of using it like this << Welcome Host >> or < Welcome Host > , please use square brackets like [ Welcome Host ]. The reason for this request is because, I always use text to speech , software to listen and they always skip << >> or < > THanks
The story and all the plot are so good that I am always looking up for new chapters and Thanks to you author for giving us read without spending 💰 for because sadly I do want to read but can't afford to many webnovels are like that for me so thank you author
For me it's best as the story and plot is thrilling as well as cultivation system here in this novel is also very good not much confusing although the mc strength is weak compared to enemy he will face currently I hope his speedy can keep up it would be even more good if cheat like ability were to be add although I am somewhat disappointed with update as it takes time to update
A really good novel, read up to 500+ chap and its good you guys should definitely try it
i really really enjoyed it , I will not tell what others have already said , so I'll say you just start reading it you will not be disappointed
It's a good novel idea but it's trash with how he likes disgusting womans first the arrogant bi ch duke daugter susan then the princess and even gives them benefits and makes them stronger which I don't see any reason too I mean are you doing that just because they are beautiful? even while they show gold digger signs it's just them being with him for his status and then after knowing he can make them even stronger they trying to act as if he is their slave. That duke daughter tried to aphrodisiac him and leave him to get humiliated and that princess tried to make him her slave by signing a soul contract. Lina teacher and Sophia auction owner daughter are much better than them and even if they got powered because of that I wouldn't feel anything.
Esta muy bueno,me gusto bastante y espero que lo actualicen pronto,por que esta genial y le gustó bastanteb. Fnkd. Rbr jf t rj rjt rjt hr rj tjr ur 4nt ht fj rjr tjr rbkrt
Spoiler de révélation Love this Novel. please upload more chapters why did you stop uploading more chapters 😢 ?
one of the best story [img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
Spoiler de révélation This is for you author. if you dare to drop this novel I'll do everything in my power to search your address and punish you.
So this is one of my favorite novels. The main character isn’t going to change, and he just does whatever he wants. He steadily gains strength, and gets women. Though after the school arc, they aren’t really the main focus of the story anymore. I like how he is OP no matter what, and just keeps getting better and better. He also has a background that can’t be messed with, so he isn’t targeted when he shows his strength. He doesn’t bother hiding that he is strong either. Honestly I don’t know how this hasn’t gotten contracted yet. Love the book.
Hi, I am the 61st to Review. This is novel is soooooooooooooooooooo good. Really loved it. Continue the good work. Waiting for many more updates.
author are you there? I don't know about the rest but I need updates. I am a culture man, I need to read some gods and man *$# 😉