1Critiques
- Qualité de l’écriture
- Stabilité des mises à jour
- Développement de l’histoire
- Conception des personnages
- Contexte du monde
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The story is slow paced and there are some grammar mistakes made however the overall story is pretty good. The fighting scenes are slightly unexciting and the world building isn't the best for now as I do not have a proper idea of how the world really functions.
The story is slow paced and there are some grammar mistakes made however the overall story is pretty good. The fighting scenes are slightly unexciting and the world building isn't the best for now as I do not have a proper idea of how the world really functions.