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The first Ten chapters did showed a better Ash and he was improving and didn’t suddenly became an all knowing, story is little fast paced but good, i would like to see some training chapters too.
This fanfic has a better grammer than first one, the other characters have more story than the Ash centered one like before, well in simple way it is good.
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The first Ten chapters did showed a better Ash and he was improving and didn’t suddenly became an all knowing, story is little fast paced but good, i would like to see some training chapters too.
This fanfic has a better grammer than first one, the other characters have more story than the Ash centered one like before, well in simple way it is good.
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A shameless review form the author[img=recommend].......[img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]