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I like the story, it's unfortunate that the author stopped updating. --------------------------------------------------------------------
Well the stories not bad honestly but the update now is a bit slower or maybe i was wrong maybe the author stopped? Just wanted to tell this story has good potential
Very good, the author manages to put a big dose of realism in the story, and still leave it with that touch of nostalgia, and innocence of the original animation, the construction of the universe has a lot of explanation and even without seeing the original story you can understand the story. I highly recommend it for reading.
really like this story hope you come back and do more my rating would be a perfect 5 out 5 if the updates came in at least once every few days to once a weak
I'll be brief (currently chapter 11) I really enjoyed the fanfic, it has a good quality of writing and has no plot holes so far (apart from the fact that the two magical communities haven't discovered each other yet, but I suppose the story is the kind where we'll find out how it works. of things and the world as the plot progresses). I personally think the author should, for now, focus on the interaction between communities (MC and faerie), where the MC learns more about communities while also teaching (basically the path the author is taking) good work author[img=recommend]👍👍
Author review here. What can I say here that I haven't said before? I could write a long essay about each point in the story, good or bad, but I'm too lazy to do it. I'll just wait until my story is found by someone who can give actual constructive criticism. God knows I can't do that with my own novels.
I like the story, it's unfortunate that the author stopped updating. --------------------------------------------------------------------
Well the stories not bad honestly but the update now is a bit slower or maybe i was wrong maybe the author stopped? Just wanted to tell this story has good potential
Very good, the author manages to put a big dose of realism in the story, and still leave it with that touch of nostalgia, and innocence of the original animation, the construction of the universe has a lot of explanation and even without seeing the original story you can understand the story. I highly recommend it for reading.
really like this story hope you come back and do more my rating would be a perfect 5 out 5 if the updates came in at least once every few days to once a weak
I'll be brief (currently chapter 11) I really enjoyed the fanfic, it has a good quality of writing and has no plot holes so far (apart from the fact that the two magical communities haven't discovered each other yet, but I suppose the story is the kind where we'll find out how it works. of things and the world as the plot progresses). I personally think the author should, for now, focus on the interaction between communities (MC and faerie), where the MC learns more about communities while also teaching (basically the path the author is taking) good work author[img=recommend]👍👍
Author review here. What can I say here that I haven't said before? I could write a long essay about each point in the story, good or bad, but I'm too lazy to do it. I'll just wait until my story is found by someone who can give actual constructive criticism. God knows I can't do that with my own novels.