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great concept bad editing. hardly readable. delete delete delete delete delete delete delete delete delete delete
However, I really enjoyed reading the story of a Pokémon seller in the real world. Unfortunately, judging by the date of the last update, I don’t see a new chapter, which is a shame.
aku suka pokemon dan sekarang menemukan cerita dimana mc membawa pokemon ke dunia modern itu sangat hebat 👏👍 aku juga suka bahwa cerita nya tidak terlalu banyak drama terutama penerimaan pokemon ke negara tersebut....
A very good idea. The reactions of the characters makes sense. But the Writing quality is very bad.
I couldn't bring myself to keep reading this badly translated novel that due to how it's translated feels like a mtl(most likely is) I can't read this I'm out. from comments on the other novels it seems this author has a problem translating novels idk if they are copy pasting mtls and claiming as their own or what in addition to that I'm pretty sure I remember seeing 1-3 star reviews before when I tried to read this once on wn so I tried reading again. now I'm confused at how there is no 1star reviews and mostly only 5 or 4 stars (if you think this is worthy of those star with its current quality then something wrong with you "cough BOTS cough")looks like either deleted all reviews below 3 star or a repost of the novel. while the idea is something I've not seen much of the mtl quality tl has ruined this novel in every category this novel unless it has a massive cleaning to fix the quality of the tl will only ever be worth 1 star or a max of 2 for me if I wanna read a mtl that destroys my brain cells I'll go to read mtls
when will you be uploading more this is too good for you to stop and I really love it.[img=update][img=update]
I don't know what happened, but now, starting from chapter 10, I can't finish reading the rest of the chapter, as the website says I need to download the app to continue (I was already at chapter 60).
This really feels Chinese…and I mean in every respect. I simply can’t stand how the author constantly misuses “he” and “she,” but even more so when they write proverbs or idioms and don’t clarify their meaning. The idiom will then continue into another paragraph where it completely disrupts the flow because the reader has no idea what is meant by the word. Not really disappointed bc this is what I expect coming into the story.
If you can improve your English writing or your translation capability, this novel will be much more than this. It has so much potential but is hindered by your English writing. I hope you can improve it. I don’t even know proper character names.
Author please don't drop this 💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯
Thank you for the great FF, the translation was so so but readable. Again, thank you [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
The story is good, but the racism and patriotism destroy everything, maybe you need to skip or rewrite some chapter, especially about Zygarde and Yveltal attacks to other countries (the usual Chinese vibe). At least, make them fell sad about what happened. felling happy about the destruction of a city in another country is inhumanand and unacceptable, even though they hate that country. Aside from that, the story is acceptable.
This good especially when you have watched pokemon as it brings back nostalgia and isn't really as boring as other pokemon fanfic that takes place in the pokemon world since you probably know the flow goes if you ever played a pokemon game
Very interesting concept bringing pokemon to a world that doesn't know them, enjoying the chapters so far, also love the shenanigans with the first 3 trainers.
Me gustó mucho amigo, es muy interesante, la historia tiene un sentido único que me gusta y solo espero que no dejes la historia y actualiza cuando pueda
Spoiler de révélation
Story is pretty good, the translation could be better but it is good enough, if you don’t mind the Chinese vibe and names I recommend giving it a try
Haven't read it yet but the concept is kinda new and different. I hope the translation is good enough. If I don't find it good I'll delete this review
I hope you all enjoy it as much as I enjoyed writing it! Don't forget to comment and rate! I love feedback and my reader's reactions. You guys inspire me to write more.
great concept bad editing. hardly readable. delete delete delete delete delete delete delete delete delete delete
However, I really enjoyed reading the story of a Pokémon seller in the real world. Unfortunately, judging by the date of the last update, I don’t see a new chapter, which is a shame.
aku suka pokemon dan sekarang menemukan cerita dimana mc membawa pokemon ke dunia modern itu sangat hebat 👏👍 aku juga suka bahwa cerita nya tidak terlalu banyak drama terutama penerimaan pokemon ke negara tersebut....
A very good idea. The reactions of the characters makes sense. But the Writing quality is very bad.
I couldn't bring myself to keep reading this badly translated novel that due to how it's translated feels like a mtl(most likely is) I can't read this I'm out. from comments on the other novels it seems this author has a problem translating novels idk if they are copy pasting mtls and claiming as their own or what in addition to that I'm pretty sure I remember seeing 1-3 star reviews before when I tried to read this once on wn so I tried reading again. now I'm confused at how there is no 1star reviews and mostly only 5 or 4 stars (if you think this is worthy of those star with its current quality then something wrong with you "cough BOTS cough")looks like either deleted all reviews below 3 star or a repost of the novel. while the idea is something I've not seen much of the mtl quality tl has ruined this novel in every category this novel unless it has a massive cleaning to fix the quality of the tl will only ever be worth 1 star or a max of 2 for me if I wanna read a mtl that destroys my brain cells I'll go to read mtls
when will you be uploading more this is too good for you to stop and I really love it.[img=update][img=update]
I don't know what happened, but now, starting from chapter 10, I can't finish reading the rest of the chapter, as the website says I need to download the app to continue (I was already at chapter 60).
This really feels Chinese…and I mean in every respect. I simply can’t stand how the author constantly misuses “he” and “she,” but even more so when they write proverbs or idioms and don’t clarify their meaning. The idiom will then continue into another paragraph where it completely disrupts the flow because the reader has no idea what is meant by the word. Not really disappointed bc this is what I expect coming into the story.
If you can improve your English writing or your translation capability, this novel will be much more than this. It has so much potential but is hindered by your English writing. I hope you can improve it. I don’t even know proper character names.
Author please don't drop this 💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯
Thank you for the great FF, the translation was so so but readable. Again, thank you [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
The story is good, but the racism and patriotism destroy everything, maybe you need to skip or rewrite some chapter, especially about Zygarde and Yveltal attacks to other countries (the usual Chinese vibe). At least, make them fell sad about what happened. felling happy about the destruction of a city in another country is inhumanand and unacceptable, even though they hate that country. Aside from that, the story is acceptable.
This good especially when you have watched pokemon as it brings back nostalgia and isn't really as boring as other pokemon fanfic that takes place in the pokemon world since you probably know the flow goes if you ever played a pokemon game
Very interesting concept bringing pokemon to a world that doesn't know them, enjoying the chapters so far, also love the shenanigans with the first 3 trainers.
Me gustó mucho amigo, es muy interesante, la historia tiene un sentido único que me gusta y solo espero que no dejes la historia y actualiza cuando pueda
Spoiler de révélation Story is pretty good, the translation could be better but it is good enough, if you don’t mind the Chinese vibe and names I recommend giving it a try
Haven't read it yet but the concept is kinda new and different. I hope the translation is good enough. If I don't find it good I'll delete this review
I hope you all enjoy it as much as I enjoyed writing it! Don't forget to comment and rate! I love feedback and my reader's reactions. You guys inspire me to write more.