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Hello Author, I can't read the chapters in the Web version ( PC ) from the 11th chapter, it asks me to read on the application, is this normal ? This is the first time it's happened to me and I'm not a fan of reading in the application :(
You just called me a shameless author right? Well I'm not. I'm just using this medium to write a honest remark. I will like to thank everyone that supports this novel from the onset. I honestly can't thank you guys enough. This story truly came alive due to your continuous support. I'm so glad I didn't give up this novel. I'm definitely going to write the world for you guys. I'll use this medium to say some few things. This novel is purely slice of life. Please do not be annoyed if it isn't to your satisfaction. I'm still very very inexperienced. The last time I joined a wpc contest, I was the 40th out of 41 before the end of the contest. So I guess this is an improvement. I'll also use this medium to answer any questions that I can. Oh! And one more thing, I gave my novel a five star review SO YEAH!! I'M DEFINITELY SHAMELESS!! MUHAHA!!! OUCH!!
This novel is an interesting read with good potential. To me, the story line is unique and the world building is great as well. Give it a read as well ;)
MORE CHAPTERS PLEASE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I LOVE THE NOVEL SO MUCH 😍😍😍😍 10/10 would recommend, speaking of recommend it's now in my public library come check it out along with 50ish ppl! :)
only six chapters but I am glued. wasn't sure if I cared about readinga story of a guy raising children but turns out I do. keep the chapters flowing I will be reading. one of the better written novels on here also.
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my favorite novel 💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕 . . . . . . . . . 💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕
Hello Author, I can't read the chapters in the Web version ( PC ) from the 11th chapter, it asks me to read on the application, is this normal ? This is the first time it's happened to me and I'm not a fan of reading in the application :(
You just called me a shameless author right? Well I'm not. I'm just using this medium to write a honest remark. I will like to thank everyone that supports this novel from the onset. I honestly can't thank you guys enough. This story truly came alive due to your continuous support. I'm so glad I didn't give up this novel. I'm definitely going to write the world for you guys. I'll use this medium to say some few things. This novel is purely slice of life. Please do not be annoyed if it isn't to your satisfaction. I'm still very very inexperienced. The last time I joined a wpc contest, I was the 40th out of 41 before the end of the contest. So I guess this is an improvement. I'll also use this medium to answer any questions that I can. Oh! And one more thing, I gave my novel a five star review SO YEAH!! I'M DEFINITELY SHAMELESS!! MUHAHA!!! OUCH!!
This novel is an interesting read with good potential. To me, the story line is unique and the world building is great as well. Give it a read as well ;)
MORE CHAPTERS PLEASE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I LOVE THE NOVEL SO MUCH 😍😍😍😍 10/10 would recommend, speaking of recommend it's now in my public library come check it out along with 50ish ppl! :)
only six chapters but I am glued. wasn't sure if I cared about readinga story of a guy raising children but turns out I do. keep the chapters flowing I will be reading. one of the better written novels on here also.
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