The Best Shinobi

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byovevald

I don't know why that ff has lots of positive reviews, cause I see lots of mistakes and stupid MC, who couldn't hold his opinion and thoughts inside. Just a FULL fluff story and adorable (sarcasm) drama. MC character is good and supporting, but this is ninja world. 4/5 stars. Dialogs had good written. 5/5. Plot is disgusting. 1/5. Don't like needless OC's. 3/5. Totally : 13/4 = 3,25. 3.35/5 stars.

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hero4hire

dumb mc, nt really to my liking

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arss

it's too cringe .and the way he is revealing the details to bunch of kids who can be be impulsive (especially Naruto ) is really weirding me out

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DaoistdIpKRS

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xevers

yes mc is smart in making plans, choices and a positive person. the development of the story is fast but does not leave the focus of the story which is to be the best ninja and there are no more annoying events. the other character is ok but should be deepened and yes there are plot holes how he changes and the author just closed it by making the 4th hokage as a mc role but the detail is still not enough to explain how the mc got an average person's iq for the age of 7 and the author closes it with mc studying history and that makes sense but what doesn't make sense is how the people around him accepted the change of mc too quickly and information that is not in the canon is made by the author very confusing to the reader because it is not in the canon. this is a fanfic,and for me thats ok because as long as there is a point that makes sense and the details are still there, it is good to read and one of the best for naruto fanfic in webnovel. keep going writer, your novel is made well to read .tq,dont drop and dont harem

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DaoistJ2BfOl

😓😓😓😓😓😓😓😓😓😓😓😓😓😓😓😓😓😓😓😓😓😓😓😓😓😓😓😓😓😓😓😓😓😓😓😓😓😓😓😓😓😓😓😓😓😓😓😓😓😓😓😓😓😓😓😓😓😓😓😓😓😓😓😓😓😓😓😓😓😓😓😓Dude, you have a story with potential, but have you seen naruto? Or even read the manga? At least wikipedia?

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Pooyan_Hoshyar

Keep up the good work... I like your ideas and can't wait to see what changes you'll bring in this story👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍

LV 15

Yang_Guo

As a person that has stuck through from beginning til the current chapter, I must say I am highly disappointed at the way the story is starting to go. The whole inclusion of a system after having setup such a background in the middle of the story like this, is highly a huge upstart and completely nonsensical. Especially giving it to a character that is not necessarily the main character for this fanfic. Smh.

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Daoist078441

at first, i really enjoyed this ff. but when he started chasing for harem I realised how trashy it was. even system couldn't ruin this worse than harem. i liked MCs personality, i mean, he really cares about other people.even if he could use some techniques that unrealistic, it was good anyway. but as i said, harem ruined everything.

LV 12

MalKenDov

amazing story imo. and before people complain that's it's not and doesn't deserve 5 stars. i say this to them, just because it's not perfect for your exact needs doesn't mean it's not a great book. no story should be perfect, because if it was it would be kinda of bland. the ups and downs of a story is what makes it's good imo, because then it would be a journey.

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TyWill6464

This a great story keep up good work……..

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Kirikaya_Kazuto_4649

Good Story Bro. Smart MC & Strong Story Background. I like it. 4.8/5

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Ardan_Orlando

i hope this one not to be dropped cause this good af

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Josefs012

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luckky25

woohooo let's goooo !!!!!

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david_cuenca

esto parece bueno , espero que se actualice todos los días sería genial , además si el interés amoroso fuera Tsunade estaría bueno ya que no hay tantos de esos , fánfic,,,,,, jeje ,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,

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TheOldOne_

Bruhhhhhhhhhhh……….….….…………….….….….…….…….

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DaoistUxPrwu

ngl, I was look at the cover art and though it would be a p*rno and who know we might get those scenes later on (I'm on chp 34) and the description with his talent makes you think he'd be op af but he's not he uses his talents to make up for his weaknesses and it not blow out of proportion with what he's doing. anyways keep up the good work I'm enjoying this fanfic