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Great, the writing quality of this book is not too bad but some grammar mistakes can be seen, but the story is interesting to read, I am new to web novels but I am rooting for you!
The story is awesome, but not to sound judgemental... I would have liked it more if you didn't describe more on what was happening. Like if it was a cliffhanging blurb. Well,the book's all good all the way. Come try this out, guys!💖
I love the novel, the first few chapters were lacking but it got better[img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
The story is going great, the main character's background story was sad, though I hope fate compensates for it, I'm gonna stick to the story cause it's worth it.
I think the author has enough experience reading stories about cultivation. Seeing the writing that I think flows smoothly without breaking the flow. Great start to the first chapter. Unfortunately, the chaotic chapter structure is either due to Webnovel's fault or the author's, making the reading experience less enjoyable. The use of uppercase and lowercase letters also affects the beginning of the paragraph and after the period. At least, webnovels have such a format. I've read it all the way to chapter five, and it seems like the author needs to really pay attention to the chapter structure which is really messed up. A good story doesn't seem interesting because of that kind of thing. It is deeply regretted.
Nice plot. Very believable story. Also some of your sentences are breaking into paragraphs. Maybe you could check that out. Anyway thanks for your review on mine
A very nice story. I like the pace of the story. you really got me hooked into his journey of cultivation. I would suggest you to work on your Grammer part more though. [img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
A good start that was well-written and easily immerses in the readers. The plotline seems interesting as it progresses, drawing one's attention in. Good job!
The grammar has its issue but overall the story is great. I'd appreciate if the author improved his writing but apart from that am rooting for this book, added to my library.
dear author, the story is quite captive and a good deal of time. The story of high school students always got me. The ways his life changed after break up its interesting to read. keep it up dear.......
A very well made story with strong basis that look like a superhero back story. The story doesn't stop on one part for 10 million years snd gets right to the point. Good story :]
Hello and an honest review from me. There are some minor mistakes I found like the supposed to be one paragraphs sentences were separated into a new one which makes the construct of the paragraphs a bit sloppy although your writing is neat with low grammar mistakes so keep up the good work, author👍🏻
I like the fact that the grades and cultivation levels are all conveniently listed at the start, that way, no one would get lost and even if they did, they could just go back to the first chapter. This is one basic thing that many cultivation writers tend to miss. Also, the story is great, of course it couldn't rival Super Gene or Vampire System but it's good all on its own. Great job author! Don't drop it, this is bound to come far :)
I thing this story is slow paced as author took some time to adjust in his own story.... And thats why the first few chapters are a little defferent.. But its okay as long as the story is nice and interesting... And l can tell after reading from chapter 10 that its an interesting one... Keep going author... U have a way too far to go👍👍..
In the first few chapters aren't that good. but after the chapter 10 the story progress,the chapter 17 is the best way to put it. author keep it up
Hey guys I am a new writer and don't know many things some mistake might be there, in due time my writing skills will improve. In a couple more chapters you might notice the improvement in the story and as well as the charector's, so pleas rate the book to further improvement.
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writing quality is bad, characters are annoying, if you have time then i would say you can give it a chance, who knows maybe it will fir ur taste. and i see quite a bit of fake reviews there.
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Ohhh looks like the romance and heram part will begin from the next chapter. I can't wait to read more chapters.hhhh I hope it will be more amazing
Hmmmm. Well he sure a little dumb sometimes. The story is going to the amazing romance side now. I wish it will not like those Korean drama.
Oh it's started, it's started, it's started..... Hahahaha oh my god I have been thinking when will the girls would fall for him, now it's here, looking forward to the next chapter bro
It's looks like the story is going on the right track.Ru Shi's character is quite amazing a teasing sister type.I am looking forward for the future.
There is no special characters in the novel, and any mistake, so in my opinion.. The novel has a very good storyline and interesting mc with side characters it's a good novel
Today's chapter is better the then the last one in my opinion, well I liked the forbidden fruit part mostly. Yuan was excited from the excitement that his fantasy will nw became a reality
Best plot,good relationship, Overall Perfect !! Author please continue .. ... ...
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Great, the writing quality of this book is not too bad but some grammar mistakes can be seen, but the story is interesting to read, I am new to web novels but I am rooting for you!
The story is awesome, but not to sound judgemental... I would have liked it more if you didn't describe more on what was happening. Like if it was a cliffhanging blurb. Well,the book's all good all the way. Come try this out, guys!💖
I love the novel, the first few chapters were lacking but it got better[img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
The story is going great, the main character's background story was sad, though I hope fate compensates for it, I'm gonna stick to the story cause it's worth it.
I think the author has enough experience reading stories about cultivation. Seeing the writing that I think flows smoothly without breaking the flow. Great start to the first chapter. Unfortunately, the chaotic chapter structure is either due to Webnovel's fault or the author's, making the reading experience less enjoyable. The use of uppercase and lowercase letters also affects the beginning of the paragraph and after the period. At least, webnovels have such a format. I've read it all the way to chapter five, and it seems like the author needs to really pay attention to the chapter structure which is really messed up. A good story doesn't seem interesting because of that kind of thing. It is deeply regretted.
Nice plot. Very believable story. Also some of your sentences are breaking into paragraphs. Maybe you could check that out. Anyway thanks for your review on mine
A very nice story. I like the pace of the story. you really got me hooked into his journey of cultivation. I would suggest you to work on your Grammer part more though. [img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
A good start that was well-written and easily immerses in the readers. The plotline seems interesting as it progresses, drawing one's attention in. Good job!
The grammar has its issue but overall the story is great. I'd appreciate if the author improved his writing but apart from that am rooting for this book, added to my library.
dear author, the story is quite captive and a good deal of time. The story of high school students always got me. The ways his life changed after break up its interesting to read. keep it up dear.......
A very well made story with strong basis that look like a superhero back story. The story doesn't stop on one part for 10 million years snd gets right to the point. Good story :]
Hello and an honest review from me. There are some minor mistakes I found like the supposed to be one paragraphs sentences were separated into a new one which makes the construct of the paragraphs a bit sloppy although your writing is neat with low grammar mistakes so keep up the good work, author👍🏻
I like the fact that the grades and cultivation levels are all conveniently listed at the start, that way, no one would get lost and even if they did, they could just go back to the first chapter. This is one basic thing that many cultivation writers tend to miss. Also, the story is great, of course it couldn't rival Super Gene or Vampire System but it's good all on its own. Great job author! Don't drop it, this is bound to come far :)
I thing this story is slow paced as author took some time to adjust in his own story.... And thats why the first few chapters are a little defferent.. But its okay as long as the story is nice and interesting... And l can tell after reading from chapter 10 that its an interesting one... Keep going author... U have a way too far to go👍👍..
In the first few chapters aren't that good. but after the chapter 10 the story progress,the chapter 17 is the best way to put it. author keep it up
Hey guys I am a new writer and don't know many things some mistake might be there, in due time my writing skills will improve. In a couple more chapters you might notice the improvement in the story and as well as the charector's, so pleas rate the book to further improvement.
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writing quality is bad, characters are annoying, if you have time then i would say you can give it a chance, who knows maybe it will fir ur taste. and i see quite a bit of fake reviews there.
copy of journey to become a true god smh copy of journey to become a true god smh copy of journey to become a true god smh copy of journey to become a true god smh
Ohhh looks like the romance and heram part will begin from the next chapter. I can't wait to read more chapters.hhhh I hope it will be more amazing
Hmmmm. Well he sure a little dumb sometimes. The story is going to the amazing romance side now. I wish it will not like those Korean drama.
Oh it's started, it's started, it's started..... Hahahaha oh my god I have been thinking when will the girls would fall for him, now it's here, looking forward to the next chapter bro
It's looks like the story is going on the right track.Ru Shi's character is quite amazing a teasing sister type.I am looking forward for the future.
There is no special characters in the novel, and any mistake, so in my opinion.. The novel has a very good storyline and interesting mc with side characters it's a good novel
Today's chapter is better the then the last one in my opinion, well I liked the forbidden fruit part mostly. Yuan was excited from the excitement that his fantasy will nw became a reality
Best plot,good relationship, Overall Perfect !! Author please continue .. ... ...