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The story is nice. The mc has actually been portrayed as evil. The childhood part was also good. The pace is great and the story doesn’ t feel rushed. More chapters would be preferable.
Author, I have a question but before going to that topic I wanna say that so far I've read this novel it’s worth of my time, and I hope u won't drop it and continue to update it (Btw if u become bored then just give it a rush ending it’s better to read a with trash-ending than a dropped one). And my question is will there be romance in this novel or it'll be no-romance? Imo 'single female-lead' type is better than 'harem' or 'no-romance'. Also u should've update a few chapters explaining difference realms of cultivators or mages, different cultivation manuals, levels of artifacts and potions, magical beasts etc etc before start updating main part of this novel. Anyway we hope some bonus chapters about these.
Dear Author is this novel completed? are you on a break or has this novel been dropped?
Best Crypto Recovery's Experts/RecoveryMasters My experience of online scamming took seconds and cost me thousands. I was fooled by a YouTube video that convinced me that I could make a killing in Crypto, and the minute I clicked the link and deposited funds, I knew something was up, but it was too late. I worked with Recovery Masters, and they were so helpful and supportive, and in the end, it took a few days, I got almost all of the money back. It wouldn't have been possible for me to meet up economically because I almost invested all my money but all thanks to RecoveryMasters with their genius effort to help me recover my already stolen currency. Please ensure also to consult if you need such help: RecoveryMasters via email: (recoverymasters@email.cz) or whatsapp +1(551) 202-23-35
Grammar and misspelled words are so bad I has to drop the book a few chapters in. The story itself is great though, it's a shame it's barely legible.
PUT ON YOUR BELTS and get ready u all cuz am about to start reading dis and i will gove honest review to dis ok BYE BYE see u on the other side PUT ON YOUR BELTS and get ready u all cuz am about to start reading dis and i will gove honest review to dis ok BYE BYE see u on the other side
Bro, stop it. This weft armor is thicker than adamantium. It's just wanting something that the system offers, now I understand a reader's statement saying that the system is the crutch of lazy authors
The theme is good but are u for real a two year old going and killing, okey i understand its cultivation they develop faster no big deal , but oh boy the writing is terrible. Like a good third of sentances are butcherd and dont make any sense. I forced myself to get to premium chapters in hope author got sober but it just got worse. If this novel gets edited to look like some decent art u can coment soo i come back becose as I said the theme is interesting but before that i hope i can forget what I have read.
Goodt novel but the writing quality is not good. This novel needs an editor and some improvement from the author's side too. [img=exp][img=exp]
If the parents treated him like a mental retard. It's what's in the "gene pack." But why in his new reincarnated life: didn't he die easy? (Absorb) Highlight that with only his first 20 chapters he has achieved 20,000 views... If they appreciate it, it's because it looks well done. Keep going... until you win!
it is going well .................mmmmmm..... ffgjkjfguufdjgsfjikcxvnbdtyjhaawyluay ftjgfkgffikggkcgkgfujjcgkcjjgfhvcgh alas de la tienda que vende todo junto con saludar adjunto currículum que te calles del barrio de la familia de la familia de la tienda en el futuro cancela tu propio usuario mediante
Spoiler de révélation
It has a amazing flow so far and the MC is quite refreshing it's nice to not have a good guy MC who always put himself at risk to save someone
The story is nice. The mc has actually been portrayed as evil. The childhood part was also good. The pace is great and the story doesn’ t feel rushed. More chapters would be preferable.
Author, I have a question but before going to that topic I wanna say that so far I've read this novel it’s worth of my time, and I hope u won't drop it and continue to update it (Btw if u become bored then just give it a rush ending it’s better to read a with trash-ending than a dropped one). And my question is will there be romance in this novel or it'll be no-romance? Imo 'single female-lead' type is better than 'harem' or 'no-romance'. Also u should've update a few chapters explaining difference realms of cultivators or mages, different cultivation manuals, levels of artifacts and potions, magical beasts etc etc before start updating main part of this novel. Anyway we hope some bonus chapters about these.
Dear Author is this novel completed? are you on a break or has this novel been dropped?
Best Crypto Recovery's Experts/RecoveryMasters My experience of online scamming took seconds and cost me thousands. I was fooled by a YouTube video that convinced me that I could make a killing in Crypto, and the minute I clicked the link and deposited funds, I knew something was up, but it was too late. I worked with Recovery Masters, and they were so helpful and supportive, and in the end, it took a few days, I got almost all of the money back. It wouldn't have been possible for me to meet up economically because I almost invested all my money but all thanks to RecoveryMasters with their genius effort to help me recover my already stolen currency. Please ensure also to consult if you need such help: RecoveryMasters via email: (recoverymasters@email.cz) or whatsapp +1(551) 202-23-35
Grammar and misspelled words are so bad I has to drop the book a few chapters in. The story itself is great though, it's a shame it's barely legible.
PUT ON YOUR BELTS and get ready u all cuz am about to start reading dis and i will gove honest review to dis ok BYE BYE see u on the other side PUT ON YOUR BELTS and get ready u all cuz am about to start reading dis and i will gove honest review to dis ok BYE BYE see u on the other side
Bro, stop it. This weft armor is thicker than adamantium. It's just wanting something that the system offers, now I understand a reader's statement saying that the system is the crutch of lazy authors
The theme is good but are u for real a two year old going and killing, okey i understand its cultivation they develop faster no big deal , but oh boy the writing is terrible. Like a good third of sentances are butcherd and dont make any sense. I forced myself to get to premium chapters in hope author got sober but it just got worse. If this novel gets edited to look like some decent art u can coment soo i come back becose as I said the theme is interesting but before that i hope i can forget what I have read.
Goodt novel but the writing quality is not good. This novel needs an editor and some improvement from the author's side too. [img=exp][img=exp]
If the parents treated him like a mental retard. It's what's in the "gene pack." But why in his new reincarnated life: didn't he die easy? (Absorb) Highlight that with only his first 20 chapters he has achieved 20,000 views... If they appreciate it, it's because it looks well done. Keep going... until you win!
it is going well .................mmmmmm..... ffgjkjfguufdjgsfjikcxvnbdtyjhaawyluay ftjgfkgffikggkcgkgfujjcgkcjjgfhvcgh alas de la tienda que vende todo junto con saludar adjunto currículum que te calles del barrio de la familia de la familia de la tienda en el futuro cancela tu propio usuario mediante
Spoiler de révélation
It has a amazing flow so far and the MC is quite refreshing it's nice to not have a good guy MC who always put himself at risk to save someone